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hey Saffi...
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Sixteen: Bonds of Love

Renuka Sanyal was standing outside Agarwal Mansion with her son Randhir and his love Sanyukta. Sanyukta was holding Randhir's hand tightly, her fingers laced between his, her heart racing. It wasn't only her heart that was racing, Randhir's was too, for Randhir was just as nervous as she was.

He squeezed her hand with comfort, remembering how he had appproached Renuka Sanyal.

--

"Mom, I'm ready to forgive you," he had told her, "But... I need one favour from you."

He knew what he was doing wasn't right. He was emotionally blackmailing his mother, but he had to do it for his love, he had to do it for Sanyuka's happiness. He promised himself that he would start life afresh with his mother and would hold no grudge for the past if she promised to support him.

"I'll do anything son," she whispered, and Randhir saw tears fall from her eyes.

He felt his own eyes sting with tears.

"I love her mom," he said to her, falling to his knees, and pressing the palms of his hands together. "I love her more than anything in this world. Please ask for her hand."

She fell to her own knees, held his shoulders before nodding and pulling him in a bone crushing hug.

"I'll do anything for your happiness," she told him, stroking the back of his head.

Randhir hugged her back, finally opening up to his mother, finally allowing her access to him.

The purest form of love was the one where you only wished for the other one to be happy - there was no selfishness. Just like Renuka Sanyal loved Randhir. And just like Randhir loved Sanyukta.

--

The door opened and Sanyukta's mother stood there. Upon seeing Sanyukta, who was holding Randhir's hand, wearing new clothes she had bought the day after she had run away (two weeks back), her eyes widened.

"You have no idea how much you shamed this family," her mother yelled, grabbing her arm and pulling her in.

"Mom... please, let me explain," she whispered, tears falling from her eyes.

Randhir wanted to say something, but Renuka grabbed his hand, silently telling him that Sanyukta needed to hear all of this from her mother.

She looked at Randhir and Renuka and folded her hands together in front of them. "Thank you for finding her and bringing her home. I know she is a shameless, disgusting creature, but please forgive us... it was our upbringing," she said to them.

Randhir felt his heart break when her mother said those words.

"She isn't," he said, just as her mother was about to go inside.

She stopped in her tracks and turned around. "What?"

"She is absolutely beautiful," Randhir told her mother, "She regrets what she had done. She loves you truly."

Sanyukta pulled her arm away from her mom and rushed towards Randhir.

"Mom listen, I'm sorry! I know what I did was wrong... but I realized last minute and I couldn't let my life go down the drain. Mom... this is Randhir. Randhir Singh Shekhawat, Renuka Sanyal's son! You know Renuka, she owns a large chain of international companies!" Sanyukta said quickly, hoping that her mom would understand.

Sanyukta's mom's mouth opened when she heard Renuka's name.

"This is even worse," she said, embarrassed. "I'm so sorry you had the misfortune to meet my daughter."

"I like her," Renuka said with a smile towards Sanyukta's mom. "I actually wanted to speak to you about something if you have a moment. It would be ideal if your husband was here too."

"Yes... yes one minute," Anju, Sanyukta's mom, said.

She went inside and called Sanyukta's dad to the living room. The trio followed her.

"Sit... please sit," Anju said.

Randhir and Renuka took a seat while Sanyukta stayed standing.

As soon as her father and brother entered, they both ran towards her immediately. Gulping, she took a step back as her father raised his hand, about to slap her.

"We don't know you anymore!" he bellowed after giving her a tight slap, "We don't have a daughter! You brought shame to this house and only shame! From engineering to Parth to running away from your marriage, you are a disgrace!"

"Papa, please," she whispered, her tears escaping her eyes.

"This is Renuka Sanyal," Anju intervened, addressing her guests. "And this is her son Randhir."

Her father showed shock, her brother's mouth dropping open, clearly awestruck by who had come and visit them.

"Sorry Mrs. Sanyal," Sanyukta's father replied, clearly ashamed of what was going on. "I'm sorry you had to see everything that has happened here. We are very embarrassed to call this girl our daughter."

"Well Mr. Agarwal," Renuka said curtly, "You don't need to apologize. She is a blessing for me. I wanted to ask for her hand for my son Randhir."

Her father's jaw dropped open for the second shock of the day.

"Are you sure?" he asked her, trying to bring himself back to reality. "I mean... you know her history. She might just taint your name too."

Renuka sighed and leaned forward.

"Listen Mr. Agarwal," she told him, "I've gotten to know her well over a short period of time - when she has a passion, she will follow it with all her heart, and that's the most positive trait someone can have. And more importantly, she will keep my son happy... and he will treat her like a queen. I don't think you want anything else from your daughter, do you?"

"What if she runs away from her wedding again?" Anju said, clearly showing no sympathy for her daughter anymore.

"We'll take the chance," Renuka said with a nod.

"Okay then..." Sanyukta's father said, sounding stunned by what was happening. "We won't say no. If someone on the streets asked for her hand we wouldn't say no now, because she deserves only that, but you are Mrs. Renuka Sanyal, so we are in no position to deny."

Randhir felt his heart break as Sanyukta's father insulted her. He glanced at his mother, who seemed to understand him immediately.

"One more thing, Mr. Agarwal," Renuka said immediately. "I want you to forgive your daughter. I only want positive vibes from this alliance. If I hear that you haven't forgiven her, then I won't be happy."

"Yes, of course we will on your insistence," Sanyukta's dad replied quickly, "I mean... for you, anything Mrs. Sanyal."

Randhir could see Sanyukta's eyes light up when her father said that and he felt a huge weight being lifted off his heart immediately.

"So you can have your daughter back until the wedding," Renuka said sweetly. "We will meet with the pandit tomorrow for the marriage preparations."

Sanyukta's parent's looked at Renuka, awe-struck by what was happening, never expecting any of it.

Randhir noticed Renuka smile at Sanyukta warmly and he knew that it wasn't only him who would be getting his mother's love this time, Sanyukta would receive it equally.

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One more chapter left and then this story will come to a close. Don't forget to leave your comments. 😛 Thanks for all your lovely comments by the way, I love all of you for reading this fic!
Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago
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RES
UNRES

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Fifteen: Love is all You Need

"Give me your phone," Randhir told her, holding his hand out.

Without asking him anything, she placed her phone in his hand. He opened her phone and removed the battery.

"They won't be able to reach you now," he explained, sliding the back on the phone again.

Smart boy... heeheh!

Sanyukta smiled at him. They were sitting on his couch, Sanyukta still in her bridal wear. The dupatta of her lengha had fallen from her hair and rested on her shoulders. Randhir lightly brushed the skin of her shoulder as he adjusted it, letting it fall on one shoulder.

She looked at him, desire evident on her face. "I'm so lucky to have you Randhir," she whispered, cupping his cheeks with her hands.
AWWW.

"No," he replied, removing one hand from his cheek and squeezing it tightly. "Why are you separating yourself from me Sanyukta? There's no you or me in this relationship, there's only us."
Okay... at first when I read the no and that he removed her hand. I was like "WHAT"... but I continued reading... and hehee. 😳 It was adorbs.

Bringing her hand to his lips, he kissed it lightly. Sanyukta let the hand that was still on his face drop to his shoulder. She moved closer to him, bringing her other hand up to his shoulder. Randhir could feel his breathing quicken as she approached.
Awww... THAT IS FREAKING SO SO SO BEAUTIFUL.

He had wanted this for years and when it was finally coming, he didn't know how to react. He closed his eyes, his heart beating as fast as it had when Sanyukta told him she loved him. He could feel her shaking nervously as she brought her soft lips to his.
AWH. HE WAS NERVOUS. DO YOU KNOW HOW FREAKING CUTE THAT IS... LIKE WOAH. WHAT EVEN. I AM BLUSHING.😳 A LOT.

The kiss was short, but it told a story to him. It told him that Princess Sanyukta had reunited with her Prince and she was not willing to let him go at any cost.
awww, awww... aw... aw.. awh!

He kissed her forehead and let her relax her head on his shoulder.
Awww.

"They probably know I ran away by now," Sanyukta whispered.

"Don't think about them. We're in a different world," he consoled her, stroking her hair.

She removed her head from his shoulder and looked him in the eyes, her eyes holding only trust and admiration for him... the same could be reflected in his own eyes.
THIS IS SO SWEET! STOP MAKING ME BLUSH. A LOT. LIKE... THERE IS THIS AWKWARD BLUSHING GRIN I HAVE. SAFFIDI! AWH!

He lowered his lips to hers once again. She pulled back, her eyes filled with tears, as if she could not believe that all of this was happening right now.

"I wanted to kiss you for a long time," she confessed.

Randhir chuckled, stroking her cheek with his thumb. "I know... you told me you wanted to kiss me more that night."
hahahah! Yes. Yes. Yes.

He was referring to the night that Sanyukta had fallen asleep in his arms, drunk.

He watched her blush and look away, but Randhir turned her face around again.

"Oh come on Sanyukta," he teased, "It isn't anything new. Girls would die to kiss me."
Oye Hoye. THIS IS THE NAUGHTY RANDHIR THAT I BLUSH ABOUT. NOT TO MENTION I AM EXTREMELY RED RIGHT NOW.

He watched as her mouth dropped open with annoyance. "Fine! You can kiss them then since you seem to think about them," she told him, shifting her body away from his on the couch.

He moved right beside her and wrapped his arm around her, a big smile on his face. He dropped his lips to her ear, his nose nuzzling her hair. "I would die to kiss one girl and one girl only though," he whispered into her ear.
HAHAAH! SANYU BEING JEALOUS. THAT IS SO CUTE. AND I can totally picture this. ☺️ You. Are. Making. Me. Feel. Super. BlushyBlush.
He could feel her body tense up. He loved having this effect on her.

She turned her face slowly, her parted lips only an inch away from his. He closed the gap between their lips and pushed her back on the couch. Her arms circled his neck immediately, her lips responding to his with equal enthusiasm.

Once they pulled apart to breathe, he held her tightly against him, inhaling her scent, in another world completely.

He had his life in his arms tonight, and he wouldn't let it go at any cost. He loved his life's happiness too much to let it die again.
AWH AWH AWH AWH AWH... THIS IS TOO AMAZING. OKAY. NEXT DRABBLE... AWW!

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I'm sorry for taking a long time to update, the next two updates will be posted soon, and then the story will be over. Please do leave your thoughts!


OKAY... I AM NOT GOING TO COMMENT MUCH HERE... I WILL FOR CHAPTER 16! OKAY? OKAY! OKAY!?
Edited by kri1 - 11 years ago
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RES FIRST! AAAHHH! I LOVE BEING FIRST!

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Sixteen: Bonds of Love

Renuka Sanyal was standing outside Agarwal Mansion with her son Randhir and his love Sanyukta. Sanyukta was holding Randhir's hand tightly, her fingers laced between his, her heart racing. It wasn't only her heart that was racing, Randhir's was too, for Randhir was just as nervous as she was.

He squeezed her hand with comfort, remembering how he had appproached Renuka Sanyal.

I can't say how beautiful this picturesque scene is. Like. OH MY GOSH.

--

"Mom, I'm ready to forgive you," he had told her, "But... I need one favour from you."

He knew what he was doing wasn't right. He was emotionally blackmailing his mother, but he had to do it for his love, he had to do it for Sanyuka's happiness. He promised himself that he would start life afresh with his mother and would hold no grudge for the past if she promised to support him.

"I'll do anything son," she whispered, and Randhir saw tears fall from her eyes.

He felt his own eyes sting with tears.
Oh my gosh. This. Is. So. Sweet. I can't even explain how beautiful this is. He is willing to reconcile with his mom for her. What more can he do for her!?

"I love her mom," he said to her, falling to his knees, and pressing the palms of his hands together. "I love her more than anything in this world. Please ask for her hand."
He fell to his knees folding his hands? OH Gosh.

She fell to her own knees, held his shoulders before nodding and pulling him in a bone crushing hug.

"I'll do anything for your happiness," she told him, stroking the back of his head.

Randhir hugged her back, finally opening up to his mother, finally allowing her access to him.
This mother-son scene was totally needed Saffidi. His past would trouble him even if he was with Sanyu. And the fact that he met up with her for Sanyu's happiness just shows how much he loves her. It's totally amazing. You know that realism that I always talk about... I see that here. And that just makes me love ya even more yaar. 👏👏👏👏

The purest form of love was the one where you only wished for the other one to be happy - there was no selfishness. Just like Renuka Sanyal loved Randhir. And just like Randhir loved Sanyukta.
I love this small lines... that. that. that... (speechless. i love it so much)
--

The door opened and Sanyukta's mother stood there. Upon seeing Sanyukta, who was holding Randhir's hand, wearing new clothes she had bought the day after she had run away (two weeks back), her eyes widened.

"You have no idea how much you shamed this family," her mother yelled, grabbing her arm and pulling her in.

"Mom... please, let me explain," she whispered, tears falling from her eyes.

Randhir wanted to say something, but Renuka grabbed his hand, silently telling him that Sanyukta needed to hear all of this from her mother.

She looked at Randhir and Renuka and folded her hands together in front of them. "Thank you for finding her and bringing her home. I know she is a shameless, disgusting creature, but please forgive us... it was our upbringing," she said to them.
WHAT THE! SANYU'S MOM NEEDS TO UNDERSTAND THAT SHE WASN'T HAPPY AND THAT YOU DIDN'T NEED TO SAY THAT IN FRONT OF THEM. GOD.

Randhir felt his heart break when her mother said those words.

"She isn't," he said, just as her mother was about to go inside.

She stopped in her tracks and turned around. "What?"

"She is absolutely beautiful," Randhir told her mother, "She regrets what she had done. She loves you truly."
I love this. HE STOOD UP FOR HER. THAT IS AMAZING.👏👏👏

Sanyukta pulled her arm away from her mom and rushed towards Randhir.
I LOVED IT.

"Mom listen, I'm sorry! I know what I did was wrong... but I realized last minute and I couldn't let my life go down the drain. Mom... this is Randhir. Randhir Singh Shekhawat, Renuka Sanyal's son! You know Renuka, she owns a large chain of international companies!" Sanyukta said quickly, hoping that her mom would understand.

Sanyukta's mom's mouth opened when she heard Renuka's name.

"This is even worse," she said, embarrassed. "I'm so sorry you had the misfortune to meet my daughter."
WHAT THE. YOU DIDN'T UNDERSTAND!?!

"I like her," Renuka said with a smile towards Sanyukta's mom. "I actually wanted to speak to you about something if you have a moment. It would be ideal if your husband was here too."

"Yes... yes one minute," Anju, Sanyukta's mom, said.

She went inside and called Sanyukta's dad to the living room. The trio followed her.

"Sit... please sit," Anju said.

Randhir and Renuka took a seat while Sanyukta stayed standing.

As soon as her father and brother entered, they both ran towards her immediately. Gulping, she took a step back as her father raised his hand, about to slap her.

"We don't know you anymore!" he bellowed after giving her a tight slap, "We don't have a daughter! You brought shame to this house and only shame! From engineering to Parth to running away from your marriage, you are a disgrace!"
OH MY GOSH. ... HE SLAPPED HER! ... but I guess they're mad. I think I am being a bit biased here.

"Papa, please," she whispered, her tears escaping her eyes.

"This is Renuka Sanyal," Anju intervened, addressing her guests. "And this is her son Randhir."

Her father showed shock, her brother's mouth dropping open, clearly awestruck by who had come and visit them.

"Sorry Mrs. Sanyal," Sanyukta's father replied, clearly ashamed of what was going on. "I'm sorry you had to see everything that has happened here. We are very embarrassed to call this girl our daughter."
wow. hahaa. I don't know how to even react anymore.

"Well Mr. Agarwal," Renuka said curtly, "You don't need to apologize. She is a blessing for me. I wanted to ask for her hand for my son Randhir."

Her father's jaw dropped open for the second shock of the day.

"Are you sure?" he asked her, trying to bring himself back to reality. "I mean... you know her history. She might just taint your name too."
WHAT THE HELL... "SHE MIGHT JUST TAINT YOUR NAME TOO?!?!" WHAT DOES THAT EVEN MEAN?! That's so rude.. but I guess they're mad... I guess. That is probably what anyone would say...
Renuka sighed and leaned forward.

"Listen Mr. Agarwal," she told him, "I've gotten to know her well over a short period of time - when she has a passion, she will follow it with all her heart, and that's the most positive trait someone can have. And more importantly, she will keep my son happy... and he will treat her like a queen. I don't think you want anything else from your daughter, do you?"

"What if she runs away from her wedding again?" Anju said, clearly showing no sympathy for her daughter anymore.

"We'll take the chance," Renuka said with a nod.

"Okay then..." Sanyukta's father said, sounding stunned by what was happening. "We won't say no. If someone on the streets asked for her hand we wouldn't say no now, because she deserves only that, but you are Mrs. Renuka Sanyal, so we are in no position to deny."

Randhir felt his heart break as Sanyukta's father insulted her. He glanced at his mother, who seemed to understand him immediately.

"One more thing, Mr. Agarwal," Renuka said immediately. "I want you to forgive your daughter. I only want positive vibes from this alliance. If I hear that you haven't forgiven her, then I won't be happy."
I LOVE HOW YOU MADE HIS MOTHER UNDERSTAND HIM IMMEDIATELY... And good. Positive Vibes. hehehe!😃😆

"Yes, of course we will on your insistence," Sanyukta's dad replied quickly, "I mean... for you, anything Mrs. Sanyal."

Randhir could see Sanyukta's eyes light up when her father said that and he felt a huge weight being lifted off his heart immediately.

"So you can have your daughter back until the wedding," Renuka said sweetly. "We will meet with the pandit tomorrow for the marriage preparations."

Sanyukta's parent's looked at Renuka, awe-struck by what was happening, never expecting any of it.

Randhir noticed Renuka smile at Sanyukta warmly and he knew that it wasn't only him who would be getting his mother's love this time, Sanyukta would receive it equally.
AWH AWH AWH! PERFECT.

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One more chapter left and then this story will come to a close. Don't forget to leave your comments. 😛 Thanks for all your lovely comments by the way, I love all of you for reading this fic!


Okay....I was in a good mood. When I was going to review... But I just happened to read the first line of your closing... and I became utterly😭 depressed. GOSH. NO. YOU JUST CAN'T END IT. I LOVE THIS TOO MUCH. I LOVE YA TOO MUCH.
okay... now I am just going to have to act like nothing happened.. and I didn't read that...😭
Coming to the chapter. I can't tell you how much this chapter was needed. Like. Seriously. The Reconciliation. Her Parent's Aggravation. Sandhir Togetherness. Like. All of it. IT WAS SO ESSENTIAL. AND I CAN'T EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE IT BECAUSE IT'S JUST SO REAL. THE EMOTIONS THEIR ACTIONS THEIR LOVE. It's all just real. And I love it.
I have told you many times before... but I think I need to say it again... you're perfection and your writing is perfection. It all just becomes amazing. I seriously think you need to merge all of these into one post once you're done so that I can have ALL of my friends read it. I seriously am going to force them to read it because this has it all. 👏👏👏👏👏 Like please. Just do it. For all those people out there that can enjoy this all at once and then have a heart attack with the amount of happiness/shock/sadness/and/laughter that they get from this.
I can't believe this is my second to last review. WAIT I CAN'T BELIEVE IT. NOW I AM GOING TO GO AND DO ECONOMICS AND SULK... 👏 Love you di.
TEAM SAFFI!
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two updates !!!! hame lottory lag gaye !!!! but u r winding up, its sad...
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I have unressed both of them on Page 39. So yeah... I made a huge short-answer reply ... hehe! I hope you like it. And seriously... you're just amazing. Love ya.
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3 cheers for renuka sanyal
How gud she ws
..yeahh
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Posted: 11 years ago
Renuka is such a good lady!! She understands randhir soo much!!

Awesome Saffi!! I am loving the way story is nearing its end!!

Keep writing! Update ASAP!! Waiting...

Love,
Sam!
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Two updates...!! Already did a happyy dance😳
Ur choice of words is so beautiful..!! I am totally awestruck
Renuka Randhir reunion was sucha beautiful scene...
N Randhir loves Sanyukta so 😳much..!! he can turn tables for her
Lovin It
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Awesome and Amazing...
loved it...
Edited by k.kalyani - 11 years ago

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