Well I am glad that we know Lavanya's intentions towards Khushi. The beginning of CH 15 was wonderful. Loved the way you described all that she was going through and thinking. Boy is La gonna be bummed when she finds out that Arnav is her COUSIN 😆. Anyway I hope he puts her in her place soon. Can't wait for that confrontation.
You know what I would have preferred to read about the trip, so many things could have happened there. But sigh, you are the author and you know your story best so not complaining.
CH 16 was really insightful. There is so much going here, the two most important things are that Khushi now knows that he runs another company and the dynamics between ArShi have changed 😳
You kept it quite realistic by not making Khushi force the food down his throat, the various dishes she makes for him hoping that he would atleast eat something was sweet and considerate. She knew her place and didnt say a word to him about not eating till the very last moment. Very natural and realistic. What I loved about Arnav as well was that even though he lost his temper he makes amends. This is the main difference between your ASR and the one from the show, he was just too arrogant and unbending no matter if its his fault whereas the one in your tale is not blinded by his status/ego and apologises to all.
You got me worried with the title of the next Ch. Oooh I hope Khushi is out of the betrayal part.
Thanks for the PMs. Do write soon! You already have so many pages of comments and likes that you can see for yourself how excited the readers are 👍🏼
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