BAS YUHIN (arsh ff) ch 7 page 23

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HELLO EVERYONE😊 im akshita n hv thougt of writting a story on arsh beingone of thier biggest fan... i noe they hv awesome writters n i dnt noe if ill match the standards😕 bt i actually wanted to write this...so here i present

BAS YUHIN...

IS zindagi kya kabhi mujhe wo khushi milaegi kisi ko apna kehne ki...

Kisi ki life mein important rehne ki...

SOMWHERE THERES A DEEP PAIN; A PAIN OF NOT BELONGING TO SOME ONE ...A PAIN OF LONLINESS

Mujhe nai lagta ki mein kabhi usko bhula paunga ...kabhi apni zindagi dobara shuru kar paunga...

SOMEWHERE THERE ARE BROKEN PIECES OF HEART; A PAIN OF LOOSING SOMEONE WHO MENT THE WHOLE WOLD...

It's a story of two souls never ment to love n yet who loved each other ... It's a story oftheir past mystries n their LOVE...

plz do tell me how it is n should i cont or not😲



INDEX...

concept - above

intro page 1 {6 post}

chap 1 page 2

chap2 page 3

promo page 5

chap 3 page 6

chap4 page 8

chap5 page12

chap6 page17

promo page 21

chapter 7 page 23


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the intro!!
And do continue with it..would love to read more 😃
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thanku il be continuin it asap...
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Wow..
Awesome concept..
Continue soon...
And please pm me
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finally.. here i go with ch1 plz do comment n tell me how it is...
INTRO

JEEVAN MENTAL CARE HOSPITAL,PANCHGANI

Patient no.20 Ambika Kaur

Patient no.21 rajan

Patient no.22 ARMAAN MALIK

Nurse1 :that patient no 22 aree that armaan isnt he handsome

Nurse 2:very I mean look at his eyes yaar ocean blue his bodybuilt n u noe once he use to be a renowd docter ... God knows wat happened to such a guy...

This was like a topic for everyone among the hospital staff about the most goodlooking patient. Nurses use to love caring fr him but use to run away as his mental status was not more than any 5 year old...

JEEVAN HOSPITAL CONFRENCE HALL...

Hello interns

Ihv called u here to tell u abt the new senior doct SHILPA MALHOTRA. Guys she's important fr our hospital as she is one of the most talanted docters...she has not only specialised in this field but is a good cardilogist too. So guys I exept u to behave in front of her as she is a bit strict.

N here she came; its been 2 hours she's been entered to the hospital n it was preety gud though she knew all the male interns were gawking at her ...n she was somewhere a lil proud for it ; her red simple suit ,shiny black hair wich were tied in a loose braid ; flawless skin ,see green eyes were making her look like a proffesional but not less than a exeptional beauty ... but the only thing bothering her was that she had just entered here n yet she got the most difficult patient ; patient no. 22 she reached till the gate of the room n sighed loudly... uhhh how she hates no. 22 it makes her remmember something ;so making a face she entered the room without knowing what was stored for her next.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow..

Awesome concept..
Continue soon...
And please pm me

thanx megha m trying pm u but i think thers a problum any ways i ll keep trying
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Originally posted by: unishaz

interesting concept.. Continue soon..

thanku a lot...
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hey the concept sounds intresting...
do continue n add me to ur pm list. ..
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Interesting concept,loved it,pls do cont soon n add me to ur pm list
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here's chapter1 hope you guys like it

Chapter1

Its been 2 months, from last 2 months she's taking care of armaan not as his docter but as his bestfriend ...ummm bestfriend wont be the right word to define but it was something... this patient.. o no... not a patient Armaan.Armaan has something in him some pain behind his innoscence, those big blue eyes were mirror of his emotions which held a different kind of helplessness a different kind of pain...pain of loosing something ,something so precious as it was the only thing he had in the world...her heart was gone for his pain n she knew it was related to a girl as once he uttered a girl's name very inaudiable while in his sleep which started with Ri... Coming back to present... in her company he was healing soon... Healing in the sense his mind was getting ready for the risk of operation... The last hope of him getting better... But she could'nt deny the fact that she was scared to the core thinking what if he dint make it ... What if the operation went unsuccessfull ... what if... what if he... died NO she shuddered at the thought. Unknowingly this person has created a strong position in her heart a. a heart which she had secured since she was a kid... memories again fled back to her childhood n she soon shooed away them... Her mind again started thinking about armaan ... this small string which attaching all his emotions to her's was unabling her to take the decision...little did she knew the string was very strong at it was the string of pain..wchich is much stronger than any string of attraction.. finally she decided to give 3 months more as she needed to noe abut his past... only then she can make him permanently fit...n she couldn't take any risk when it came to him

Mam patient no 22 is not eating his food he his saying he wnts to meet you he's getting out of control should we give him a shock...her mind drifted away from the thoughts ... she kept the cup of coffee which she was drinking a while ago loudly on the table n turned around furiously...

Are you out of your mind ... First you cant control a patient then you talk about giving him unnecessary

Shocks huh just go m coming... nurse stammered n went away while she calmed down her sences n proceeded towards his room... she hated seeing him getting shocks whenever he cried she cried with him whenever he was left like a lifeless body on that bed she was the one who comforted him...its was only two times he got the shock therapy since she ws here ... with her around he was always in control n she always use to protect him.everyone in hospital knew who strict she was when it came to armaan n she always lied that she is always this strict about her work

She entered the room n signaled everyone to go out...

"Tum kha kyun nai rahe. Achcha nai hai kya aaj ka khana"

Armaan-"Bracelet tum nai hoti to mujhe achcha nai lagta ,kahan chali jaati ho baar baar"

shilpa-"Mein to hamesha tumhare saath hoon , bas baaki logo thoda datna padta hai kabhi taki who tumhe pakad ke na rakhe"

Ar-" sahi karti ho aur peeta bhi karo baar baar mujhe aake pakad lete hai aur koi kaam hi nai"

Sh-"waise armaan mein teen dinon ke liye bahar jaa rahi hoon parson subha tak aajaungi ". She told himwhile making him eat his "kyun" he aksed with big eyes which were not ready to leave her how could she tell him that she was going to Mumbai to search about his past she had already talked to Dr shashank about it...

Coming back from her thoughts she said-" woh kuch imp kaam hai tum batao tumhe kya chahiye"

"Tum" he said with his ever so husky honey coated voice but as she looked at him his eyes still contained the innoscence of 5 year old...

Ummm mein tumhare liye ekk bohot special si chees le ke aaungi... but ek shart pe tum in teen dinon mein tum kisi ko pareshaan nai karoge, ull not be angry at anyone, eat ur food on time n behave like a good boy promise. Woh dr Nitin haina who tumhare saath rahnge kkk

"Promise"he said by the time he had finished his food n he slept keeping his head on her lap.

From Tommorow there would be a new journey to start...

Edited by harshiakshi - 11 years ago

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