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segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

I have been waiting for this update. I liked it. Garima's despondency comes thru. unfortunately she doesn't take into account how her world view affects her daughters.

I liked the Yamraj and Chitragupta names

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@...Champ...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

I really couldn't stop from asking is this really your first work? I mean seriously? You are doing it well...absolutely fantastic. 👏 And you would be joking when you say this is your first piece of work. Your really too good.😉

The story, is processing too well. The prologue really did hooked me up. The conditions of Arnav and the worst situations of Khushi were very briefly yet clearly explained both their inner struggles and Khushi's outer struggles.

Arnav is understanding guy here. Remind me of his temper too please. Coz I seem to forget about that when I see him all caring and understanding. I really am loving how Arnav's plains are laid, perfect, confident and too plotting. I'm sure his motive is going to be succeed very soon with the young team he appointed the works with.

And Khushi intelligence is something over the par. It's really amazing to know how much she's gathered the knowledge just by working under the old man. He's truly a gift for her. And really a bit hats off to Khushi's intelligence. I'm sure now she will be passing her exams easily.

Arnav's advises in the middle, then his family time with all back in Delhi, Khushi's still lingering problems at home, the young team's work everything is so captivating and intriguing. I'm really loving the way it's going.

Hey I have a question clogging my mind, since I started reading this story. Are you a accounts student? And by any chance a CA? Maybe a business student? Sorry if you're not. I'm just asking. Because the grip you have on the accounts and financial things is clearly shown in the updates.

Anyways UPDATE SOON! I will be waiting for the next update how's the young team going to prove themselves out.

Edited by Lucky_arshi - 11 years ago

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sanam

@sanamsky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

I just love this story it is too good love it n thank u so much for long update

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esamoe

@esamoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Its quite sad how Khushi's mother is putting her down and blaming her just because they father wallked out she suppose to be encouraging her to get qualified so they can live a better life,Khushi already a up so much for them the least she could get was her mothers constant love nd support!

Loved how Arnav handled the whole situation and advised her.

I'm so happy kushi wrote her exams and soon will be qualified!