Arshi FF #12: Secret Passion-CH 27--New Thread link pg 149 - Page 23

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful updt tina i think acept nk akash whole raizada greedy n mad whole raizada against arshi lov but no one can seperate them waitging for next updt tanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Tina 😊
so I guess both my predictions came true😃
months ago I had posted that I think the culprit is either Anjali or Payal...
Anjali because she's a manipulative, attention seeking and overall a greedy person...
And I thought that Payal might be dissatisfied with Aakash as a husband...
I mean really what women in her right mind would want Aakash when she can feast her eyes on steamy ASR instead...after all ASR is the perfect package...HOT! SEXY😉 RICH & ADORABLE...
He's totally lovable😳 and dreamy...so i can't blame Payal for wanting him...
however trying to off your sister to steal her husband, now that is seriously SICK😲
Payal is the perfect fit for this SICK Raizada family- pehle Dadi, phir Anjali aur Shyam and now Payal...Hai Re Nandkishore😲

I'm just waiting for the day that Aakash too does something crazy to fit in perfectly with this sick family😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
really hate arnav whole family which r only for name sake
loved how arnav punched shyam
shyam and payal r too digusting
hope soon payal real face come in front of arshi
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
sorry for late comment
i hate this anjali
she is so manipulative
just wantto use arnav lovw for her
i like how arnav talk with her today she desrve this
dadi is bi**h
its good that arnav send her to ashram
shyam deserve this blows
so i was right
i always believ that its payal who want to kill khushi
my doubt of payal obsession about arnav ia laso true
she want arnav thats why she is doing this

i lovw it when payal try to seduce arnav but arnv never look at her he was just thinking about khushi and never pay attention to her
i hope payal true face come before family soon
what lavnya problem cannot she understand that arnav never want her
i am waiting for arnav to announce in press about his and khushi relation
i hope nothing will go wring before that
thnx for pm
Edited by navjot7 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm updating BHO so thought why not put up some teasers for Secret Passion and Desert Heat while I'm at it:

Secret Passion by TINA! & Satina

Episode 25: Entrepreneur of the Year

TEASER

"Payal?"

Her loser of a husband blinked at her owlishly from the bed, blind as a bat without his glasses. "Where are you?"

"Here," she murmured, rolling her eyes at him.

Akash smiled. "Come back to bed."

She knew well what that smile meant. He was hardly ever home, but every once in a while his pint-sized brain would remember he had a wife. A wife with needs and desires.

Turning off the laptop with one last glance at Arnav's photograph--though it wasn't necessary, she'd already memorized his every feature except for the unsightly scar near his left eye. In her mind, he was perfection.

Her hands went to the tie of her robe and it fell about her ankles with a silent flutter. She was bare beneath it, just as she had been for Arnav, though he hadn't noticed. Her pulse picked up as she recalled his manly scent, the feel of his muscled back against her breasts. She'd been careless perhaps to get so close to him, but that one, fleeting point of contact had been worth it all.

Akash pulled her down and draped himself over her. She let him do as he liked though she avoided his kiss as always. He was used to that by now and didn't even try to set his lips near hers.

Her fingers clenched on his thinning hair. Like this, with his face hidden against her neck, he could almost pass for his older cousin. Almost.

But there would always be a difference between the two--one she'd never be able to ignore. Her husband sorely lacked Arnav Singh Raizada's steely strength, his skill, his persona, that powerful air of command. She was very sure that authority carried over into bed too and the thought excited her like nothing else.

"ASR," she moaned, imagining him on her. His hands. His mouth.

Akash stiffened. "ASR?"

She managed a sugary sweet smile for the idiot. "Have you forgotten your own name? Akash Singh Raizada. A. S. R."

Her husband chuckled, burrowing his head against her again. Closing her eyes, Payal pictured the real ASR on her, in her...

Her shout was loud and guttural. "ASR!"


To be continued... the Awards night coming up...😳

Edited by TINA! - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arghh payal 😡
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh that pathetic Payal... She disgusts me. ASR can be no one other than Arnav. When are you updating SP? Please update SP super soon. I am waiting for the awards night from so long...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkly

Oh that pathetic Payal... She disgusts me. ASR can be no one other than Arnav. When are you updating SP? Please update SP super soon. I am waiting for the awards night from so long...


i hope next week hun but it just depends on my sched tbh. i have it done halfway but it's a long one again so a while to go still. I'm really looking fwd to u all reading it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb teaser Tina :)
What a disgusting lady this Payal is. Some peoples mind work in funny ways. You never know they carry this amount of dirt around. She needs help!

Is our lovely Khushi and Arnav going to wear what you showed us ;) That would be awesome. They would be splendid in anything =)


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Posted: 11 years ago
Need an update soon...Payal 😡

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