IKK PG147 all is well that ends well - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
aweeesommeeee!!! 👏 👏 ur amnazing 😃 😃 ...ur a veryy good writer..wish i cud write like that or think of ideas like that 😆 cant wait for the next part..continue soon! 😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
Previously
Prithvi walks out, Suhana gets changed and lies down. She falls asleep thinking about Prithvi. Prithvi knocks on the door to check up on her, he sees her sleeping, he smiles, turns the light off and closes the door.

Part 10

Suhana wakes up, she looks and gets confused as to where she is

S - main kahan......

Before she can finish her sentence their is a knock on the door

S - come in.....

Prithvi walks in with a tray with two cups of coffee, Suhana remembers.

P - good morning

S - good morning

P - neend achi aayi right?

S - yes thanks

P - ok...ab jao aur freshen up karlo, tab tak coffee thodi tandi hoti hai aur hum saath saath peethe hai

S - ok...bathroom?

P - down the hall to your left

Suhana gets up and walks out the room, Prithvi opens the curtains and does the bed while she freshens up. She comes back and smiles at Prithvi

S - thanks...

P - kis baat ke liye?

S - mujhe yahan rehne ke liye

P - oh mention not, aur yeh lo coffee, is it ok?

S - its fine

Suhana gets her bag, she takes her phone out of it

P - kya hua? kis ko phone kar rahi ho?

S - no one....missed calls dhek rahi hoon

P - oh i see

S - just as i thought

P - matlab?

S - mama ka koi bhi phone nahin aya...i told you voh meri parva nahin karti

P - so what...apna mood mat kharab karo, ab get changed, im making breakfast, fhir hum dono college chale jaate hai ok?

S - ok...Prithvi....

p - yea?

S - tumhare parents?

P - Dehli mein rehte hai....i live alone

S - oh ok.....tum jao main aati hoon

Prithvi goes downstairs and makes breakfast, he is putting the food on the table when Suhana comes down

P - aayiye breakfast is served

S - thanks

P - uff tum thanks bohat kehti ho

S - oh sorry

P - of ho ab sorry bhi

S - acha i wont say it again khush?

P - yep

They have breakfast and leave the house to go to college. 15 minutes later they arrive, Suhana is about to get out the car when Prithvi hands her something

S - yeh kya?

P - mera phone number.....next time tumhe koi problem hai...tho Sujal aur Kashish ki date ko mat rokna...mujhe phone kar dena ok

S (smiles) - ok Prithvi...see you

P - yea...i will come to the library later....

They both laugh. As Suhana gets out the car, some girls stare at her

girl1 - oh my god Prithvi is ladki ke saath kya kar raha hai?

girl2 - she's such a benji

girl3 - lagta hai yeh bohat gareeb hai isliye isne Prithvi se lift maangi hogi

girl1 - iski hesiyat isse batani hogi

Suhana is hurt by their comments, Prithvi gets out the car, and walks towards the girls, Suhana stops him

S - rehn do, let them say what they want, i dont care

P - lekin....

S - please Prithvi

P - ok

Suhana walks off, the girls keep talking, Prithvi gets angry and walks up to them

girl2 - oh hi Prithvi....handsome

girl1 - kaise ho darling.....

P - main tho teek hoon....lagta hai tum logon ki tabiyat kharab hai..

girl3 - what?

P - yes...i mean...kis pagal khaane se aaye ho tum?

girl2 - Prithvi!

P - chilao mat! apne aap ko Miss World samajthi ho? arre Miss World ke paas dhimaak hota hai.....jo tumhare paas nahin, agli baar tum logon ne Suhana ko kuch kaha....then you will have me to deal with ok?

girl3 - us benji ke liye itni concern kyun?

P - tumhe kya takleef hai....aur voh benji nahin....bohat achi ladki hai...aur kya kaha tumne gareeb? hesiyat?...arre uska maan chahe tho tumhare parents ko naukar baana ke apne ghar le jaaye, hesiyat ki baatein karte ho

The girls look at Prithvi angrily, Prithvi walks away. Meanwhil Angad is on his way to his first lesson and is with his current girlfriend Maya, he is walking in front of her, she is behind him listening and talking to him

A - so kal raat was a blast na?

M - yep...it was great...aaj raat ko bhi jaana chahiye

A - yea we should...kya pehne vali ho?

M - Angad youre so naughty

She hits him softly from behind, they carry on walking and talking, Maya spots someone she knows and walks off without telling Angad anything, he thinks she is still there. Kripa is on her way to her lesson and co-incidently walks behind Angad

A - arre batao na, kya pehne vali ho?

K (thinks) - mujhse baatein kar raha?

A - Maya tum kuch bolti kyun nahin?

K (thinks) - Maya.....

A - wait i know...logon ke saamne nahin bolna chahti its ok i understand. Ok babes my lessons here

Angad turns around with his eyes closed, grabs Kripa and gives her a long kiss.....Kripa pushes him and off and slaps him

K - Angad!!!

Angad opens his eyes

A - Kripa!!! Maya kahan gayi....

K - arghhhhh you idiot.tumne mujhe kiss kyun kiya!!!!

A - voh mujhe laga ke tum Maya ho.....

K - arre agar kiss karna hi tha tho pehle dhek tho lete ke kaun hai

A - lekin voh mere peeche hi thi....isliye maine socha....

K - you are sick!!!

A - arre im sorry ok...naraz mat hona...and hey tum lucky ho...ke Angad Khanna ne tumhe kiss kiya

K - Angad....bhaag jao...abhi issi waqt varna dobara thappad parega...bhaag jao!

Angad runs off quickly, Kripa calms herself down and goes to her lesson. Later that day Suhana is walking out the library to get a drink, a group of guys and girls are looking at her

girl1 - yeh vahi ladki hai jo aaj subah Prithvi ke saath aayi thi?

guy1 - yep yeh vahi hai....Prithvi ka naya shikar

girl2 - kaash ke voh main hoti uski gaadi mein

guy2 - hai kaash yeh meri shikaar hoti tho mazaa aata

guy1 - kyun na chakle mazaa

The two guys walk in front of Suhana

S - haatiye please.....

guy1 - haat jayenge...pehle mazaa tho karne de

S - move please

guy2 - agar nahin hote tho kya karlogi

One of the guys grab Suhana's hand and squeezes it

S - ow you're hurting me

guy1 - aur chilao mazaa aata hai

The guy pushes her against the wall, his friend is about to take Suhana's dupatta when a hand grabs his wrist, Suhana looks up and sees Sujal

S -ladki ka haath chord

guy1 - agar nahin chorda tho?

S - lagta hai tu mujhe jaanta nahin...shahid naam suna hoga..Sujal..Sujal Garewal

guy2 - oh **** arre chal yahan se

The two guys run off, Sujal looks at Suhana, she has tears in her eyes

S - you ok?

Suh - yes, thanks Sujal

S - its ok, chalo

Sujal walks with Suhana so no one else says anything to her, they both go to the canteen where Prithvi is

P - hey Sujal, Suhana you guys ok?

S - yea dude

P - Suhana...tum ro rahi ho? kya hua? aunty ka phone aaya?

Suh - nahin kuch nahin

She walks away to get a drink

P - kya hua usse?

S - kuch nahin yaar, kuch ladke usse cher rahe the aur....

P (angry) - what! kaun the voh?

S - chord na, i handled it

P - mere sawal ka jawab dhe Sujal kaun the voh?

S - chord na

P - tu nahin batayga....Suhana!

Suh - haan Prithvi

P - kaun the voh ladke?

Suh - voh erm...voh....

P - bata mujhe Suhana

Suh - voh.....

P - tumhe meri kasam

Suh (shocked) - aao tumhe dikhati hoon

S - Prithvi!!! oh ****

Suhana takes Prithvi and they find the two guys, Suhana points them out

P - yahan ruko...aur haan yeh faro

He takes off his jacket and hands it to her, hes wearing a white t shirt and his muscles are clearly visible, he walks towards the two guys, they look at him and stop their conversation

guy1 - kya hai?

guy2 - hey aise kyun dhek raha hai

Prithvi doesn't say anything but starts pucnhing and beating the guys up, everyone is just watching, the dean sees the crowd and goes towards it, before he gets there Sujal arrives with Angad

A - Prithvi chord!!!

S - dean aah raha hai chord usse Prithvi

A - Prithvi bas!!!

Angad pulls Prithvi off him, Sujal and Angad drag Prithvi away, Suhana walks away

A - kya zuroorat thi yeh sab karne ke liye?

P - usne Suhana ke saath.....

S - haan tho maine handle kar liya tha....

P - i dont care, koi Suhana ke baare mein kuch bhi kahe ya uske saath kuch kare mujhse bardaasht nahin hota

S - lekin...

P - Sujal tu kuch nahin jaanta uske baare mein...yaar i feel protected towards her.......

A - Prithvi....cummon yaar kaisi baatein kar raha?

P - pata nahin lekin usse is halat mein nahin dhek sakta

S - i think....

P- kya?

S - tumhe us se pyaar hogaya

P - kya? nahin aisi koi baat nahin.....

S - mujhe tho lagta hai...dheere dheere tujhe bhi lage ga

Prithvi walks away, Suhana hears everything and is happy, she walks off to the library, Prithvi sees her and walks behind her just to make sure she is ok

P - kya Sujal ki baat......

Prithvi keeps looking at Suhana, the song I Am In Love comes on

seene mein hulchul hai

dhadkhan bhi paagal hai

haastha hai rotha hai

dil mein kuch hota hai

aisa lagta hai jaise i am in love

aisa lagta hai jaise i am in love

i am in love

jaagi hoon sohi hoon

khawbhon mein khohi hoon

jab tanha rehti hoon

kudh se kuch kehti hoon

aisa lagta hai jaise i am in love

aisa lagta hai jaise i am in love

i am in love

na jaane kab kaise maine hosh guvaya hosh gavaya

deewana dil kho gaya kaise samaj na paaya samaj na paaya

kya mausaam aaya hai pagalpaan chahya hai

koi tho jaadu hai kudh pe na khabu hai

Edited by rachandeep - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part.. prithvi ko kab ehsaas aye ga.. yaar.. i am waiting.. also i luved that ak slap.. i luv when she does that.. tho i feel bad for angad but still he deserved it.. he shouldve looked first!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part Angad kissed kripa and a slap
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Posted: 19 years ago
the story is going great..simply superb... i totally love it... keep up the good work.....👏
please try to continue soon...me will be waiting for the next part eagerly..... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome part! i wish there was mroe ak scene anywes cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome mindblasting part!!!!
I LOVED IT
SUJAL AND PRITHVI IN ACTION LOOK AWESOME UR STORY IS GNG HITT ACTUALLLY SUPERHITTT 😆


CONTINUE SOON ME WAITING EAGERLYYY FOR THE OTEHR SIDE OF SUJAL 😆 😆 😆



Saraa
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 😆 lol lovely comment sara....thanks everyone...dont worry ak fan....AK scenes will b soon.... 😃 😃 next part will b 2moro...kinda buzi 2day 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part!!!!

awwww..prithvi is in love! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing part yaar. continue soon 😳

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