Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#821

thank you for the note..waiting for the next update eagerly...

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Sharmila

@ongongong

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Posted: 11 years ago

#822

Hi,

Absolutely wonderful update, Anamika.

Loved it. So glad to see them back together.

I am sorry, busy. So no long comment 😭

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First of all a big THANK YOU from me 😃

I was really very very very very very excited about this chapter mainly about their night routine part 😉

And as always it was beyond expectation. Really liked the way you portrayed arnav's thoughts.

Hahaha.. Khushi will be khushi. The TV part was so funny. Aww...that sweet of arnav for wanting to make Khushi experience all the new things. So, Khushi finally realized shyness is the reason for her husband grumpy behavior.

Arnav was in touch with Khushi's doctor? Wow! AMAZING. Surely he didn't leave you, Khushi😊

It was really so very much like Arnav I mean the enquiry stuff and all. And the wine scene just melted my heart. He literally knows everything about her medication. And seriously, reading the new words made me want to learn foreign languages 😆 . About the missed sleeping like this scene I could clearly image in it in my head.

Everything was balanced perfectly. Right amounts of humor,drama etcetera..

Continue soon and Thanks for the PM.

Take care x

Edited by ongongong - 11 years ago

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shubhanjli

@shubhanjli

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#823

Thanks for the note..

But such a long wait... It kills us.. 😭

Try to update soon.

Please pleaseee

Edited by shubhanjli - 11 years ago

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BSDsarun

@BSDsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#824

thank you for the note...

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#825

@ Pixiegirl, that was a fantastic comment, absolutely spot on. That was the most impressive thing about the story - both were completely true to their innate selves and yet became each others'. Which is exactly why though the effort seems all on Khushi's part, it really is not an effort because that is who she is.
Though Arnav has made a few overt gestures, nevertheless he has the something in him that Khushi's self has responded to. That is what has made her his.She has been able to see beyond the lack of gestures and all the efforts she's made to something that is fundamentally true and integral to him.

Anon thank you for telling us about the comment, I would not have known it but for your note.

Edited by Japonica - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#826

Ahhh he did mean to call her his treasure sweetheart and darling

Well she is was and will be his

That much we knew but guess couldn't see

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Gim

@SansShyam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#827

Thanks for the note Anamika. But still what I see is Kushi giving her 400% of effort. Kushi leaving her difficulties and disabilities aside and coming for Arnav. Kushi being willing to bridge the gaps in the relationship. Kushi talking to others and finding out about Arnav's disposition. Kushi falling for her husband. Kushi fighting to win love. Kushi wanting to give love, whereas Arnav was active only in binding her in marriage. The length of work he put for the relationship does not justify the title as Kushi had put in more.

While I do admire the way this is written and enjoy maximally as a reader I do see the title is not apt. But nevertheless it won't stop me from reading your stories.So keep up writing... :)