Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 43

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shiv456

fantastic i hope they get away from the house


Thanks! I hope you like what's coming up ahead 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

loved it...hope help come on the time


Thanks, Ranogill! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky_sathiya

You are back with bang and a wonderful update.


Thank you😊 - I was a little nervous, posting after a long break ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sman

amazing..loving it


Thank you, sman!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: segad

lovely. i love ornate doors with hidden keys. you dont see them anymore. part of the charm of old havelis. her memories were astounding. a link to his past maybe?



Thank you, segad, for appreciating the details. I used to love the main door of my grandpa's home with its funny locks and intricate carving! Some memories stay with you life long - especially if they made a deep impression on your psyche or were life altering 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

damn what a place to stop
will they be caught or not
i bloody well hope not
but that is far from what intrigued me
wow khushi what a way to hit a guy
she sure can be very resourceful when she tries
and boy did she try or what
god knows what was in that injection
could be poison or more deadly drug
he had to be saved naa
and she did save arnav but for her its dhruv
the way she hit him on the head with that vase wow
their chase and hide haiyye
but khushi and her fear of darkness
oh dear that was scary for her
but arnav hai naa
he sure did calm her down
but who would have calmed him down
after being that close to her
awww he liked how she tried to protect him
hmmm her sixth sense sure is right
this room dont bode well for them
what was that all about with her nightmare



Sorry! Didn't mean to stop there - or did I? 😉
This part was supposed to be longer - but because of the long break, I was eager to post as soon as I could. But the next part will be up soon. There will be more cliffhangers and twists - what is Submerged! without those 😆 - but I promise not to interrupt their moments!

"but who would have calmed him down
after being that close to her"

chavvi16, his troubles are only going to increase 😊

Thank you, my friend, for posting such detailed and wonderful comments!



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: addicted25

Welcome back, short and sweet even if you left us with a cliffhanger!.

So khushi has been here before? So she must be related to what happened . Was she hiding then fell through to a secret room. Sheesh Mahal must have so many... I woyldclove to visit the place.Well done looking forward to part3 .


Addicted, my friend, you are too good! Yes, part 3 will have more details coming up! Hope you like it, and hope I can keep you intrigued 😊

Thank you for staying with me, and coming over so promptly to post your encouraging comment!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Brilliant update.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
I loved it.❤️
I loved how Khushi got courage to protect Arnav from Shyam.😲👏⭐️
Running away together to save themselves from Shyam was so exciting and thrilling.😲👏👏⭐️⭐️
I am interested to know about Khushis' past, she felt like she had been there before.😲
I can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zafi

Brilliant update.⭐️

I loved it.❤️
I loved how Khushi got courage to protect Arnav from Shyam.
Running away together to save themselves from Shyam was so exciting and thrilling.⭐️
I am interested to know about Khushis' past, she felt like she had been there before.😲
I can't wait to read more.
Thanks.😃




Thank you, Zafi! More revelations coming up in next part, hang on! 😊


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