BAS YUHIN (arsh ff) ch 7 page 23 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Shilpa part is emotional...😔

Hehe this armaan na always a prankstar...😉

Happy to know that he remmber her...👍🏼

Waiting for nxt part so update soon and this time try to update a big chapter...😃

Originally posted by: dmegha

EEE...How could I miss such an amazing FF?😲

Scratching my head I realized, Oh, I was busy with my own crazy stuff..

Well from where should I start now!! Oh yes..

OMG OMG OMG OMG!! That was an amazingly superb start..hayee I actually fell in love with the intro you gave..loved both the lines..

"Iss zindagi mein kya mujhe kissi ko apna kehne ki khushi milegi!" and "Mujhe nahi lagta main usse kabhi bhool paunga..kabhi aage badh paunga!" Girl who had me hooked to this FF at that moment!

Reading those lines, I was like..wow..aww..that was beautifully expressed!

Then came the Intro chappy, and I was like..ab kya hoga, ab kya hoga?😆😳 But jo hua, achha hua, so Shilpa got Armaan's case, and those nurses, drooling over how handsome and sexy armaan is!😲🤣 ,and that patient no. 22 thing..that kind of reminded me of Salmaan-Kareena's movie, "Kyon Ki"

And Armaan is sooo cute..aawwiiee.😳, he didn't ate that food because Shilpa wasn't there with him...super duper cute!😳

And those dialogues, "Tum kha kyun nai rahe. Achcha nai hai kya aaj ka khana"

"Bracelet tum nai hoti to mujhe achcha nai lagta ,kahan chali jaati ho baar baar"

I felt like aawwiing at that moment but again you beat me to it!

"Mein to hamesha tumhare saath hoon , bas baaki logo thoda datna padta hai kabhi taki who tumhe pakad ke na rakhe"

" sahi karti ho aur peeta bhi karo baar baar mujhe aake pakad lete hai aur koi kaam hi nai"

Hayee re becharae hospital waala😆🤣 ab in ke chakkar mein maar bhi khao!😆

And then there was a cute little promise, oh my, this innocent baby like Armaan is effecting me a lot☺️ hayee re my naughty thoughts😆

and kahaani toh abhi shuru hui thhi, Shilpa is so much concerned for Armaan that she went to Sanjeevni, to meet Dr. Shashank and others! Such a kind heart-ed and courageous girl she is.

Armaan pataofying Shilpa to get more chocolates than those bitter medicines!!😆 Banda ne harkatein nahi chodi apni🤣 Even if he's behaving like a kid, he pretty much knows how to woo a pretty lady doctor! Kambhkhat jaan le lega meri!😆☺️

And that, "Miss Bracelet, apna bracelet kissi ko bhi nahi deti!", isse ladkiyaan pasand hain I get that, but unki accessories bhi!🤣 I too want a shiny bracelet for me!😳

And thank god, Dr. Shashank wasn't being selfish. And Sid-Shilpa relationshp and convo was the second best part of the whole update, well the first best was Armaan pataofying Shilpa for chocolates😳😆

The promo had me jumping here and there because of anxiousness ki jaane ab kya hoga? Akshu, I hope I can call you that, can I? Well, you are an amzing, fantastic, superb and mind-blowing writer! OK so Armaan and Riddhima had trust issues agreed, Riddhima is probably angry at Shashank for hiding things and stuff, especially regarding Armaan from her, but what about Shilpa, what exactly happened with her?😕😃

And that letter😭, that made me cry. But then again you brought a huge grin on my face, loved ArSh gifts waala part, she gave him chocolates and comics. I felt bad for Armaan, for what he had went through that made him scared of his favorite comic books even😭😔

And Shilpa got hurt so many times! And finally the operation did happened! Loved the little convo between Armaan and Shilpa, the way she gave him her bracelet and he so happily started playing with it, but then again she said that it's for his luck, her lucky charm😃

What the most fantastic thing was that, Armaan recognized her, thank god! I had my breath hitched at the thought, what if Armaan didn't recognized her but finally meri saans mein saans tab aayi, jab Armaan called her, "Shona"👍🏼❤️

And Armaan's, "Ye to sachme bohot lucky hai,ab mera hai"😳Hayyee mar jawan!😆😳

All in one;😆

It is an incredible FF.😃👏

Continue soon.😈😆😃

Thanks for the PM🤣

Originally posted by: OindrilaVirgoan

Looks like its my official "complaining" day!!

Sabse big complaint - tum itne dino baad birdie ki tarah urr ke aati ho..fir itna chutku sa update dekar furr ho jati ho..No Fair..

Abhi toh theek hai am busy with exam and prep all but once they get over with, am gonna complain a hell lot more if you dont give us big big updates, ji haan!!

Next..I loooved this part..totally loooved!!

You have portrayed Shilpa's emotions so bloody brilliantly!!

Her angst, anxiety, heartbreak, surety that once Armaan gets operated he's totally gonna forget her..and yet she steels herself for what is going to come..but she's only human..very obviously she's gonna break down..and yet, she's with Armaan at every step of the way..preparing him for what is to come!! It was beautifully done, baccha 👍🏼

And that was sooo very sweet of her..when she gave him her bracelet as a lucky charm!!

And then the moment of truth..Shilpa was damn sure that he wasn't going to remember her at all, just like the previous patient of hers!! And I felt terrible when she cried her out..

but HolyLord!! What a shocker!!!

He actually did remember her..trust me when I say this I was totally grinning like an idiot beacuse he remembered the her..that bracelet is truly special!! ❤️

All in all..this update made me very happy!! 😃

Now start working on the next chappy soon and please do make it a bit more lengthy prettyy please!!!

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

I had come across this story today and I must say it reminded me of the move ~ Kyun Ki ❤️

Really beautiful. The relation between the patient and doctor was so beautifully portrayed! 👏 I just awwed when Armaan lay on her lap the day before she left. 😳

Shilpa knows Sid? Okay.. This is gonna be interesting! 😕 I'm so happy that Armaan remembered Shilpa. Now the ArSh Moments would start.

Please give longer updates and do PM me when you update! 😊

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Initially I felt the story will take a new turn and ArSh will start again all-together but great that Armaan still recognizes his Shona