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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both the parts r amazing!! Luvd it...hate snakewa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Awesome up date...
Thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is indeed intresting.
I just have a suggestion if you don't mind, the way you are sketching it out is a bit confusing. There are so many characters.

I just wish it be more clear without any shortcuts.

Just a suggestion, but a fascinating concept.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Promo- Dellu, promo is quite interesting!!!
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Part 1- Lovely yaa... The thought is gripping...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
luved all the 2 parts the banner is freaken cool its really mystifying and dark story by the first 2 parts and promo,banner i feel it dats y waitin for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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luved part 2 dear the story is now getting interesting
cant wait for more
jamy is taking revenge hmm so sad abt that
but i knoe he turn out to be good
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note : I dedicate this part to everyone out there who loves this story i am even getting FB replies that they too like it and plus u guys i am proud of that you guys are liking it part 3 for you guys

Part 3

Khushi comes in Arshi's dream and says to her I hope you are having a good sleep my daughter I have not come here to disturb your sleep but to tell you that even though me and your dad are not existing our blessings are always with you.your brother is searching for you dear console him when you meet him has he gone through lot of ups down when we both ur dad and I died he had witnessed it .Your life is in danger dear be safe dear our blessings and your brother's protection is alays with you he will be standing by you the monet he knows that he has found his lost sister his sibling(she disappears leaving Arshi in tears)

Bubbly and Madhu : Priya why are you crying ?tell me what happened?

Priya : My real mom came into my dream telling me to be safe cause my life is in danger.And its is near me and she told me that she and dad are no more and their blessings are with me and my brother is searching for me to make him safe in his shadow(she covers her face with her hands and weeps)

Madhu : Priya my mom to died with my died in a car accident I was too small around 2 years think how my buadadi took care of me at that time but my uncle my mom brother should always take brother for some work as he only wanted my brother was his purpose.(actually what she meant to say in this line is her uncle assistant would say that Shyam his calling him for some work cause he is out of station(jail))Think what I have gone through

Bubbly : Even I am a orphan but my aunties took care of me.So don't be sad of that ok so cheer up.Your foster parents took care of you and gave you their name be happy about that(Bubbly was feeling strange and thinkin how can there be similarities Arnav uncle and Khushi aunty too died on the same day and Arshi got separated and Aarav took a vow that he will find Arshi though what bad things happen.Is Priya only my cousin sister.I have to find it out.)

Priya : Thanks for consouling me Guys.(Love you buddies they all 3 went to sleep)

After the exam of thiers

Arshi was cming out of the campus and she tripped on a small stone and fell on Armaan

Arm : What the!!Cant you see Don't you have eyes a what

Arsh : Here I fell and its hurting without telling did you get hurt u r screaming on top of your voice

On the other hand

Madhu was gonna come on to the spot where they were fighting that time her dupata flew and fell on Aarav

Aa : Can u get me the hell out me from ur dupatta!!If I would trip(removing it with anger)

Madhu : Srry!! It was by breeze (in her mind saying Akudu to him )

Bulbly : Aarav!!Its nice to see you to come and pick me up !!Meet my friend Madhu

Aa : I met her recently !! Nice to meet you Miss Dupatta !!Haan Bubul Mridul told me he called you for a date

Bulbuly : Date!!What no no not again he is so possessive in my eating and behavior in the restaurant .Please my arrogant brother I mean sweet brother please I don't want to go

Mridul : What!!You don't want to come with me for a date!!Is this your GF relationship with me

Bubbly : No Mridul Srry 1000 times Sorry I said it by mistake now can we go !!Please(they 2 left from there)(Aarav said to himself : Pagal ladki)

Madhu : Pagal!!Me how dare you!!ok forget that look my bro is fighting lets go there(they reached there at the place where Arshi was fighting with Armaan .(Aarav didn't notice the mark in the hand but still he supported for her cause he was having a feeling that maybe she can be anyone sis maybe his too)

Aa : Stop Fighting Armaan!!Its not her fault in falling on to you maybe she might have fallen by the stone see she badly injured and on off it you are screaming

Armaan : Ok !! I knoe I am sorry

Madhu : Akkudu you told me that its my fault that my duppata came on to your face and now priya fell on brother its not her fault Ok leave that first time my brother armaan said sorry

Aa :(Smirk appeared on his face)Madhu : Not like you who didn't say sorry

Priya : Oh comeon guys Lets stop fighting Madhu I didn't accept this from you.Lets all be friends right

In the Restaurant

Mridul : Why didn't you were didn't accept to come for the date bubbly am I so boring to you

Bubbly : Not like that Mridul I only wanted to tell that don't be so possessive about me.you what I am trying to say right

Mridul : In that case ok.but have something na otherwise our date will be plain romance(Mridul was trying to propose her by givig her the ring but he failing in doing so cause she is not guving ay look to him from the time the waiter served them coffee

Mridul : Bubbly!!Look at me stop gazing and stiring the coffee from so long.I love you will you accept me he shows the ring

Bubbly : You brought the ring!!From when I wanted you to propose with the ring now this is become a proper date.I love you too Mridul(Mridul fed her chocolate fudge and said you are sweet and tasty as this desert (she blushed by his words)

In heaven

Arnav :Khushi I am so happy that Aarav met Arshi eventhough he doesn't knoe her thanks for telling her that her brother is searching for her

Khushi : You seen it I am a good angel who knoes what what to do in everystep

Arn : Ohh really !! Then can I get a kiss from you

Khush : If any other angel sees us romancing(let them see na I don't care he smooches her)

Next Part 4 on Sunday

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For all updates there are typing mistake (sorry for that)

Part 4 on pg 9

Edited by desigirl_sydell - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Love the dupatta scene a arnav was so angry ha ha ha ha . . . . .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
loved Arshi's dream abt Khushi.that was emotional n lovely.Bubbly having an doubt...like Arshi's fate similar 2 Priya's.guess its going 2 b a turning point.Aarav-Madhu,Armaan-Arshi encounter was nice.Aarav is not that rough.Armaan saying sorry was good.liked aarav madhu duppatta scene.1st Bubbly wasn't happy ABT date.why?but loved ring proposal.Then d datebecame so sweet.Mridul fed her choco fudge.so sweet.Arshi smooch as angels.ha ha.so cute.loved pics.waiting 4 more Arhi,Aarav Madhu,Arshi-Armaan,mridul-bubbly romance

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