Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 42

loved it...hope help come on the time

You are back with bang and a wonderful update.

lovely. i love ornate doors with hidden keys. you dont see them anymore. part of the charm of old havelis. her memories were astounding. a link to his past maybe?

damn what a place to stop
will they be caught or not
i bloody well hope not
but that is far from what intrigued me
wow khushi what a way to hit a guy
she sure can be very resourceful when she tries
and boy did she try or what
god knows what was in that injection
could be poison or more deadly drug
he had to be saved naa
and she did save arnav but for her its dhruv
the way she hit him on the head with that vase wow
their chase and hide haiyye
but khushi and her fear of darkness
oh dear that was scary for her
but arnav hai naa
he sure did calm her down
but who would have calmed him down
after being that close to her
awww he liked how she tried to protect him
hmmm her sixth sense sure is right
this room dont bode well for them
what was that all about with her nightmare

Welcome back, short and sweet even if you left us with a cliffhanger!.

So khushi has been here before? So she must be related to what happened . Was she hiding then fell through to a secret room. Sheesh Mahal must have so many... I woyldclove to visit the place.Well done looking forward to part3 .

Originally posted by: crazyweird

Oo...just loved the update

Cant wait to read ahead

Originally posted by: honey-sweety

That was wonderful update...

I must say Kushi is too brave and she actully hit Shyam to save Arnav...

Originally posted by: LUCKYRADHI

hum tum ek kamre mein band ho ... 😳

Originally posted by: docs

Wow...waiting

Originally posted by: mamidis

Very nice one