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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjana.sanju

wow it was an amazing start, d way u describd der past was beautiful.. Ur best friend is ur soulmate.. I am sad dat dey got seporated bt as said seporation is a fertilizer of love -lol- anyway nice cnspt, and thanx fr d pm : )


Thanksss Sanju di ⭐️⭐️
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Originally posted by: muskaataarey

Awsum story
jst loved it
update soon.. 😊


Thankkuuu ^_^
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Originally posted by: ANURADHATAAREYS

Nice start iam ur big fan when i was not member of this forum
i know u through fb


Heyaa..!! Well can u tell me FB username?
* HUGS *
Its an amazing moment when someone claims to be ur FAN ❤️
Thanksss 😛

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Originally posted by: _PanCake_

Wow amazing story :*

Update soon...


Ah..U read it thats a big deal 😉😉
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Thankss dea 😛
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Originally posted by: scarletmalik

nice starting

loved it
continue soon


Will post next part asap 😉
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Thankss..!! I m happy after being so irregular u are still tuned in 😛
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Shukriya 😉😆
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Heyaa IFies..!! Me back with an update 😊 Chalo chalo..!! Read fast fast n reviews plzz 😉😊




Chahhat kept her pen down..And went to sleep..!!

Today She is a 23 yrs grl...Grown up..She is Marketing associate in a company...And is happy with the present..but somewhere deep inside her heart she still longs for her BEST FRIEND..
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It was a random day of Chahhat life's..According to her monotonous schedule she was waiting for the bus to return home...But today the bus was crowded..She had to fight the crowd to enter..But she was an independent girl..Though she could manage to enter the bus..But suddenly she saw somethng n got down the bus..

She saw an old couple struggling to enter the bus..But everytym they reached the gate they were shrugged off..

She got down n Helped them to get in..As a result she had to miss the bus...She came n sat at her place on the bus stop..And started going through her playist..For during this journey only Her Songs were her companion..

Though she was calmly waiting fr the bus but the fact was that she was chilling due the 5C temp..And to add on it..It began to rain..It was the month of December..!!

She whishpered-:Winter Rains <3
And again she stepped into the land of memories..The winter rain during the picnics of the school..The memory of her and Avigyan dancing their steps on the drops of rains..
Chahhat-:Barish
Avigyan-:Haa <3
Chahhat-:Mujhe bhigna hai..
Avigyan-:T chalo..
After having played in rain when they came back under the shed
Chahhat-I m feeling cold..
Avigyan lends her his blazer..
Chahhat-:Ahem..Ahem..Somebody is becoming a gentleman :D
Avigyan-:Lao wapis do..

His laughter..Her gigles echoed in her ears..While She never knew that while the clouds were shedding rains her eyes began shedding tears </3 :(

She missed him..Missed him like hell..She wanted to hold him tight so that nobody cud ever separate them..She though had reconcilled her..but inside the separation..his memories still shatter her..Haunt her.!!

A unknow yet known voice distracted her and brought her out of the swoon..!

Can you tell me what are the timings of next bus to Hugly(The same station of hers)
Chahhat-Yeah its in 15 mins..
Chahhat's P.O.V-Thoguh he was unknown yet it felt so known..It felt like connection..I thought to intiate a convo..I know that one should not be frindly with stranger but pta nhi dil ne dimag ki suni hi nhi..

Chahhat-Even I am waiting fr the same bus..
Boy-Oh..Actually i am new in this city..Or indeed i Should say back in my city after 7 years..!!
Chahhat-Oh..I am Chahhat..
Boy-I am "Avi"
Chahhat froze for a second..The world seemed to come to a standstill to her..That name "Avi"...Since even she use to call Avigyan, Avi...!!

Just then the bus arrived..We both boarded the bus..
Avi-:May i..(He asked her to sit beside her)
Chahhat-:Ya..
Chahhat's P.O.V-I donno y I allowed him to sit besides me..But there was a air of comfort arround him..I felt a sense of comfort around him..That day I didn't hear to my usual playlist...For i was conversing with him..!!
Chahhat-Its my stop next..
Avi-Ours
They both got down the bus..bade each other adieu..
Like every day she wrote her diary today..
"Today..I met a stranger..He was handsome..His name is AVI..Head to Heel He was tip top..bilkul MODERN GENTLEMAN...But his eyes reflected an innoncence..Those deep hazel eyes..They so remind me of Avigyan..And dear diary pta nhi kyu kuch ajeeb nhi laga..Anjana nhi laga..apna sa laga...Aisa laga ki bus yehi hai.."

~Avigyan--Today is 7 yrs n 1 day of our separation..U knw diary when i was coming back it rained I so missed him..U remember humara school picnic..
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Avi was lying on the bed thinking abt her..
Avi(in his mind)-Water droplets all over her face..Shivering with cold..There she was..I wanted to talk to her..I never wanted dis journey to come to an hault..I never did..


"Kuch jana anjana ehsas hai ,
Dil Janata nhi par chahta tera sath hai,
Yeh dil hai,Sab is dil ki muskil hai."
Hope i meet her again..
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*******NEXT EVENING*******
Chahhat was again standing at the same bus stop while returning from her work..She was continously watching her watch..It finally stroke 7..She looked till the end of the road but he was seen nowhere...She missed her first bus and waited for the second one..

Chahhat's POV-NAhi aya wo..Oye to tujhe itna bura kyu lag rha hai..He was a stranger..Lo ab yeh bhi bus agai..Chalo nhi to ghr nhi ja paegi..!!

Chahhat boraded the bus and went home..!!

*****7 days from then****

The same bus stop

Avi-:Hey
Chahhat-Hie..U..?
Avi-:Yeah..
Chahhat-:Did u come today after that day..?

Chahhat's POV-: Oppss..Wht did I ask him..Agar usey yeh laga ki I am checking him out to..?
Avi-:Yeah..
Avi's POV-:Was she missing me..?

Just then the bus arrived they bth boarded the bus..!!

Today was no special..They just talked abt each others whereabouts n general thngs..

Chahhat's Dairy:

"I met him again..When i saw him I felt like jumping with joy..And pta hai diary in excitement maine usey pucha ki wo itne din kaha tha..Kahi wo Yeh to nhi sochega na ki I was stalking him"
Hope ki I meet him again..

In seven years there was not a single day when Chahhat wrote nothng abt AVIGYAN..But today she wrote nothng abt him..!! :O

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Has Chahhat frgtn him(Avigyan).?
Will they meet again..?? Was it meant only till here..?? To read more Stay tuned :)
Edited by -ChaHHat- - 11 years ago

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