TENDING HIS WOUNDS! SANDHIR OS( COMPLETE!)

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hema

@froots93

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

LOL...Hema!
Am so relieved!

Thank you so very much!
Sorry for your electricity bill😆

Love you<3

electricity bill mail kar dungi !! Pay kar dena 🤣

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Reshma Ahmed

@Perpetuity

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

U are an amazing writer. I loved the way u make the characters expressed.

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everywednesday

@everywednesday

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Arre Preeti, Tu toh ekdum chhupa rustam nikli han? One hot chapter this was. God, my eyes are on fire. ;) ;)

Seriously, this is beautifully described re. That line, I really liked

"His eyes turned black as a moonless night"

Haye! Main mar jawa guddh khaake! xD Shakjespear ki chhoti behen. :D

*blush blush blush*

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Reminiscence
Arre Preeti, Tu toh ekdum chhupa rustam nikli han? One hot chapter this was. God, my eyes are on fire. ;) ;)
Seriously, this is beautifully described re. That line, I really liked
"His eyes turned black as a moonless night"
Haye! Main mar jawa guddh khaake! xD Shakjespear ki chhoti behen. :D
*blush blush blush*

Moi baby!😳

Thanks a lot Ri!<3

Shakespeare ki behen! XD

*pulls yur cheek while you blush*

Cutie😳

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Kirti

@kirtiarora111

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

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Oh my my...!!!!😆😆

I've just read this great work of yours my CHANDRAMUKHI... 🤣🤣

What a description, "cobbler boy turned street fighter turned saint"🤣🤣

"Jai jai Ram, Jai shree ram"🤣🤣

"SHE NEEDED TO TAKE CARE OF HIM TO SATISFY HERSELF"

This one was written with so much of depth.. Moi nearly drowned.. 😳😳 (This reminds me I need to resume my hindi poetry writing😆😆)

But seriously yaar, I love you sooo much for this one line... This is exactly the tone in which I talk to my friends when m in senti mode... 😃😃

She reminded of him falling in that library scene... 😆😆 Yo, sexy moma..!! 🤣🤣

Too good..!!

Aaj na chorenge tujhe, dum dama dum.. Actually a pro mane..!! 😉

Damp unused cotton pieces were lying on the floor... But Sanyu didn't accepted her defeat and still went ahead with her dupatta... 😳😳

That was shooo cute and romantic.. 😳😳

And Randhir did value her care... Moi gets emotional.. 😭😭

Mane, Randhir in such a ahemmm ahemmm mode...

Full on "Mauke pe chauka"..

such a PASSIONATE kiss...☺️☺️

He wanted to undress her mane..!! 😈😈

"She layed cocooned against his chest".. Inni cute lines kaha se lati ho mane..!! 😭😭

Moi ko rula diya...

This line is in itself a pool of expression, unspoken emotions..

Such a safe feeling of being cocooned... Being with the love your life...

On a SILENT NIGHT..!!

And, it ended, raising above the heavenly feelings... 👏

Awechum...👏👏

Thumbs up from my side..!!

And you're indeed a pro at presenting Mature stuff...

Kisko ullu banaoing??? 😆😆

*Me going near your cupboard, opening it, u gives me a devil laughter, moi drags u off the cupboard, gives u a tight wali bear hug...* 🤗🤗

Lub ju dost..!!!

P.S. Don't ask me the why I called you CHANDRAMUKHI...!!😆😆

Never expect me to write such long comments again...

This one is the longest one ever by me.. 😆😆😆

And moi loves you very very very very very much...

One tight wali jhappi.. 🤗

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Tulip.
U are an amazing writer. I loved the way u make the characters expressed.

Thank you :-)

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whinyteen96

@whinyteen96

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

Its dettol all the way around,,
Savlon never stings,..
U must be dreaming😛

My bad then...

I was under the impression that you mentioned Savlon first followed by Dettol...Whatever. Fuhget it! 😆

Must be the aftereffects of reading too much! 🤓

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Preetika

@DamselinDistres

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sniggybabes
Res unres

preeti!!!!!!

aag laga di thune lappy pe!

3 4 balti paani bhi kam padgaye!!!!!!!!1

amazing work yaar

love you! 😉❤️