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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Awesome update...

love it...

kriyaansh were superb...

Finally the mystery solved that why kriya was so angry with rey...

Rey was soo possessive and impulsive about kriya...

How can he broke the hand of a person...anger

And than he kissed her in front of everone...

and than she slapped her...

that's why kriya hates her...

and because of her mother's questions, she removed rey from blocked list to scold her...

but atleast she talked to her...

and rey was behaving as a love stuck teenager...and so was he...

and then he recorded her voice...so cute...

and after that he called her...and than they started talking...

and then again they become friends...

and then kriya again had feelings for him...

rey had changed for kriya...

and stopped calling her as per her orders...

then she herself called him to wish him for his birthday...

And then they met...

and after that...it was awesome...

they kissed...😳

sooo romantic...

love the update...

continue soon...

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Akansha1515

@Akansha1515

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

😊😊awsome update...

it was worth reading...

i really liked how u described unpredictible kriya nd her mood swings..

its was suprise to know rey and kriya were best of friends. never thought about it..

end part was hot.. loved it..

update sooon..

nd thanxxx for pm..

waiting eagerly

😊😊

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Annwesha

@sakura20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

awesom... 👍🏼
luvd d flasshback & their pure feelngs for each other...
luvd d romantic part and mostly d last kiss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

wowww it was way to amezing
update 👏
beautifulll amezing awesome
loved it kriYaansh epssso

Thank u so much for the pM

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Hi !!! Pehle toh so very sorry , i haven't been commenting on u works lately 😳...

But will do that soon 😊...

About this 4 Shot , 1st-ly the song selected is so very beautiful , Nice choice 👍🏼...

About the concept , it is really nice 👍🏼...

KR's first scene , i thought Rey is that 'Awara' types boy & Kria ko tang karne keliye aya hai 😳...

N then when he asked her to remove him from Blocked-List , I was like 'What?? 😲' 😆...

Crazy Guy!!!

Kanya , Nice character - The Pulley between KR 😉...

I like how Rey didn't eat when he came to know Kria wouldn't had had it either , Caring types ...

Kria's Mom being the 'Detective Mummy' , Bechari Kria 😆...

Sahi kiya Kria ne , Rey ko achi suna k , 2 faiday : Kria got her frustration out & Rey got to hear her voice 😉...

Rey recording Kri's scolding , He really is a crazy guy 😆...

About their Past , Bara aggressive types tha & his so very casualty , wasn't that good...

It's nice that he understood it n came back to her & became friends again 👍🏼...

End of that part was Great , Romantic types ...

I hope this isn't a dream , imagination or something ...

Well i really like this concept ❤️...

N thank you for the pm 😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

fantastic updatee👏

loveddd ittt😊

continue soonish⭐️

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RIA

@PAB-230

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

kriya kissed him😲😲😲 bt y???????????/
i'm nt getin it
pls brk de suspence nd do update nxt part as soon as possible
coming 2 ur post
i don't think i hv anything new 2 say
ITS AWESOME AS ALWAYS
I COULD ACTUALLY IMAGINE EVRY SCENE GRT JOB👏👏👏👏👏

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

hmmm...ausome update...

sooo Kriya started talking to Rey...

She removed him from his blocked list every where...

dats an ausome news...

aww..he recorded the abuses that she said to him...

he was literary listening to it tge whole night...awww...

such an agayakari ladka dat he is...

she told him not to call so he dint cald her...dats sweet...

she wished him for his bday...dats ausome...

KISSS...dat was fast... unexpected moment...

I dint knew we could get such a scene at that abondened road...

now lets see how she reacts when she realises..

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...