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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Arnav's reflection of his past was so painful and both the siblings having lasting effects from their childhood trauma. So we get to meet his family and Aman now.

Love that you have set your story at the time before his success so we are able to see how hard he is working towards that and climb the ladder of success with him. I am so impressed at this intelligence and strategy. I love the office oriented slant in this story.

One day Deepak and NK can go back to same conference and show everyone what their branch can do.

I wish there had been more Arnav and Khushi time but loved their thoughts about what the other is doing and Arnav's eagerness to return...and now he only likes coffee made by her...lol.

When will you update again? Make it soon?

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Finally you are back.

I loved how Arnav and Khushi missed each other and their phone convo.

Eagerly looking forward to next update. I would like to know what happens bet Arnav and Khushi bet these 6 months too! 😛

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zafi

@zafi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Awesome update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I loved it.❤️

So Arnav has gone home to his family for the weekend.

He misses Khushi and her coffee.

Khushi is missing Arnav as well.

I thought it was sweet of Arnav to call Khushi.

I am looking forward to reading more.

Thanks.😃

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aspatel2

@aspatel2

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Really nice ff and concept.pls cont soon

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Rimi

@Rimi_BS

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

thats awsome update..i m loving this story...
continue soon...

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Sheetal

@Prettycool

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Loved it !! Most of all love the "subtle love equation" changes in thr relation.. I always admire subtle romance like the one in movie "swades" whr you don't need physical display(not against it but..) of love to be loved. Love which spoke without words between two soul, love is understanding, trust and gratitude for each other which can be communicate through eyes or presence or few words like you have shown here like incidence like eating with fork ,crave- pausing for second more without dispatching smile but asking for mug full coffee (crave which mind and heart both understand and whole heatedly except it) .. Hope ur workload ease off soon and you update soon would love to c story is heading wt 6months leap..

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awww arnav eats pizza with hand for khushi

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

mind blowing chpater

the way arnav missed khushi and her coffee..

he preponed his trip, coming back early

like the way he said coffee in tall mug to her

then the way he told nk what had happen with them in conference

looking forward

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Very nice update... A very balanced chapter of the past , the present and future endeavors...

It was very nice to know that both Khushi and Arnav are getting along well and unknowingly getiing attached to each other... A small gesture but very adorable that Arnav has become habituated to Khushi made coffee...Both were getting restless without each others presence...

Arnav has started to execute his plans to ruin his uncle...His business acumen would definately help him get his desired..

Very well written.. Continue soon !!