You've Fallen - KriYaansh and SwaRon FF *temporarily paused*

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Swathi

@Pinkylibbi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Dude, you know what?
This is simply awesome. I wonder, how you manage to write beautifully.
I am loving it more and more.

I like Swayam's dad teasing him.

Great job dude.
Update fast and pm me.

And yeah, thanks for the pm.

Edited by Pinkylibbi - 11 years ago

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

wow,, mr. angrez and miss indian jodi i moving steadily,,,

rey's dad is supercool...directly future daughter in law...

arya this was amazing..loved it..

pls update it soon

with love

moumita

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osina

@gal.angel

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Wow amazing update dear

M both kriyaansh n swaRon fan soo lov it on both version :-D

Thanks for Pm

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anjali

@alisha1810

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

wow its amazing yar...dey share such an amazing bond...

nd vaise bhi i love kriyaansh :D

thnx for the PM

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

I am liking this one.

The way you have jotted the chapters..itssimply amazing..

I like the concept. Simple yet fresh.

Angreza!! I am loving his laziness.. And her independence..

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Awesome Arya...

lovely..

loved the name angreza... :P

their bond is totally amazing...

loved it...

update soon...

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aanya

@aanya_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#67

This was an amazing update 😃

Kria helping rey in setting up his house n den rey's dad teasing him wid her 😛

Bechara road ke beech mein usse bula rha tha lekin kria ne bhav hi nhi diya 😆

Dey became so comfortable wid each other 😳

Beautifully portrayed 😊

Loved it Continue soon ^_^

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Hey amazing update.

Sorry Like button not working.

I'm really loving the way this story is being portrayed.

Great start.

Thanks for the PM. Update soon. :)

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Wowww it was beautifull
loved it well done
Waiting for next prt
Thnx for pm

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#70

thats cute... 😊

ye rey toh kuch zyada hi lazy hai... 😛

itna saaman... rey pagal h pura... 😆

lol... his dad... itni teasings... abhi se daughter-in-law... 😉 🤣

bechari kriya ko hi khana banana padta hoga... ye toh kuch karta nhi ... 😡

aur ab tak ride bhi nhi di... hawww 😵