Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 28)

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frenzyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

loved the update.. khushi came and cleared the mu... arnav's emotional turmoil were well portrayed!

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Piyali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Congrats for the new thread..

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Anamika100

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Beautiful update and you are so tying all the loose ends together, bringing Arnav's point of view to is. I have a question. If Arnav stayed and supported Khushi for one month after accident...and she also asked for him and talked to him one hour after she regained her senses...when and why did the following happen?

"After that, he had despondently hovered around his bed ridden wife for a month, hoping against hope, that they can work out their differences. He had tried his best to be comforting and accommodating to Khushi. Overlook everything that he had heard. Told her numerous times that she did not need to explain anything to him. But guess nothing worked. She did not want anything to do with him. He could still remember her crying face when she had banged her palms together in a begging gesture and bitterly asked him to just get out of her life."

I thought Khushi so bravely fought for her life, love and husband. She is now getting really wise about her man. Arnav too is finally getting clues about his wife's pure and forgiving nature.

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Soniya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Thread 28 wow congrats 👏

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jh006

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

just loved the update... it is fabulous dear... cant wait for the next update... please update soon...

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Awesome!! 28th thread!! Brilliant it is in it?

This shows the passion that the readers have on your writing!!

Congrats for that!! you really have one lot army of people i say!!

And a good start of their marriage life without buaji or bade papa i think! i dont want them to go back for now!!

I wanted to find arnav's reaction when he comes to know about kushi knowing about the pictures in his room!

Please cont soon!

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rkapoor1382

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

congrats for new thread

waiitnggg for the update nw eagerly

waiitngg to see arnav reaction wen khushi asks him abt the pics i hope she does

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awroneema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

hello Anamika...

1st of all the biggest sorry of the world for being gayab for so long...whn i shud glue to the story for the way i screamed zaaraa zaara and pura pura...but alas...whn u finally gave the all pura pura i cudnt be there... asli duniya is a real hell for me right now...my dad isnt well...he is diagnosed with the last stage of brain cancer ...thats why i wasnt here for last few updates...well life has to move on...nd we need to be strong thats evryone saying...hence we r trying to resume our normal life, and now i m bk to my one of the fav stories in IF...so much is there to catch up...well here i go with my few words on all the pending updates...⭐️

Chapter ~ 39

Omg--finally it happened...i have imagined so many things but that was not even 1 % as beautiful as u have written...he carried her all the way to their Room!!! OMG where were the Staffs.they shuld not miss the ASR-in-PDA mode for anything..!! and then the pallu scn...i cudnt help but rofl thinking of that frustrated Arnav handling his oh-so-naive-wify..!! i sympathized khushi too..how would she know whn bade papa didnt evn have her a personal tv so that she could catch up some x rated knowledge late at nights...i bet her inter net connection must have also site restrictions... reading nd listening doesn't help always...i luvd it...found it really funny...this is 3d learning era...😆
but thn 😡 atleast u could have demonestrate some of the attributes of 🤔..wet..shirtless ..well toned and all aroused Arnav...☺️...the way u did with khushi.!!..i mean (i) we r straight u know...drooling more on this angry howtwaa.. kya see through garments are only reserved for khushi...??...oh my lalchi gutter dill n dimag..🥱 not that i complained his hasty nasty moves 😳 so they both r scared.and a become the perfect xampl of darr k agey jeet hai..😆 i luved it ...whn Arnav was praising his beauty not evn for a momnt he thought of her limp...nd to day from my side arnav is all baizzat bahir abt his claim on her limp...whn he said it he meant it..👏 and a big wala thank u.for avoiding any kind of cliche while describing there intimacy...thnk god that u did not go for the detail kind of what..how whn types yet gave us one of the sensational yet beautiful consummation without any vulgarism ..hats off to that..👏 and again u missed arnavi's shower...WHY damn It why...😡😡😡
luvd the family moment...it gave the moment a real touch...buajis banter...why she has to ask so many things...women cant u understand titaliya's flustered face with real laali the newly weds actually have!! and not fair arnavji why u r always so cool...have some marcy on ur wife.if u cant save her from the questions thn atleast be on the recieving end atleast...willingly...sharing the pain u know..😳 the end was b'full...but knowing him nd his irrational mind though i doubt on his realization...

"but boy after today, his mind was a steel safe with a digital finger print lock where he had locked Khushi. For this life and next, in this universe and all the alternate ones, in his dreams and in that of others as well, she was his. "

Chapter ~ 40

everything was too good to last long...seems like that...the b'full day why it has to end like that..!! grr...i m angry with everyone..!!😡😡😡

Dear rishabh ji...why..?? bade papa and buaji were unaware of the fiasco among u 3.but u surely knew...weren't u!! being the host if khushi or arnav resisted ur entry would have look really rude...so u could avoid it for better.!! she is ur best frnd as u claimed..dont u want her well being..thn why u r doing this to her knowing very well how sensitive her husband was regarding ur presence.and it cud affect their lives!! i had my sympathy with u from the beginning bt by doing this u are getting in to my nerves..!!😡

Dear khushi ji---i know u were trying to be a very good host...but since u were aware of the hidden tension...and the reason...was it that much difficult for u to go and look up for ur hubby at least in the pretense of using washroom..or a call..or may be a clear cut to see why arnavji is taking a long call...its his b'day right..u had the right to drag him bk to table like the way u have stopped him to go to the meeting...and guess what no one would mind on that...!! but u did what..sit n wait to eat as if that was enaf to pecify ur sometimes irrational hubby...not that i blame him always..!! u really need to learn how to manage and prioritize things!! nd with that u successfully got in to my nerves!!😡

dear Arnavji--ap toh app he hai...toh kya bolu ab!! whn its abt khushi nd rishabh the rational portion off ur brain chooses to njoy the most wanted long lasting vacation!! it was nt evn few hours that u realize...nd made ur dill dimag understand that khushi is urs..only urs .!! thn why damnt.its not like that she has gone on a date wid him!! how cum its her fault if others invite someone u loath!! now she cnt be rude with a guest wid out ny rsn!! nd thn u cud hv done a lill bit of PDA infront of that guy nd he wud hv got the msg that khushi is now all urs in evry sense..that to happy n contend !! u lost ur golden opportunity just like dat..for that anger of urs!! bloody fool...is it the same raizada who used to manipulate situation in to his favor..!! depressing u were...totally depressing...😡

the night with fight was even more depressing...with arnav's accusations nd khushi's realization...it was rocky but in the end her upcoming luv confession seems like damage control thing from the 3rd prsn view...may be watever hapnd has changed the grravity of her words nd confession..😕

To be continued...