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Pyar Ka Ehsaas

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Armaan malik The young dynamic charming dashing 28 yrs old workacholic businessman ...jo kabhi galti sey bhi hasta nahi ..subha sham sirf kaam kaam aur sirf kaam ...armaan ki life bohot hi dull n boring hai ...ussey aise lagta hai ki iss duniya mey paisa hi sab kuch hai ...lakhon ladkiya dewani hai uskey peechey par uski dictionary mey pyar naam ki koi word hai hi nahi ...uski khyal sey pyar sirf waste of tme hai aur jo pyar karney waley hai vo pagal hai ...par par vo apney chote bhai rahul sey dheer sara pyar karta hai usey har musibat sey bachata hai ...musibat means ladkiya hahah ..armaan ka ye sochna hai ki uskey pasion keyliye koi ladki rahul ko phasa leygi aur sari property gup karjayegi ...bt rahul koi bakri nahi hai jo koi usey phasa leygi dnt knw ye baat kab samjheyga armaan ko...dnt knw kab pyar ka ehsaas hogi usey ...

Rahul malik25 yrs old charming stud of z college ...degree toh kabhki khatam hogayi par vo aaj bhi college jata hai phir sey usi class mey bhaita hai pata hai kyun ... hmm kyun ki college ki sari ladkiya marti hai rahul pey aur rahul bhi almost sab pey marta hai u c bada sa dill hai uska ...vo har week ek grl frnd banata hai aur armaan uska jabardasti break up karvata hai phir bhi himmat nahi harta rahul .. vo dill aur jaan sey mehnat karkey nayi nayi grlfrnds banata hi rehta hai jasie usney kassam khayi hai ki armaan ko pareshan karney ka hahaha ...rahul sirf 3 saal chota hai armaan sey bt armaan aise behve karta hai ki rahul abhi bhi 3 saal ka chotu baby hi hai bt armaan kya janey ye chotu baby aftr making lots n lots of grlfrnd fell in luv wiz muskan ...muskan key saat rahul thoda jayda hi serious hai finally usey sacha wala pyar hohi gaya aur usey shadi bhi karna cahta hai ...bt kya armaan rahul ki shadi honey deyga ummm sochna padeyga ...

Riddhima gupta sweet n caring beautiful 23 yrs old studying M.B.A ... jo har pal muskurati rehti hai ... uski muskurahat dekhkey phool bhi khil uthtey hai ...vo ek smple si ladki hai jo sochti hai ki ek raj kumar ayega aur usey doli mey bhitakey leyjayega par riddhima pehley apni behan muskan ki shadi karna cahti hai aur phir vo kyun ki riddhima key maa baap bachpan mey hi ek train accident mey godji key pass cahleygaye tabh sey wizout any supprt usney apni behan muskan ko sambhala hai aur khud ko bhi ...sab realtives sirf unki property keyliye natak karney agaye they bt riddhima ney sabko jhadu dekhakey bhaga diya aur muskan ko sambhala ..vo 18 yrs ki thi jab maa baap ko khoya aur muskan 17 yrs ki ..do jawan ladkiyon ka iss duniya mey akele jeena bohot hi muskil hota hai par jab dill mey ho himmat toh kuch bhi muskil nahi hai iss duniya mey ...abh uski zindagi mey kya hoga dekhna padeyga hmm...

Muskan gupta bubbly n chirpy 22 yrs old studying M.BA 1st yr ...muskann apni badi behan sey bohot bohot jayda pyar karti hai aur unkey dost rahul sey kuch aur jayda hi pyar karti hai hahahah ...ye baat riddhima ko bhi pata hai kyun ki dono behney kuch nhi chupati ek dusrey sey par riddhima cahti hai ki muskan fst studies pura karley zen vo uski shadi karvadeygi ...bt muskan cahti hai ki pehley riddhima shadi karley zen vo n isss baat ko leykey almst har roj dono behno mey mahabharat chid jati hai abh bhagwan hi janey pehley kiski shadi hogi ...

Toh yeh hai iss kahani key main 4 characters ...abh inki life kaise kasie twists n turns leyti hai vo aap sab ko lil by lil pata chalta jayega

Malik mansion

Armaan dinning table par rahul keyliye intezaar kar raha hai peechley 1 hr sey ...malik mansion mey dheer sarey rules hai unmey sey ek hai raat ko saat saat dinner karna bt rahul ka ata pata nahi abh tak 11 bajh rahey hai clock mey... armaan clock ko gussey sey dekhey jaraha hai ek nazar clock ek nazar door pey ...armaan bohot punctual hai uska haar kaam waqt pey hota hai aur yehi baat vo apney chotey bhai rahul ko sikhaney ki khosis karta hai par vo hai ki sikhta hi nahi ...armaan ka gussa satve asman par pohcah raha hai abh ...ye dekhkey unkey naukar ramu kaka kehtey hai

Ramu kaka:aap khalo beta ...bohot late horaha hai ...sayad rahul baba aaj nahi ayengey aaj ...

Armaan:nahi kaka ...aap jantey ho nah ...pura din hum dono hi apni apni life mey busy rehtey hai sirf dinner time hi vo mujhsey milta hai ...thodi baat hoti hai uskey saat aap jakey sojoav mai intezaar karunga

Ramu kaka:thik hai beta par ek baat kahun ...

Armaan:umm boliye...

Ramu kaka:rahul baba badey hogaye hai beta ..aap usey chotey bachey ki tarha samjhatey ho ...jo sayad unko pasnad nahi aap unsey ek dost ki tarha baat karo samjhaov

Armaan:vo chota hi hai kaka ...din bhar ladkiyon key saat ghumna ...kitni

Armaan kuch aur bolne hi wala hota hai ki rahul ajata hai ...armaan clock ki taraf dekhkey puchta hai "itna late kyun huva rahul"

Rahul ko lagat hai ki vo apney ghar nahi college ki principle key room mey hai jo uski khabar ley rahey hai ...rahul koi jawab nahi deyta aur chup chap apni chair mey bhait jata hai aur kehta hai

"ramu kaka jaldi serve karo pet mey chuhe running race kar rahey hai"

Armaan:sternly)mai kuch puch raha hun rahul ...tumhey kitni bar kaha hai dinner pey thik 10 bajey ajaney keyliye ...aaj kyun late huva aur tumhara mobile kyun switch off hai ...din bhar college mey kya kartey ho tum ...tumhari m.b.a puri hogayi abhi mere saat business kyun nahi join kartey ...din bhar ladkiyon key saat ghuma phirna aur ghar late ana ...grow up rahul tum chote bachey nahi ho abh ...

Rahul: wah wah kya parathey banye apney kaka ...maazza agaya apki biwi toh lucky hai lagta hai apney parathey khilakey hi unko latuu banaya hoga ...ummm ek aur donah aaj bohot bhuk lagrahi hai ...

Armaan:rahulll

Rahul:bhai mai yehi huna ...kyun chila rahey ho ...aap bhi khaov nah parathey kitney tasty hai ...

Armaan:pehley tum mere sawalon ka jawab do kaha they abh tak ...

Rahul:kyun apko nahi pata mai kaha tha ...abh tak apko khabar nahi pohchi kya ... apka james bond thik haina

Armaan:kya mathlab ...kya bakwas kar rahey ho

Rahul:arrey mathlab apka vo jamesbond 007 ...arrey wahi mr. varma jo din raat mai kahan kahan kya karta hun kiske saat baat karta hun sab ki report apko deytey haina... i knw bhai aap meri pal pal ki khabar rakhtey ho abh aap jantey ho ki mai kaha tha toh phir sey bolkey tme waste kyun karna ...

Armaan:angrily)aur jo tum aaj kal kar rahey ho ...usey tme waste nahi hota ...kab tumhey samjhmey ayega har ek sec important hota hai life mey money n tme bohot hi kimti hai...aur ye muskan kaun hai rahul ...

Muskan ka naam sunkey at first rahul ghabra jata hai phir khud ko sambhal key kehta hai

"kyun varma ney nahi bataya vo kaun hai ..."

Armaan:mai tumhari muh sey sunah cahta hun ...vo kaun hai rahul ...

Rahul:bhai do u really think mai muskan key barey mey sab kuch apko batadunga ...aap bas itna jaan lo ki vo iss khandan ki chotu bahu hai

Armaan:rahul mujhey gussa math diloav ...

Rahul:aap ko kyun gussa araah hai bhai ...gussa toh mujhey hona cahiye aap mere peechey detectives lagatey ho... aur apko pata hai grl frnd banahney mey kitna tme lagta hai aur kitna mehnat par aap bas ek chutki mey meri grlfrnd ki dill ko iss tarha thodtey ho ki vo mera shakal toh dur ki baat hai atleast ph pey baat tak nahi karti koi ...apko pata hai kuch ladkiya sirf meri dost thi jst frnd nt a grl frnd apney unkey saat bhi ...bhai ye sab jantey huye do u seriously think ki mai apko muskan ki details dunga ...abh tak mai chup tha bhai par abh nahi ... i m serious fr muskan aur mai usey pyar karta hun shadi karna cahta hun ...plzz aap aur apka vo jamesbond meri muskan sey dur raho ...

Ye kehkar rahul apney room mey chala jata hai ...armaan gussey sey ph nikalta hai aur varma ko dail karta hai ...

"varma ...kal subha tak muskan ki har ek detail meri table pey honi cahiye"

Gupta's house ...

Riddhima aur muskan dono chain ki neend sorahye they ki tring tring karkey muskan ka ph bajhney lagta hai par muskan toh hosh hi nahi vo toh ghodey bachkey soti hai par riddhima ki ankh khulgayi aur dekha ki muskan ka ph bajh raha hai ...vo dekhti hai rahul ka call hai toh vo muskan ko jagati hai

Riddhima:muski uth nah ...dekh rahul call kar raha hai ...

Muskan:uss kankhajurey ko koi kaam nahi hai di aap bolo ki kal subha baat karungi ...mujhey soney do ..

Riddhima:nahi muski vo iss waqt kabhi call nahi karta sayad koi problem hogi tabhi call kiya ...

Muskan:uski life mey ek hi prob hai vo hai uska bhai armaan ...abh meko call karkey uss prob ka solution nhi niklenga nah abh soney do di ...

Riddhima:arrey ek bar baat karley vo abh tak 10 bar call karchuka hai abhi tuh baat nahi kareygi toh vo ghar ajayega ...

Muskan finally bhait jati hai aur ph leti hai riddhima ki haath sey aur "abbey kankhajurey kyun call ki"

Rahul:hmm

Muskan:abh hmm hmm ki kareyga ya kuch boleyga bhi

Rahul:i luv u muskan

Muskan: i luv u too aur ye bolney keyliye tuney raat key 2 baje call ki ...tuh pagal hogaya hai kya rahul kal subha college mey mileyga nah tabh teri khair nahi ...teri chutni banadungi

Rahul koi jawab nahi deyta ...tabh muskan apni neend sey puri tarha jaghti hai aur puchti hai "kya huva rahul ..sab thik haina"

Rahul:mujhey daar lagraha hai muskan ...

Muskan:daar ? kyun rahul ?

Rahul:bachpan mey hi mom ki death hogayi aur dad hamesha business tours pey jatey hai ...tabh sey aaj tak armaan bhai meri protection key naam pey meri har khusi chinli ..abh vo tumhey bhi mujhsey dur kardengey muskan ...mai tumhey kho nahi sakta marjaunga tumahrey binah ...mom key badh sirf tumhi ho jisey mai apna manta hun tumhi ho jo mujhey hasti ho mujhsey ladti ho ...i cnt loose u muskan

Muskan:mujhey tumsey koi alag nahi karsakta rahul ...nah baba ji nah tumharey bhai ...abh tuh rona band kar nahi toh mai ajungi tere ghar tera bharta banahney

Rahul muskurata hai ye sunkey aur kehta hai "mai cahey kitni bhi sad kyun nah ho tum ek chutki mey mujhey hasadeyti ho"

Muskan:oyee kankhajurey hasati bhi hun aur ek chutki mey rulati bhi hun abh butter math maar aur jakey soja hum kal milengey collge mey ...

Rahul:muskan i luv u

Muskan:i luv u too abh sojaov rahul ...

Rahul:i cnt muskan mujhey bohot bechaini horahi hai bhai kuch toh karengey unko tumahrey barey mey pata chalgaya vo chup nahi rahengey ...

Muskan:arrey kuch nahi hoga rahul tuh daar math tere saat punjab di sherni muskan hai toh daar kis baat ka

Rahul:muskan tum mujhsey pyar karti ho

Muskan:abbey kamine teri dictionary mey luv u ka mathlab hate u hai kya aaj pura 25 tmes luv u boli mai aur tujhey abhi bhi yakin nahi horaha hai ...

Rahul:muskan plzz nah jst say tum mujhsey pyar karti honah

Muskan:haan baba dheer sara pyar karti hun abh ek aur bar meko pucha toh teri wattt lagadungi mai ...

Rahul:mujhsey shadi karogi ...

Muskan:abh pyar tujhsey aur shadi padosi sey karungi kya ...uff adhi raat ko kyun tang kar raha hai tuh ...

Rahul:muskan be serious ...

Muskan:okyy f9 ...shadi karungi bt pehley di ki shadi hogi badh mey humari ...

Rahul:pehley hum dono karleytey hai muskan badh mey riddhima ki shadi hum dono milkey karengey ek acha ladka dekhkey ...

Muskan:nowys rahul ...pehley di ki shadi badh mey meri ...

Rahul:muskan tuh samjh nahi rahi bhai hum dono ko alag kardengey isey pehley vo kuch karey hum dono ko shadi karleyni cahiye plzz muskan samjho halat ko ..

Muskan:par rahul di ki shadi pehley hogi ye baat mai tumhey shuru sey kehti arahi hun abh tum aise kaise

Rahul: i knw muskan bt iss waqt halat alag hai

Muskan ko samjhmey nahi araha tha ki vo kya boley ...ek taraf uski di hai aur ek taraf uska pyar dono sey hi vo bohot pyar karti hai ...muskan ki pareshan chera dekhkey riddhima puchti hai "kya huva muski" phir muskan usey sari baat batati hai tabh riddhima ph leyti hai aur kehti hai "hello rahul"

Rahul:haan riddhima

Riddhima:tum khamaka daar rahey ho rahul ..aise kuch nahi hoga ..aur tum apney bhai ko kyun har waqt galat samjhtey ho ...vo bas tumhey abhi bhi wahi chota sa bacha samjhtey hai aur iss duniya sey bachna cahtey hai ...

Rahul:mai bada hochuka hun riddhima ...khud ka dhyan rakh sakta hun ..kya sahi hai kya galat hai samjhney ki akal hai mujhmey

Riddhima:acha toh din bhar grls key saat flirt kartey ghumtey ho ...tumhari graduation puri hogayi phir bhi tum college roj atey ho ..padhney nahi masti keyliye ...aur aise harkat karney walon ko bachey hi kehtey hai rahul

Rahul:mai flirt issliye karta hun kyun ki bar bar bhai mera breakup karvatey they aur phir meri life mey muskan ayi abh muskan ko bhai ki nazron sey chupakey rakhna hai issliye mai flirt karta hun taki vo muskan tak nah pohanch paye ...bt aaj unko ye bhi pata chalgaya abh vo mera break up karvakey hi rahengey ...riddhima aftr mom agar kisi ko apney dill key kareeb mehsus kiya hai toh vo muskan hai ..agar tumhey lagta hai ki mai cheat karunga toh plzz trust me ...mai muskan sey dill aur jaan sey pyar karta hun ...uskey bina mai jee nahi sakta riddhima

Riddhima:i knw rahul n i trust u also bt tum apni bhai ki taraf sey bhi sochney ki khosis karo ..unko lagta hoga ki tum bigad rahey hoo issliye vo aise kartey hoongey ...

Rahul; nahi tum nahi janti unhey ...mai kal hi muskan sey shadi karna cahta hun ...

Riddhima:kyaaa ...

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amazing start loved it

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Nice concept :)

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Part 2

Pyar Ka Ehsaas

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Rahul; nahi tum nahi janti unhey ...mai kal hi muskan sey shadi karna cahta hun ...

Riddhima:kyaaa tum pagal hogaye ho ...

Rahul:agar bhai ney mujhsey muskan chinli toh sahi mey pagal hojaunga riddhima ...plzz i nid ur permission ...

Riddhima:dekho rahul tum jaldhbaazi kar rahey ho ...khamaka daar rahey ho ...tumhraey bhai aise kuch nahi karengey ..tum unsey aram sey baat karo ...jabh dekho tabh jhagda kartey rehtey ho tum ..ek bar bhi thandey diamg sey baat karney ki khosis ki tumney nahi nah ...

Rahul:oh god kaise samjhun tumhey ...we dnt hve tme riddhima ...tum bhai ko nahi janti unko lagta hai ki har ladki humari property key peechey hai aur kisi bhi hadh tak jasaktey hai ...mujhey toh daar hai kahin vo muskan ko koi nuksan nah pohchaye ...vo pehley darayengey phir bhi kaam nahi huva toh vo jaan tak ...(rahul rukh jata hai vo agey bol nahi pata)

Ye sunkey riddhima daar jati hai .iss duniya mey koi apna hai uska toh vo sirf muskan hai agar armaan ney muskan ko kuch kiya toh vo jeetey jee marjayegi ...vo soch mey padhjati hai confused hai ...kya kare samjhmey nahi araha hai usey ek taraf rahul ka daar dusri taraf muskan ki future ...riddhima cahti hai ki rahul koi zemadari ley apney pairon pey khada ho tabhi uski behan uskey saat khus raheygi aur uski future secure raheyga par rahul koi resposibility nahi leynah cahta aise ladkey key saat vo kaise apni behan ki shadi karvadey ...

Rahul:hello riddhima r u zer

Riddhima:umm..

Rahul:tum chup kyun ho riddhima ...tumhey koi shak hai mere pyar pey

Riddhima:nahi rahul mujhey koi shak nahi hai tumharey pyar par rahul ...pyar alag hai aur shadi alag ..tum dono abh tak luv birds ki tarha idhar udhar ghumna hasi mazak masti kartey rahey par shadi key badh ye sab nahi hoga ..manti hun tum ek bade ghar key ladkey ho par mai cahti hun ki tum koi kaam karo , responsible bano ...sayad yehi tumharey bhai bhi cahtey hai ... vo bhi tumhey ek zeemedar insan banahna cahtey hai ... abh tumhari m.b.a puri hogayi agar tum apni family business join nahi karna cahtey ho toh koi job karo ya phir khud ka business shuru karo aise kab tak tum life ko take it easy logey ...

Rahul:tum kehna kya cahti ho riddhima cme to z point

Riddhima:dnt gt angry rahul .. shanti sey suno aur socho meri baat ..maan lo kal tum shadi karlogey zen wats next rahul ...

Rahul:matlab...

Riddhima:shadi key badh kaha jaovgey tum dono ...har ladki bidayi key badh apney sasural jati hai kya tumharey bhai ghar aney dengey ...kya tumharey papa iss shadi ko accept karengey .. agar undono ney tumhey ghar aur apney khandan sey bedakhal kardiya toh kya karogey tum ...

Rahul:bhai toh kabhi bhi accept nahi karengey nah mujhey koi hope hai unpey aur mujhey iss property n all mey koi intrest nahi hai riddhima ...mai job karunga aur apni biwi ko khus rakhunga riddhima ...kya tumhey barosa nahi mujhpey ...

Riddhima:bharosa hai rahul n u r a very talented guy i knw zat very well u r z topper of z uni ..bt rahul aaj kal ek achi job keyliye kitni competition hai tumhey pata hi hai toh kaise mileygi tumhey kal key kal ek job ..issliyee jaldhbazi math karo pehley apney pairon pey khada hojaov phir mai khud tum dono ki sahdi karvaungi ...

Rahul:oh god riddhima ...agar bhai ney kuch kardiya toh ...

Riddhima:arrey vo kuch nahi karengey rahul ...mai huna muskan key saat mere hotey huye meri behan ko koi chukar dekhaye jaan nahi ley lungi ...

Rahul:par riddhima i cnt loose muskan ..ek kaam kartey haina kal shadi karleytey hai phir mai job dhundhlunga zen muskan ko apney pass leyjaunga ...bas kuch din apney pass rakho

Riddhima:hahaha hasi arahi hai tumhari baat pey ...meri behan ko kuch din nahi apni sari life apney pass rakh sakti hun aur uska dhyan bhi rakh sakti hun ...

Rahul:toh shadi keyliye maan joav nah riddhima ...

Riddhima:be practical rahul ..iss waqt tumhari tumhari priority sirf career honi cahiye ...shadi karogey toh u may gt distracted aur aaj kal ki competition mey jeejaan lagani apdhti hai job keyliye so pehley job dhudndo phir mai khud shadi karvaungi bol rahi huna phir kyun tum smajh nahi rahey ho ...

Rahul:tum meri baat nahi samjh rahi ho riddhima bhai kuch kardengey muskan ko ...

Riddhima:kuch nahi karengey ...abh tum chup chap sojaov kafi raat hogayi hai ...kal subha baat karengey hum ...gud nt bye

Riddhima ph rakhdeyti hai ...muskan usey puchti hai ..."di rahul kya bol raha tha"

Riddhima:bas kal key kal shadi ...uskey dimag mey daar bhait gaya hai muski ...khair maine usey smajha diya nah aur i know tuh mujhey bataye binah koi kadam nahi utaheygi par phir bhi bolrahi hun ...tuney meri sari batey suni haina ..jab tak rahul settle nahi hojata ye shadi nahi hogi ...

Muskan:dii aap mujhey nahi janti ho kya ...

Riddhima:while caressing her cheeks)janti hun muski aur mai yeh bhi janti hun ki tuh rahul sey bohot pyar karti hai ...issliye mai keh rahi hun ...tumhari bhayali keyliye hi hai ye sab ...tuh janti haina hum dono ney kitni muskiley face ki mom dada ki death key badh mai nahi cahti ki meri behan phir sey un sab halaton sey gujarey ...rahul acha ladka hai muski mujhey uspey koi shak nahi bas ek bar apni pairon pey khada hojaye phir mai nischint hojaungi

Muskan:di i knw aap meri future keyliye hi bol rahi ho aur ek baat aap bhi jaan lo ki rahul ko job miley ya nah miley meko koi farak nahi padhta bas apki shadi honey key badh hi meri shadi hogi bas ye baat maine rahul ko bhi bolah hai ...

Riddhima muskurati hai uski batey sunkey ...

Muskan:hass kyun rahi ho aap ..sachi mey mai apko akela chodkey rahul key saat kabhi nahi jaungi bas kal sey rahul apney liye job dhudneyga aur mai apkeyliye uhoo uhoo

Riddhima uski kaan kheechti hai aur kehti hai "badi khasi rahi hai tujhey huh"

Muskan:ahh di chodo nah kya kar rahi ho ...maine kya galat kaha hai ..abh apki shadi meri resposnibilty hai

Riddhima:meri dadi amma math ban pehley tum apni padhayi khatam kaar badh mey dekhengey ye sab abh sojaa bohot late hogayi hai kal subha bohot kaam hai ...

Muskan:haan di iss kankhajurey key bhai ney rahul ki neend kharab ki aur vo humari kal mai uska sir phod dungi ...

Riddhima:chup asie kuch nahi karogi tuh ..vo pareshan tha muskan maine samjha diya nah abh chal sojaa gudnt muski ..

Dono behney toh sogayi cahin sey par rahul becahin tha uski dimag mey daar bhait gaya tha ..usey smajh mey nahi araha tha ki abh vo muskan ko kiss tarha bachye apney bhai sey ...riddhima ko kiss tarha samjhaye ki uska bhai kiss hadh tak jasakta hai ...vo apni maa ki photo farme mey haath mey leyta hai aur kehta hai

"mom khass aap mere saat hoti aaj ...koi nahi hai jo mujhey samjh sakey ...apkey badh sirf muskan ko apna manta hun bhai usey mujhsey chinlengey ...bhai aise kyun hai mom ..vo har ladki ko kyun galat samjhtey hai ...riddhima aur muskan dono ko meri property sey koi leynah deynah nahi hai ...sayad riddhima thik kehrahi thi mujhey ek bar bhai sey aram sey baat karni cahiye ...mujhey toh koi hope nahi hai phir bhi ek bar try karleyta hun ..cahey kuch bhi ho mai muskan ko kho nahi sakta mom "
rahul apni maa ki photo ko dill key lagata hai aur uski ankhey naam hojati hai ...vo unki photo pakad key sojata hai aise lagta hai jaise uski mom uskey saat hai ...

Next morining

In office

Varma: muskan ki mom dad ki death ek accident mey hogayi uskey badh uski badi behan riddhima ney usey sambhala ...dono behney aklei rehti hai apni apartment mey agey peechey shara deynah wala koi nahi ...rahul sir riddhima ki class mey jayada jatey they aur uskey saat dosti hogayi ...uskey badh musakn sey miley rahul sir aur dono mey pyar hogaya aur peechey 1 saal sey dono ek saat hai aur riddhima ko inn sabkey barey mey pata hai ...vo cahti hai ki rahul sir settle hoajye phir vo undono ki shadi karvayengi...aur sir aaj subha hi ek company mey apni resume bheji hai aur apni frnd circle sey kaha hai ki he nids job immediately

Armaan :wiz anger) 1 saal sey saat hai toh tum itney din kya kar rahey they varma kiss baat ki salary leyto ho tum huh...armaan mailk ka bhai ek mamuli si company mey job .. dimag kharab hogaya hai uska ...nahi ye sab tumhari wajehsey agar tum apna kaam dhang sey kartey toh aaj ye din nahi ata ...

Varma:scared)maaf kardijiye sir ...rahul sir college ki har ladki key saat flirt kartey hai toh mera sara dhyan wahi rehta toh pata bhi nahi chala kab inn dono mey pyar hogaya...mujhey laga sirf frnds hi hai najaney kab pyar

Armaan:pyar ...aise koi word exist hi nahi karti iss duniya mey varma ...mujhey sab kuch samjhmey agaya ...pehley riddhima ney mere bholey bahley rahul sey dosti ki aur apni dhuk bhari kahani sunayi usko emotional kiya aur phir unki dosti gehri huyi ..uskey badh usney apni hot behan ko field mey leykey ayi aur usney mere bhai ko phasa hi liya ...dono milkey rahul ko idiot bana rahi hai ...aur jaha tak mujhey yaad hai maine tumsey kaha tha ki rahul ki har ek frnd ki bhi details cahiye toh tumney in dono ko kaise chod diya

Varma:sir peechli bar shonali rahul sir ki sirf dost thi par apney usko n uski family ko kahin ka nahi choda tha toh mai sirf unn ladkiyon ki report karta tha jinsey sir flirt kartey they ...

Armaan:varma tumhey salary mai jo bolta hun vo karney keyliye milti hai nah ki tum jo chao vo karney keyliye nahi ...jab maine kaha tha i wnt evry grls report zen u should ...

Varma:i m sorry sir ..bt sir meri information ki hisab sey dono behne bohot achi aur khudar hai binah koi saharey hi riddhima part tme jobs karkey khudko aur apni behan ko sambhal rahi hai ...

Armaan:sirf part tme jobs sey aaj kal kuch nahi hota varma ..

Varma :i knw sir ..unkey mom dad ney thode jaidaad dono key naam fixed depsoits ki aur unka khud ka ghar hai toh jaise tasie vo yeha tak ayi hai aur dono hi studies mey achi hai issliye unko scholership bhi milraha hai ...dono achi ghar ki ladkiya hai sir ..

Armaan:varma maine tumhey sirf unki details laney keyliye kaha tha bas tumhari rayi nahi mangi maine ..mai iss tarha ki ladkiyon ko achey sey janta hun ..aise hi amir ladkon ko phasa key ye ladkiya apni bank balance banarahi hogi ...mujhey muskan ki photo cahiye ...

Varma file mey sey nikal key ek phto graph armaan ko deyta hai ...armaan usey dekhta hai aur puchta hai "maine sirf muskan ki photo mangi thi"

Varma:vo sorry sir apney meko bohot kaam tme diya itney sey tme mey mai sirf muskan ko click nahi karpaya dono behney saat mey thi toh ...

Armaan:oky oky abh inmey sey muskan kaun hai ...

Varma bolney hi wala hota hai ki armaan ka ph bajhta hai ...toh vo varma ko janey keyliye kehta hai ...ph pey baat karney key badh vo uss pohoto ko dekhta hai

"hmm dono hi bohot sundar ...apni iss sundarta ka jaal banakey ladkon ko phasa ti hogi par ismey mey muskan kaun hai ...dono hi lag bhag ek hi age ki lag rahi hai ...anywys abh muskan tumhey mere rahul ki life sey jana hoga ...by hook or crock"

Armaan apna ph uthata hai aur varma ko call karta hai ..

"varma tum kehrehey they ki riddhima cahti hai ki rahul settle hojaye aur issliye rahul job dhudraha hai"

Varma:haan sir ...

Armaan: tum ek kaam karo manali mey vo sighania's ki company haina usmey rahul ki job lagaov aur rahul pata nahi chalna cahiye ki humari aur sighania's key beech koi connection hai ..

Varma:oky sir sham tak ye kaam hojayega ...

Armaan:agar nahi huva toh kal tumhari jagah pey koi aur hoga varma .. m i clear..

Varma:nahi sir iss bar mai apko shikayat ka mauka nahi dunga ...

Armaan: gud fr u

Armaan ph rakh deyta hai aur riddhima n muskan ki photo dekhtey huye kehta hai

"bas aaj jitna enjoy karna hai karlo tum dono kal subha sey kis tarha mai tum dono ko barbad karta hun dekhna ...mere bhai ko phasaney cahli thi huh ..mere jeetey jee rahul ko aise jaal mey phas ney nahi dunga mai ..riddhima n muskan tum dono ka chapter abh khatam"

At riddhima n muskan's home

"muskan tum baat ko samjh kyun nahi rahi ho ... tumney khud dekha tha nah bhai ney kya kiya maya key saat"

Muskan:haan rahul par mai di key against nahi jaungi ...di cahti hai ki frst tum settle hojaov badh mey hi shadi jab tak tum job nhi dhudh leytey mey di key liye ek acha ladka dhudh lungi aur dono ki shadi ek saat hogi...

Rahul : tum manogi nahi tabh ...

Muskan:nahiii

Rahul: oky f9 ...mujhey manali mey job milli hai unhoney mujhey kal hi report karna hai ...

Muskan: wow!u got job aur ye baat tuh itna sad hokey kyun bata raha hai ...ye kitni badi khus khabri hai ...congrtss rahul ...

Muskan rahul ko hug karti hai aur paglon ki tarha chialney lagti hai yepieee...par rahul khus nahi tha vo muskan ko khud sey alag karta hai aur uski sir pey haath pehrtey huye kehta hai

"mujhey daar lagraha hai ...mai yeha nhai rahunga aur bhai ney kuch kardiya toh"

Riddhima waha ajati hai msuakn ki chikey sunkey aur kehti hai "tum fikar math karo rahul ..mai huna yeha muskan ko kuch nahi honey dungi ..tum khusi khusi jaov aur job join karo ..."

Rahul:hmm aur koi rats choda nahi tumney abh meri baat dhayn sey suno tum dono akeli kahin math jana hamesha saat saat rehna aur kisi bi anjan ko ghar mey aney nahi deynah ...

Riddhima:bas bas itney salon sey hum dono akeli hi rehtey hai rahul ..humey pata kaise sambhal kar rehna hai tum daro math aur befikr hokey kaam par dhyan do ..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update :)

I doing like Armaan for doing all this...like seriously how hard is it for him to understand yah the doesn't own Rahul

I hope he changes soon

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Part 3

Rahul manali keyliye nikal jata hai ...armaan khus tha ki uskey plan ka frst step kamyab raha ...abh uski plan ki dusri step shuru hogayi ...riddhima ek company mey part time job karti thi as a typist frm 4 yrs achank company key boss ney usey bulaya aur termination letter deydiye ...riddhima shock hojati hai vo dekhkey aur puchti hai

"sir mujhsey koi galti hogayi ?

Boss:angrily)nahi mujhsey hogayi galti jo tum jaise ladki ko kaam pey rakha ...

Riddhima:wiz tears)aise maine kya kiya sir ...

Boss:mai tumsey koi baat nahi karna chata bas ... mai tum jaise ladki ko kaam pey rakhkey apni company ki reputation kharab nahi karna cahta ..tum cashier sey apni pending salary lo aur dafa hojaov yeha sey ...

Riddhima:wiz tears)sir kya bol rahey ho app... mujhey kuch samjh mey nahi araha hai ...mai yeha 4 saalon sey kaam kar rahi hun kabhi bhi koi shikayat ka mauka nahi diya maine par abh aise kya kardiay maine jo aap mujhey nikal rahey ho ...

Boss:mai aaj tak tumhey ek achi ghar ki ladki samjhta tha bt ...

Riddhima:wat bt sir ...

Boss: dekho tum jaise giri huyi characterless ladkiyon key saat muh nahi lagna cahta mai ...jo sirf paison keyliye kuch bhi karsakti hai ...tum jaise ladki ko kaam pey rakhunga toh meri reputation kharab hojayegiii ..tum ko toh koi sharam haiya nahi bt me n my comapny have vry gud reputation ...abh gt lost frm my office ...

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Riddhima rotey huye waha sey nikal jati hai ...aur rotey rotey ghar wapas ati hai muskan riddhima ko rotey huye dekhti hai aur daudhkey uskey pass jati hai aur puchti hai

"kya huva di ...aap ro kyun rahi ho ..kisi ney kuch kaha kya"

Riddhima muskan ko hug karleyti hai dill kholkey roti hai ...muskan ney riddhima ko aise rotey huye kabhi nahi dekha vo daar jati hai aur puchti hai

"kya huva di ...plzz bolo mujhey daar lagraha hai..."

Riddhima rotey huye usey apni boss ki har ek baat batahati hai ..vo sab sunkey muskan bohot gussa hojati hai ...par riddhima ki aise halat dekhey vo chup rehti hai aur vo pehley riddhima ko bhita thi hai ... usey keyliye pani lakey deyti hai ...riddhima pani pileyti hai aur thoda chup hojati hai aur kehti hai

"4 saal unkey yeha kaam kiya ek bhi complan nahi thi mere upar par aaj aise ghatiya batey bolah unhoney ."

Muskan:angrily)mai uss kamine ka muh thod dungi di ..uski himmat kaise huyi apko chracterless bolney ki ...aap chalo abhi mere saat uss office ko aaj aag nah lagayi toh mera naam muskan gupta nahi ...kya samjhta hai vo khud ko ...boss hai toh kuch bhi bakeyga vo ...uski toh aaj

Riddhima:nahi muskan ...hum kahin nahi jayengey ...mujhey apni aur insult nahi karvani waha jakey ...abh uss insan ka face tak nahi dekhna mujhey..abh bas mai koi aur job dhudlungi aur bas 1 month mey mere finals hai ..m.b.a complete hogayi toh mujhey ye chote mote jobs nahi karney padengey ...ek achi post miljayegi mujhey ...abh bas ye sab bhulja aur padhayi pey dhyan dey ...

Muskan:di aise kasie bhul jaun mai ..meri di ki insult ki mai chup nahi rehsakti ...usey sabak sikhana hi hoga di ...aap yehi raho mai jakey uski

Riddhima:nahi muskan tum kahin nahi jaovgi ...

Muskan:bt di

Riddhima:angrily)maine nahi kaha nah muskan ...

Tabhi muskan ki mobile bajhti hai ...muskan uthkar apna mobile leyti hai aur chaunk jati hai screen par naam dekhkar n kehti hai

"principal sir mujhey kyun call kar rahey hai iss waqt"

Riddhima:principal sir...vo toh koi kaam ho toh mujhey call kartey haina phir tum ko kyun call ki ...kahir dekh toh jara ...

Muskan :haan di

Muskan apni principal ko gudmorning kehti hai ..uskey badh vo chup hojati hai ...muskan ka cehra dekhkey riddhima khadi hojati hai aur puchti hai "kya huva muskan sir kya bol rahey hai" muskan ki haath sey mobile gir jata hai n aur uski ankhon sey ansoo nikalney lagtey hai ..ye dekhkey riddhima ghabra jati hai aur uski shoulders pakad key puchti hai

"kya huva bolo ..."

Muskan:while crying)di hum dono ko college sey detain kardiya hai ...

Riddhima:kyaaa

Muskan:haan di ..

Riddhima:detain? par kyun muskan ...tuh rukh mai baat karti hun principal sir sey

Muskan:nahi di koi faida nahi ..vo pata nahi kya kya bakwas kar rahey they aap plzz unsey baat math karo ...

Riddhima:kya bakwas kar rahey they muskan ...

Muskan:hum dono achi ladkiya nahi hai n ...

Uskey agey muskan bool nahi pati aur riddhima samjh jati hai uksey boss ki tarha hi principal sir ney baat ki ...vo tut jati hai aur couch pey bhait jati hai aur apna cehra haton mey chupakey roney lagti hai ...scholr ship ki pasion sey vo kisi bhi tarha m.b.a pura karkey life mey settle hona cahti thi par isey uski sare umeed aur sapney tut jatey hai ...muskan riddhima key pass bhait jati hai aur uski godh mey sir rakhey rone lagti hai aur kehti hai

"di aaj ye kya horaha hai humarey saat ...pehley apki job abh humari studies"

Riddhima apni ansoo pohcnti hai aur muskan key sir pey haath phertey huye kehti hai

"bhagwan humari imtehaan leyrahey hai muskan ..tuh fikr math kar sab kuch thik hojayega ..mai principal sir sey baat karungi akhir kyun humey detain ki ...mujhey jana hai aur wizout any valuble reason vo asie hi humey detain nahi karsakte..."

Tabhi door bell bazta hai,muskan jakar door kholti hai,courier hain.

courier boy : " riddhima koun hai,yahan sign kar dijiye ."

muskan : "di aapka courier hai."

riddhima surprisingly puchti hai..: "mera courier? kisne bheja."

courier boy : "jaldi kijiye,mujhe late ho raha hai."

riddhima sign karke courier leti hai aur jaldi se aakar open karti hai,its a notice...jise padhkar riddhima ladkhadakar gir jati hai.

muskan dourte hue aakar di ko sambhalti hai aur puchti hai: "kya letter hai di?

par riddhima kuch bol nahi pati hai,uske honth kaamp rahe hain,aankhon se aansooyon ki barsaat ho rahi hai.muskan unke hathon se letter leti hai aur padhkar chounk jati hai...its notice from bank...informed that unke papa ne house banane ke liye loan liya tha wo na dene ki wajah se house ab bank ke under chala jayega. agar within 15 days wo loan clear kar saken tabhi is house me reh sakte hain burna bank isey nilaam (auction) kar dega.

riddhima uttered in a trembling voice : "muski,papa ne sarey loan chuka diye they jaisa ki mujhe pata hai.agar nahi tah toh bank itne dino tak kya kar rahi thi?unhone humey pahle koi notice kyon nahi di?

muskan assured riddhima : "di,mai wo papers dhundti hun,jarur ghar me hoga. "

riddhima and muskan bahut dhundhte hain par wo papers nahi milte. abh dono bohot daar jati hai ...

muskan uttered with choked voice : "di,ab hum kahan jayenge? yeh sab kyon ho raha hai?mai rahul ko phone karti hun."

riddhima caught her hand and uttered : "nahi muski,wo beechara paresaan ho jayega,abhi toh uski job lagi hai."

tears flowing down from muskan's eyes...she uttered : "uske siva humara koi nahi di,humey koun is mushibat se bachayega?

just then her mobile rang...

muskan : "hello.

other side: ...

muskan : "koun chahiye?

other side : "muskan..muskan gupta."

muskan : "ji,kahiye, mai muskan hun."

she heard a harsh voice "jine ke liye insaan ko pyar ke siva aur bhi bahut kuch jarurat hoti hai jo ab tumse cheene wali hai...think about it...u want ur love or ur life...

saying zis he cut the phone making muskan go numb!

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riddhima muskan ko pukarti hai par wah koi jawab nahi deti. achanak apne dono hathon me chehra chupakar rone lagti hai. riddhima dar jati hai.wah dourkar aakar usey hug karte hue puchti hai

" muski kya hua? kiska phone tha? kya keh raha tha?"

muskan : "di.di ...jarur yeh rahul ke bhai ka kaam hoga.wahi yeh sab karva raha hoga."

riddhima : "nahi muski, mai manti hun wo rahul ke barey me bahut possessive hai but wo kyon karega? humne uska kya bigada?"

muskan : "di aap khud jaisa sabko achcha mat samjho,wo insaan nahi haivan hai.uska hi phone tha,keh raha tha apna pyar ya jindagi chahiye"

riddhima jor se muskan ko apne me kheench leti hai aur dari hui awaz me kehti hai "nahi ,tujhe kuch nahi hoga.mai hun na tere sath."

muskan (crying) : "di hum kahin aur chale jayenge...hum wahan jayenge jahan is tarah ke log nahi rehte. lekin di hum kahan jayenge? humara koi bhi toh nahi hai."

riddhima (caressing her hairs) : "muski,mai hun tere liye aur tu mere liye. humey aur kisiki jarurat nahi hai muski. hum ek dusre ke liye kafi hain."

muski (holding riddhima's hand) : "toh chalo di hum kal hi chale jayenge. yahan se kahin dur.bahut dur."

riddhima pressed her hand to assure and thought "pagali,tu kya rahul ke bina reh payegi? mai tujhe rahul se alag nahi kar sakti. mai kal us arman mallik ke pairon pad gir jaungi apni behen ki khushi ke liye...jo kimat ada karna pade karungi par apni behen ke liye...bhagwanji mujhe itni sakti dena."

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raat ko dono behne paas paas soi hui thi,ek dusre ka hath pakde..mano koi unhe alag kar dega. muskan thodi der me so jati hai par riddhima ki ankhon me need nahi hai. kya karegi,kaise is ghar ko bachayegi,kaise muskan ka pyar bachayegi,ek job chahiye immediately par kaise!" sochte sochte uski aankh lag jati hai.achank uski need khul jati hai,muski was mumbling...

"rahul ,mai tumhe chodkar kaise jiungi? kyon tumne mujhe pyar kiya,kyon sunhare sapne dikhaye?mai mar jaungi tumhare bina...rahul..."

riddhima usey jagane ke liye jaise hi chehre par hath rakhti hai,buri tarah dar jati hai. she was burning with fever...riddhima jaldi se uthkar thermometer lati hai aur uska temparature leti hai.its 104 degree. riddhima jaldi se uske sir par bheegi patti rakhna start karti hai...wah samajh jati hai rahul se bichadne ke dar ne muskan ko tod diya hai. wah apni baat par aur jyada determine hoti hai...

"mujhe us arman mallik se kisi bhi tarah apne behen ki khushi wapas lani hogi...wo jo kimat chahiye i am ready for it."