IKK PG147 all is well that ends well - Page 67

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Posted: 18 years ago
rach dear the too parts were tooo rocking i simply loved them very much..they were simply superb...
very damn well written.... tooo cooll.... just wonderful... amazing...awesome..... 👏 now please continue soon..me will be eagerly waiting for the next part.... 😃 sorry for such a short comment..will surely give a big comment for the next part.....sorry.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

rach dear the too parts were tooo rocking i simply loved them very much..they were simply superb...
very damn well written.... tooo cooll.... just wonderful... amazing...awesome..... 👏 now please continue soon..me will be eagerly waiting for the next part.... 😃 sorry for such a short comment..will surely give a big comment for the next part.....sorry.... 😊

aww Surya Di dont b sorry....lol thts long enuf 4 me....well im heading off 2 my cuzins 2day might b staying the night then i have exam on monday so next part shud b on monday after my exam😃 vaise im still waiting 4 my eidi😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Previously
The lights dimmed as Angad and Kripa shared another passionatte kiss. Outside Kunal smiled seeing his brother get what he loved most in the world. Suddenly the room started spinning, Kunal held his head and fell to the floor.....oblivious to Angad inside.....
Part 35
Kunal lay on the floor unconcious as Angad and Kripa shared a hug. They got up and made their way to the door, Angad tried opening it but Kunal's legs were blocking the door
K - kya hua?
A - pata nahin.....doors not opening
Angad pushed the door again but it still wouldn't open, he decided to look through the window and to his horror he saw Kunal
A - bhai!!!
Angad used his force and the door opened slightly, he stuck his foot out and made the door open wide enough for him and Kripa to get out. As soon as he did he went to the floor and put Kunal's head in his lap
A - bhai....bhai...ankhen kholo bhai
Angad shook Kunal but he wouldn't wake up, he slapped him lightly a few times but all in vain
A - Kripa....hospital ko phone karte hai
K - Angad.....ambulance ko bohat time lage ga...hum isse le jaate hai
A - ok
Angad picked Kunal up in his arms and him and Kripa headed for the lift, they reached outside and Kripa took Angad's keys and opened the car, she opened the door and sat in, Angad put Kunal in the back with his head in Kripa's lap. he then jumped in the drivers seat and drove to the hospital.
K - Angad jaldi!
A - i am!
Angad drove as fast as he could and they reached the hospital, Angad jumped out the car and carried Kunal inside,
A - someone help!!!!
D - kya hua isse?
A - doctor! pata nahin ye behosh the....please kuch kijiye
D - isse stretcher par letao
Angad put Kunal on the stretcher, then sat down next to Kripa as the doctors took Kunal away and examined him.The doctor came and stood by Angad
A - mera bhai?
D - please follow me
Angad followed the doctor into his office, they sat down, Angad was anxious
D - Mr....
A - Khanna.....bhai....i mean Kunal..is he ok?
D - aap iske bhai ho?
A - ji
D - tho aapko iska kayal rakhna chahiye tha
A - kya hua bhai ko?
D - he has a brain tumour (😭)
It seemed as if the floor beneath Angad's feet disappeared, he was in shock
A - brain tumour?
D - yes.....
A - operation?
D - im sorry sir....lekin mere kayal se tumhare bhai ko brain tumour khafi dher se hua hai.....ye last stages par hai
A - kitna waqt?
D - 2 weeks maybe three....im sorry sir
Tears trickled down Angad's face, he got out the seat and walked out the office, Kripa sensed something was wrong
K - Angad kya kaha doctor ne?
Angad just looked at her, he turned and saw Kunal lying on the bed with machines by him, he opened the door, the nurse looked at him
N - sir you can't be here
A - he's my brother
N - ok
Angad sat down next to Kunal, the nurse walked outside, Angad held Kunal's hand and started crying, he put his head on the bed. How fast time goes by you never know, it had been 4 hours since Angad had entered the room, he opened his eyes and saw Kripa standing on the other side of the bed, she had also been crying. Angad wondered how she found out, he lifted his head up and saw Kunal had woken up and was sitting up
K - hey bro.....gheri neend aayi thi?
Angad looked at Kunal and hugged him
K - shhhh Angad.....please
A - kyun bhai? bataya kyun nahin
K - issi vaja se.....agar tumhe bata diya tha tho tum issi tara dhuki hokar mere paas bet tha
A - aapko kab pata laga ke aap ko.....
K - jab main Australia vapas gaya tha
**Flashback**
Kunal reaches Australia, he sees his friend Vivaan waiting for him, Kunal walks towards him. They go to Kunal's house, Kunal walks inside but his head starts hurting and he collapses on the sofa........Vivaan takes him to the hospital
K - doctor is everything ok?
D - im sorry Mr Khanna...if you had the check up earlier then maybe.....
K - maybe what?
D - maybe we could have operated
K - what's happened?
D - you have a brain tumour
**Reality**
K - fhir maine faisala kar liya....main yahan vapas aaonga....tumse larne ke liye....fhir Australia jakar chup chap mar jaata main....
A (cries) - bhai please...appko kuch nahin hoga....abhi tho Sujal ki shaadi aane vali hai....aur meri....Prithvi ki....aapko sab ki shaadi mein naachna hai....gaana hai
K - Angad bro please tum....
A - nahin bhai....fhir aapko bhi shaadi karni hogi....aur hum dono ke bache ko aap hi samaloge....hum saath saath rahenge mama ke saath....aapko kuch nahin hoga
Kunal hugs his brother, Angad pulls away and walks out
K - Kripa...please uske paas jao......usse tumhari zaroorat hai
Kr - ok
Kripa goes outside and sees Angad standing by a wall, he sees Kripa and hugs her and cries
Kr - shhh Angad...dheko ab hum kuch nahin kar sakte...bas dhekna hai ke Kunal ko koi kami nahin mehsoos hoti
A - tum teek keh rahi ho.....lekin mama?
Kr - voh hum baad mein dhekte hai....chalo doctor se poochte hai ke kya hum Kunal ko ghar le ja sakte hai
A - doctor....kya hum Kunal ko le jaa sakte hai?
D - yes lekin usko ahraam ki sakt zuroorat hai aur yeh dawayian time par leni hogi
A - ok doctor
Angad does the formalities and takes Kunal home, Naina had been waiting, she sees the boys and gets angry
N - yeh koi waqt hai aane ka
A - sorry mama....voh hum
K - voh Angad Kripa ke saath tha....mom....Angad shaadi karne vala hai
N - kya?
K - isne Kripa ko propose bhi kar liya
Naina hugs them both, Angad cannot stand it and runs upstairs
N - isse kya hua?
K - kuch nahin mom....sharma gaya hai
Kunal goes upstairs and goes to Angad
K - bro dhek.....mama ko kuch nahin pata lagna chahiye....abhi nahin
A - ok bhai
K - ab tum so jao....kal bohat saari tayariyan karni hogi.....Sujal ki shaadi hai do din mein
Angad hugs Kunal, he lies down but cannot sleep, he looks at a family photo and sees Kunal disappearing from it
A - nahin!!!
Angad smashes the photo
A - main apne bhai ko marne nahin doonga.....i wont!
To be continued
coming up - wedding!!!
i know you lot are thinking but what about all the functions...truth be told..i wanna skip to the wedding hope thts ok? unless you want me 2 do all the functions....let me kno
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Posted: 18 years ago
😭 😭 😭 poor kunal

awesome part as always 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!

luved it!!!
😭 😭 😭 feel sry 4 kunal tho 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part 👏 👏 👏
i feel bad for kunal 😭 😭 😭 will he really die??? 😭 😕 😭
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part! rocking as always! poor kunal 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety223

😭 😭 😭 poor kunal

awesome part as always 👏 👏 👏

thnx a lot😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awesome part!!!

luved it!!!
😭 😭 😭 feel sry 4 kunal tho 😭 😭 😭

thnx😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgirl249

awsome part 👏 👏 👏
i feel bad for kunal 😭 😭 😭 will he really die??? 😭 😕 😭
cont soon plz 😊 😊 😊

thnx😊 awww hun im afraid......i cnt telll you😭

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