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amaypranay thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful note, thx for your note!
It adds so much to your amazing story!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pixiegirl

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Again a lovely chapter by all accounts Vats, girl take a bow for writing this bittersweet romantic story that has almost come to an end :( Kudos to you for keeping your characters true throughout the story... Not once have they deviated from their basic nature which is really a feat in itself & yet you managed to spin a love-story around their starkly different personalities & keeping the story interesting throughout deserves a round of applause. 👏 👏


Finally, Arnav & Khushi have achieved the impossible. They have become one & Khushi has become Arnav's completely. I have often wondered throughout the story who is making who mine?? For most part of the story it seemed, on the surface at least, that it was Khushi who was trying to make Arnav hers but I knew better than to question your title & storyline. So I waited for you to reveal why you named the story the way you did when it seemed it should have been named the other way round i.e. Making Arnav Mine. But with this chapter, you have removed all doubts from my mind & I would like to congratulate you on the way you spun the story around in the last chapter & made the title come true...


This indeed has been a journey of Making Khushi Mine by Arnav on his terms and style. Not once during the entire story did I see Arnav budge from his position. It was always Khushi who gave into Arnav's whims & fancies, his coercion, his temper, his tastes, his hobbies, his mood, his insecurities etc. etc. Yet after all that, he did manage to achieve the impossible, something that he had only hoped to achieve but wasn't sure he would one day i.e. to make Khushi his & only his.


But now, Khushi is definitely his & his alone. Gone is from Khushi's life Arnav's numero uno nemesis, her so-called BFF i.e. Rishabh Raichand. She has voluntarily dropped him from her life thereby giving Arnav his ultimate wish that she would only be his & no one else's. Arnav can now breathe a sigh of relief. Phew! Even Khushi's other friends like Lavanya have taken a back seat to him, forget friends, even her own Chachu is now secondary to him. It is truly amazing how he achieved this in light of all the contradictions in their lives 😊


Although Khushi for the first time called Arnav cute in this chapter, to me, he has always been cute if only one looked beneath his rude & angry exterior. Granted he has been more than a difficult person to live with, but he too has certainly made huge contributions towards the success of their marriage, but on his terms & conditions. Taking Khushi's pictures whenever he could & hiding them from her, is perhaps the cutest of all of them 😳


He has from day one taken his responsibility towards Khushi very, very seriously. I am not sure how many of us married women out there can claim this kind of devotion from their husbands. Starting from wanting to foot all of Khushi's bills from the moment they got married, giving her full liberty to spend as much as she wants, equipping her with his credit cards & cash all the time, so that she may never ever run out of money & never hesitate to spend his money is one of the cutest things he has done IMO.


Watching out for her safety is another. Be it during the Surajkund Mela, the kitchen, Chandni Chowk, Dubai and even now in NY. Her safety is his utmost concern. Him worrying over her treatment & keeping tabs on her medicines is just another instance of his care towards her. He may have left her owing to his own insecurities & guilt, but he would never abandon her completely. Taking care of Khushi is so intrinsic to him, he cannot even think otherwise.


Making sure that she is comfortable at all times, feeding her, indulging her wishes, like letting her taste alcohol, letting her help with his tie etc. are all different aspects of Arnav taking care of Khushi. He has been doing nothing but making sure that Khushi gets what she wants. The only thing he had ever wanted in return from her was her exclusive loyalty, which she unfortunately failed to understand in time & paid a huge price for it...


But all's well that ends well :) Arnav has finally accepted his feelings for Khushi, she is his Tesoro & Mi Amore for sure and they are finally together against all odds. Here's a toast from my side to the recently reunited, not so newly wedded couple, a lifetime of peace, happiness & good health!! But I am looking forward to more of their cute romance. 😉


This is a mind blowing analysis of the characters and their story and how aptly it is titled. Now it totally makes sense as to what Arnav was expecting and how Khushi failed to understand him and has tried to fix her mistake.
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Edited by Anamika100 - 11 years ago
vaishuu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the note dear ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome updaye
loves it
omg Mi Amore' means my love right...awww i loved it
amazing update
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb.in this update arshi true to their character's. the way kushi asking about medicine,and his reply at last he understand that she won't give up.the promis about drinking she understand him well.and the last smuggling scene &his indirect confession(means in other language)is awesome.I love your writings too much anamika. Already very eager for your update .plz update soon.you are a very good writer.in your stories every character you portrait very well.keep writing.you have a good future ahead. &&&&at last...keep 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reading the update for may be 10 times I am finally in a state to comment...it's beautiful update and u may not believe that it made me smile after a horrible day at work...
Finally they have a normal day after ages...I am so happy...but best part was where Arnav confess to himself that he is ready to do anything to make her happy rather than keeping her with him...how far they have come in love ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav was feeling nervous that was cute..just because he was not ready to confront his wife.Khushi is just too adorable with the ways of getting and making him accustomed with their daily routine but he is yet nervous whether he should or not.
Arnav just is a person who forms his own world and form all the thoughts without acknowledging what other people wants..but with khushi,he is just arnav who cares for her and loves her too..thank god he atleast knows it now..waiting for his convo,when will they roam in NY??
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Posted: 11 years ago
tesoro ---treasure
ummm together
starting with new hopes
i really hope this time they v-can talk the diffence
and arnav needed it

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi...
Couldn't comment on the previous chapter. I am just too happy with the updates and I honestly don't know what to say. I am loving the flow and the Arshi filled chapter that you are blessing us with. Please don't stop soon...maybe chp 50...it would make a mark no? half a century. I don't think that you have written so many chapters for MKM I 😃 As each updates go by there is another fear...one I will terribly miss MKM II and another one will you continue writing stories on Arnav and Khushi. Most of the writers I know and loved are stopping one by one 😔 and that just makes me sad...it feels like IPK is slipping further away from us...sigh!!! You write happy stories and that's pleasing to write...you don't make ur stories dark or depressing which I really appreciate :)

Coming to your chapters...my wish for Khushi tying the tie is only 80% accomplished yaar...I really wanted to know what Arnav thinks about this cute arrangement because he was the one who wished for it when he saw this between his Khushi and his father. Is he happy, satisfied??

I am loving how they are building their relationship slowly in US. Will they run into Rishab again...MY GOD didn't he come back from US to propose to Khushi or maybe their relationship will turn strong and secure and even if they spot Rishab it will make 0 difference to Arnav. That would be a real test also no? Will he grow stiff and insecure again or will he finally understand his place in Khushi's life.


How cute is that wall...Arnav is quite the romantic yaar. What all has he hidden under his sleeves 😉 Who knew right. I am thinking Khushi is going to get more shocks :)

I have one request...please...Khushi should really learn how to cook atleast something/anything without the microwave and without burning or cutting herself. Maybe when Arnav leaves for office she will find some time...you know like maybe she has a neighbor (hint someone like Payal jiji) who can show her how to master that art. Atleast one sandwich yaar...Nowdays even on the internet there are so many cooking blogs with step by step pics...videos...so much facility..unless she doesn't even have a normal IQ I don't see why she can't accomplish something. Not saying she should become a cooking queen or something but maybe a few items which both she and Arnav can enjoy. Because there is a joy and satisfaction that you will get seeing your loved ones enjoy and relish what you made for them. That extra touch of love and care no restaurant cook or house help will be able to add. Even in the future wouldn't she want her kids to have something that their mom prepared.

I hope Arnav and Sumer have a heart to heart. They really need to speak and open up. There is still something missing between the two. This is same with Khushi also...Arnav needs to let her in...he is slowly taking a step and I hope he will continue doing it.

Will there be a scene of them doing it again 😆 Because if you don't say then we will be confused like we were with the show. Everyone kept wondering if that was a one time wonder 😆 ☺️I know it's too soon..but couldn't resist 😳

Can Arnav take her for shopping and suggest something of his liking for her to wear

I will stop. Please cont soon...




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Posted: 11 years ago
Edited my comment on pg. 125

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