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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: clover

A,

Wow. What a confrontation hat was!

For the first time Khushi's timing was impeccable, in the best possible way. Is it an indicator of changing tides in their relationship, from bad to good? The alcohol was helping but only till the time he had hope that Khushi might change her mind and call him back but once divorce proceeding started, something much stronger was required. Arnav is so deep in love with her he cannot live a normal life. I can't help but compare Rishab and Arnav in this case. They both love Khushi a lot. Rishab has so far managed his life quiet well in her absence. He wanted to meet her desperately now only because his guilt was eating at him and even that went away once she forgave him. But Arnav, spending each night in a drunken stupor, planning to graduate to drugs, wishing he dies soon, dreading every minute about when his wife will send the signed divorce papers for him, and still hoping that maybe she might come back to him.

Khushi and Arnav have interpreted the same incident so differently in their own minds, its amazing (amusing). Khushi thinks he still holds the Rishab incident against her, but Arnav thinksshe will never forgive him for pushing her. When will these two listen to what the other is saying and stop forming their own assumptions in their heads. Khushi clearly told him she forgives him for the accident and Arnav clearly told her that there is no need for her to explain since he understands, and they still separated. They only see what they want to see.

Anyway, I'm glad they're back together. Arnav has finally got to the point where instead of doing anything to make Khushi stay with him, he is ready to do anything to make Khushi happy in her life even if it is not with him. I'd say that he has grown in love. Although I don't approve of his method to deal with the aftermath of leaving Khushi, I understand his pain and the need to alleviate it in anyway possible and effective.

I hope the photographs on his wall give Khushi confidence as to what position and importance she holds in his life, in his heart, because she always doubts her hold on him. She thought he will shut the door on her face? He cannot deny her anything now.

But I think Arnav still doesn't completely trust her yet, or maybe he doesn't trust his hold on her. He manipulated her, he mistrusted her, hurt and pushed her to her death. Why would she still want to be with him? I think he is completely in his character to question that.

I like the new assertive Khushi, who for once in her life wants her husband to think of her and what she wants. she does not want to give in anymore. Wants what she deserves. I am glad that she is not letting him leave what she wants to say unfinished. They have finally started communicating. This is good. So looking forward to the coming chapters.

And now to the wishlist you asked for. (Its a wishlist. Which ones you grant are completely up to you.)

1. What Arnav did to Shyam and where he is now.
2. Khushi's nickname for Arnav since in her own words 'it shows extra love' (Arnav should know his old one and we the new one, if exists)
3. What exactly Arnav sees in his nightmares.
4. For Khushi to know that her old room is Arnav's old room too.
5. For Khushi to know that Rishab had a crush on her too but rejected the idea of dating her because of her limp.
6. Khushi to meet Arnav's two best friends, Arnav's interactions with them.
7. For Arnav to get closure for his mother's betrayal (Did his mother ever love him?)
8. For Khushi to cook Arnav at least one edible dish.
9. For Khushi to experience jealousy by looking at other girl's attention on Arnav.
10. For Khushi to know the real reason why Arnav planned his first trip to Dubai where he didn't want her to come along.
11. Arnav to plan a surprise for Khushi without dreading about it being a success or what her reaction to it will be.
12. Arnav to tell her how important she is to him and how much he wants her in his life ( just like he once told a drunk Khushi) while she is in her complete senses.
13. For Khushi to wear the blue gown that is not appropriate attire in India and to know Arnav's opinion about it.
14. For Arnav to confess that he secretly maybe likes the fact that she limps and why. (Give her ego a boost for once)
15. For Khushi to know the truth about her first kiss.
16. Does Rishab find his happiness?
17. Karan's reaction if he ever comes to know about Arnav's past and his hand in Khushi's accident.
18. Karan's wedding...

Eagerly impatiently waiting for the next chapter in their lives to be penned, tweaked and posted by you.

And finally a few verses dedicated to Arshi.

"I'm sorry,"
It's all that you can say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily
Like "sorry" (like "sorry"...like "sorry"...)
"Forgive me,"
is all that you can say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily
Like "forgive me" ("forgive me"..."forgive me"...)
"Forgive me..."

But you can say, baby
Baby can I hold you tonight?
Baby, if I told you the right words
oooh, at the right time
You'll be mine

"I love you"
Is all that you can't say?
Years gone by and still
Words don't come easily (words don't come easily...)
Like "I love you", I love you...




There's a reason for the sunshine sky
And there's a reason why I'm feelin' so high
Must be the season when that love light shines
All around us

So let that feelin' grab you deep inside
And send you reelin' where your love can't hide
And then go stealin' through the moonlit nights
With your lover

Just let your love flow like a mountain stream
And let your love grow with the smallest of dreams
And let your love show and you'll know what I mean
It's the season

Let your love fly like a bird on a wing
And let your love bind you to all living things
And let your love shine and you'll know what I mean
That's the reason

There's a reason for the warm sweet nights
And there's a reason for the candle lights
Must be the season when those love rites shine
All around us

So let that wonder take you into space
And lay you under its loving embrace
Just feel the thunder as it warms your face
You can't hold back

Just let your love flow like a mountain stream
And let your love grow with the smallest of dreams
And let your love show and you'll know what I mean
It's the season

Let your love fly like a bird on a wing
And let your love bind you to all living things
And let your love shine and you'll know what I mean
That's the reason


You are AHHMAAZINGG Clover..👏
your posts are treat to read...fab writerji ke fab commentors...

just love to read comments on MKM !!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh its sad that this stoy is ending soon.But at the same time I m thrilled at the idea of reading Daria story again. There was so much passion and feelings un addressed. I would like to enjoy a chapter or 2 of it too.
On the other hand I feel if this story is close to its end,it has always been a process of making Arnav mine for kushi.The title then appears unsuitable too. However hope you will do justice to the title by showing a possessive side of Arnav who wants to make Kushi his too..afterall it seems most of us are in love with Arnav who is soo jealous and possessive disregarding how annoying it can be in real life..Cheers for the good work so far... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja

You are AHHMAAZINGG Clover..👏
your posts are treat to read...fab writerji ke fab commentors...

just love to read comments on MKM !!😃



Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
vaise someone knew when update is coming ?

ek week hone wala hai

where is soon?

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Posted: 11 years ago
Congrats on the new thread! The 28th thread!! Thats a lot...
Anyway really well written update. The ending was my favourite, though I can't wait to see how Arnav answers her questions to this if Khushi asks any( I hope she does, cause she must be curious as to since when he has liked her in "that way"!!)
Update soon.
Thanks for the PM.
Love.. :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Anon, what about giving them a honeymoon in US?

And finally before they leave for India, I want Khushi to take a promise from Arnav that they should have 3 children and not any less. One boy, one girl and third could be anyone. Since both of them are their parents' only children, they never got to enjoy sibling love which should be given to their children.
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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly waiting to read arnav and kushi at time square😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃...


please...

cheers..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Would love see Arnav and Khushi with a couple of kids 5 years later . maybe in the epilogue And Khushi teasing Arnav about how he used to be.

Edited by vks11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav was burning his own hell easy way out was alcohol n drugs was loosing
khushi's arrival was new ray of hope for him he learnt from his mistakes didn't jump like last time on first opportunity he got that was one positive sign another his confession how he planned n plotted
glad khushi knew now reshib's presence in her life can be harmful for her future
I loved every bit of last chap
plz make it maximum 5 not minimum
really want another arshi ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the last update! very emotional... update soon

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