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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Romaine_27



ANd well HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO SAARA AND RAJEEV.......even though I don't know you personnaly but still hope you guys will have an awesome year-not only year but LIFE too!!!

It's me SUMRA, shazia_haya

HEYY sumra thankxx alot for wishing me and rajev i am saying this on his behalf as we are born on the same day ITS AN AMAZING FEELING IF U ARE BORN ON THE SAME DAY AS THE PERSON WHOM U LOVE FRM TEH LEFT-RIGHT-TOP-BOTTOM I MEAN THE WHOLE HEART!!!😆

THANKX ONCE AGAIN!!!

Saraa

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pink sky

Wow that was a beautiful fanfic I have ever read.

M-i-n-d-b-l-o-w-i-n-g and f-a-n-t-a-b-u-l-o-u-s fanfic.

Those were amazing long parts you have posted.

A request can you increase the size of the text and change the colour to a darker colour as it is not visible.

Please continue as soon as possible this is lovely fanfic I have read till now.

thanx a lot...erm teek hai lol
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Romaine_27

Hey I really found this part funny:

S - tum itni saaji kyun ho?
K - tum kyun nahin saaje!
S - it's just a walk....
K - i don't care...go home and change
S - what?!
K - suna nahin! go home and change, main upar jaati hoon....wear something nice samje!


and it was an awesome update RACH DI!!



ANd well HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY TO SAARA AND RAJEEV.......even though I don't know you personnaly but still hope you guys will have an awesome year-not only year but LIFE too!!!

It's me SUMRA, shazia_haya

heheheheh lol i kno...my sister was next 2 me while i was writin it....lol n she was laffin as well.....😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev_eijaz

i bugged u loads and loads but phir bhi apna moun nahin khola 😆u have a solid stomach unlike mee

okk i will be waiting for the next parttttttt and ***********ONCE AGAIN FOR THE DEDICATION!!!!

Saraaa

yep very strong stomach 😆 agar main moon kholti tho poora surprise ruin ho jata! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part!!!!

loved it!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part
happy belated b'day to saara n rajeev
cont soon
arghhh stupid suhana but i cant still believe she done it all..i still think she's being forced to
cant wait for angad 2 humiliate her though 😆 😆 😆
naina betta believe kunal 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful part. oh yeah, angad kill that suhana, i just hate her 😡

Happy b'day Rajeev and Saraa.Many many happy returns of the day
Edited by del_geo - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Previously
S - haan hoon...kyunki yeh baat main hosh mein nahin keh sakta.....so will you marry me Kashish?
K (smiles) - yes...yes of course i will!!!!
Both hug each other...Sujal tries twirling Kashish round but can't, he gives a the ring and kisses her hand and then her cheek and then her lips
K - pehle papa ko poochte hai aur aunty ko....
S - tumne haan kar di...jo tum kaho meri jaan!
Kashish takes Sujal into the car, she drives to Sujal's house but sees he is asleep, she knows she can't carry him....so she falls asleep in the car as well.
Part 24
Angad's house is shown, then his room we see its empty, we then see the living room and see Angad spread out on a 3 seat sofa fast asleep and we see Kripa asleep on the one seat sofa opposite him. Suyesh comes down and opens the curtains, the rays of light hit Angad's eyes, he moans and wakes up, he sits up and straight away holds his head
A - arrghhh my head! dad close the curtains!
S - hmm amatures! jab tum alcohol peete ho tho apne limit mein bhi raho Angad!
A - please no lecture...my head!!!
S - hmm yeh lo tumhari dawai
Suyesh hands him some asprin and a glass of water, Angad takes it and closes his eyes to go back to sleep, Kripa wakes up hearing all this
K - good morning uncle
S - morning beta.....voh kal raat tum dono bohat taake hue the tho isliye maine tumhe yahin par rehn diya
K - oh i see...uncle main shower lekar aati hoon
S - ok beta
Kripa goes upstairs, Suyesh nudges Angad, who pushes his hand away, Suyesh then nudges him again, Angad gets up and looks at his dad
A - sone kyun nahin dete!
S - agar sona hai tho apne kamre mein son jo!
Reluctantly Angad makes his way upstairs, he is outside his room when he decides to have a shower, he walks slowly to the bathroom and opens the door, he yawns and looks inside and is mesmerised to see Kripa wearing a towel, she is about to take it off when she sees him
K - ANGAD!
A - huh...erm sorry
He turns around and walks outside with a big smile on his face, Kripa quickly shuts the door and locks it, Angad trails to his room and collapses on the bed. Kripa comes out the bathroom and sees him sleeping, she smiles and goes to wake him up
K - Angad utho
A - leave me alone
Kripa smiles and gets her wet hair and shakes it so water falls on him, he wakes up straight away and looks at her angrily
K - jao aur naha kar aao
A (cheekily) - aao dono saath saath naha the hai...ek hi towel mein....
Kripa hits him and pulls him up, she then takes him to the bathroom and pushes him inside and laughs. After he has showered, he comes downstairs
A - chalo Kripa college chalte hai
K - ok
Angad walks outside to see his car isn't there, he runs inside
A - wheres my car!!!!!
K - oh haan voh kal raat Kashish legayi thi....shahid Sujal ke ghar hogi
A - ok erm I'll phone him...dad can i take you.....
S - the keys are on the shelf
Angad smiles and grabs the keys, while driving he calls Sujal.......Sujal's phone rings, Sujal moans and ignores it, then it rings again, he picks it up
S - hmm hello
A - dude...you got my car?
S - huh?
A - my car...you know...car...mine....
Sujal opens his eyes and finds himself outdoors, he looks to his left and notices he is Angad's car
S - erm yea..
A - ok bring it to college
S - ok
Sujal hangs up and yawns, he looks to his right and is surprised to find Kashish
S - Kashish......
He looks at her and smiles, then he notices the ring on her finger, he holds her hand
S - yaani ki maine propose kar liya....aur usne haan kar diya....yes im so happy! Kashish!!! Kashish!!!
she wakes up and looks at him
K - itna chila kyun rahe ho?
S -hum Angad ki gaadi mein kya kar rahe ho?
K - oh haan kal raat jab tumne zyaadi pilee thi main tumhe ghar lekar aayi thi lekin tumhe gaadi se nikal nahin payi tho yahin par so gayi
S - i see....ok wait here let me get changed..Mrs Garewal to be.....
He winks, Kashish looks confused then sees the ring and remembers, she smiles. Sujal gets changed and takes Kashish to her house so she can get changed, Meanwhile Angad is with Kripa in the canteen, Angad is in great thought
K - kis baare mein soch rahe ho?
A - hmmmm Suhana ke baare mein.....
K - uske baare mein kyun?
A - soch raha hoon...kuch aisa karoon jiski vajaa se uski nazrein sabke saamne jhuke aur voh sharminda hojaye
K - hmmm kaise?
A - erm i think I have an idea....tell me...Suhana does gym right?
K - haan kyun?
A - who else does gym?
K - erm Anita....Sheetal...Jasmine...
A - Jasmine..ok gotta find Sujal...bye love you
Angad runs off leaving Kripa confused. Sujal is walking through the coridoors when Angad finds him
S - peechee kaun para?
A - koi nahin why?
S - tho fhir tezi se kyun daud raha tha?
A - huh....you're weird...anyways listen......
Angad tells him the idea, Sujal smiles and nods in agreement
A - tomorrow ok?
S - sure
Elsewhere Kunal is at home cursing himself and the dilema he is in
K - kya karoon.....dammit *****
His phone rings.....its Suyesh
S - hmm you know....aaj tumhara aakhari din hai....batao mujhe kya kayal hai....apni mama ko sab batane vale ho...ya main apne vakeel ko phone karoon
K - nahin! erm I'll tell mom
S -ok and Kunal....aaj main vahan aaonga....in 2 hours......agar tumne sab kuch nahin bataya tho tumhari mama ko main bata doon ga aur saath saath apne vakeel ko bhi phone kardoon ga
Kunal throws the phone on the bed, he goes outside and sees his mom in the kitchen, he makes his way downstairs to her
K - mom i need to talk to you
N - bolo..
K - sit down.....
Naina sits down and listens eagarly as Kunal confesses his crimes, taers fall down her eyes as she remembers how she treated Angad
K - i'm sorry mom!!! really I'm.....
He doesn't have time to finish his sentance as Naina slaps him, she slaps him again
N - get out.....leave this house!
K - mom main.....
N - tumhari vajaa se maine apne Angad par shak kiya....usse is ghar se nikal diya....lanat hai mujh par ke maine tujh jaise bete ko janam diya!
Naina sits down and cries, Kunal puts his hand towards her but pulls it bag, he rushes upstairs to pack. Suyesh arrives to see Kunal putting his luggage in the car
S - im glad you told her the truth..even if money was your incentive
K - meaning?
S - matlab ke main apni vasiyat kabhi badalne vala nahin tha, agar badalni thi....then it would take more than three days to process beta.....
Kunal looks at his dad in anger, he slams the boot and is about to get in, Suyesh stops him
K - ab kya!
S - your ticket.....your flight leaves in five hours
Kunal grabs the ticket and zooms off, Suyesh goes inside to comfort Naina, they talk and he convinces her to speak to Angad, he takes her to his house and both await Angad. He comes home laughing with Prithvi...both are shocked to see her
A/P - mom......
N - i'm sorry my sons.....mujhe sab kuch pata hai
A - mama aap kyun sorry keh rahe shhh forget it all
Naina hugs both Prithvi and Angad
yeh hai tere karam
kabhi khushi kabhi gham
na judaa honge hum
kabhi khushi kabhi gham....
N - ghar aaoge?
Angad looks at Suyesh, he smiles and nods his head, Angad smiles
A - nekki aur pooch pooch? of course!!
They hug again....Angad is shown in his room....speaking to Sujal on the phone about the plan....
To be continued
I know was a short n boring part...had 2 get rid of kunal....and didnt want to drag the emotional scenes....
Coming up - The plan.....will it be successful? Kashish tells her dad about the proposal.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
i really dont care that it was a bit short but im just glad u got rid of kunal!!!! angad and prthvi are cleard.. now continue veryyy soon and make sure that suhana is embearessed.. im still sticking to my theory but still im mad at suhana and in an evil moodd MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!

hope kashish's father doesnt cause too much trouble!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
i couldnt find ur ff bcaus u changed the titele...lol, i was abt to skip over it xept i saw ur ID and i was like "O! THATS IT!!" lol.. 😆 im wierd like tat. anwyas, cont soon! cnat wait for more!

x3 Prakriti

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