Unknowingly /On Hold/ Note on Page 1 - Page 20

That was really very well written!

brilliant update...so they caught the culprits...very good action story...

ahaan...

What an action packed updt lk watching movie i hv no complain about ur story am enjoying it tanx for pm

fantastic update
i really like this heroic khushi it adds a certain charm to her character . u write wonderfully and i really like this storyline .
update d next part soon

I love th action scenes.
Wonderful update

i think from now on arnav will understand khushi's point of view n try to know her more, continue soon...

loved the update

wow...ur note had more action then the update action scene ...hehehe... *peace* just kidding

i think in my previous comment, i wasnt able to express my emotions properly...apologies for that...

by filmy what i mean was that is how I am able to read that character, doesnt mean u have to change it...but that is exactly how I perceive her...and unfortunately as per my logic, a brooding reserved kindoff police person will not say such cheesy dialogues...it doesnt go according to her personality...but again thats my POV...if urs doesnt match with me, its totally fine...

also ur khushi in unkowningly I, was also a little filmy, but that used to suit that character, since she was a musician n a dancer, inshort a rockstar :)

anyways, i always think that i shud give my honest opinion on any updates...and thats what i did...those were my honest emotions, after reading the update...if u dont like such critical comments, then i will refrain from writing any comments in future...esp since u have asked me to stop reading 😛...which i am guilty of doing at this moment...yes I am guilty of reading chapter 13 and 14 and i must say before i bid adios that the update was really good...the action scene came out very well...and Khushi's emotions were also more clear...and yes, as a police woman, she will use curse words n swear a lot n also kick more ass...that is how they are...but that is a natural reaction...

hope u understand my point...ciao

Awesome up date !!!
Thnx for the pm...