When I Was Your Man - Drabble Story - Epilogue - Page 42 (17)

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Awesome Drabble collection dear...!!
I really loved each n every one...!!❤️
Ur a really an amazing writing...!!!!
Keep writing more..!!!:D
Love,
Shalini

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Thanks for the sweet comments all! =)

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Menika

@BrunoMars

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Bruno Mars reference? *goes off to reads*

*smiles like crazy while she is confused about all the emotions*

It's kinda sad, and at the same time so, good...? Like, it brings the best out of love doesn't it? The way it should be? Selfless, the development in Randhir's character, valuing love instead of being even more bitter after Sanyukta had already chosen for Parth. It's really good. The concept is brilliant, the drabbles are totally adorable. I especially like the way it would actually seem like she only is there with Randhir when she needs him, yet it doesn't seem like that at all. It doesn't come over like her using him, but as their bonding being that way, I'm talking too much. Awesome work you!

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Piya1702

@Piya1702

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

This is heights of awesomeness!!!
Till yesterday,i thot that nothing could be better then "Of broken hearts"...but after reading this collection,m feeling damn confused as to which is better😲

the 1st two rabbles made me cry...soo much pure love...😭
but the next two made me recall a very famous quote "Let ur love go away...If it comes back,it is urs forever...If it doesnt,it was never meant to be urs"...

Overall,It was superb...fabulous beyond words👏
when r u updating the next chapter??
if its in sometime,i can stay online the whole nite to read it😊

Edited by Piya1702 - 11 years ago

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Arohi

@.Peeves.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Okay, I completely loved it <33

These made me fall in love with Randhir again. Such a kid he is :( The first two drabbles were heart touching specially the second one!

He could see them feeding each other with love in the cafeteria, gossiping on the stairway after class, he even caught them kissing behind the college building once.

^^ I can imagine how he must have felt ! Would have broken him completely but still he smiled, smiled when she topped, smiled when he saw her happy :')

Randhir knew that he would need to bring her smile back to her face, even if it meant that he would bleed while picking up the broken pieces of her heart.

^^ This line broke my heart inturn :(

Update soon, 'kay? :D