The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148 - Page 75

Hey that totally did not seem like the first time you were writing..It was as good as the preceding chapters..do continue😊

Chapter4: WOW ..you described what viewing an actual animal in jungle is..absolutely mesmerising..truly a once in a lifetime experience!

The aftermath was hot..but ofcourse how can he expect Khushi to be in the same place and pick up from where he left when he has not given any explanations to her inspite of all the attraction..he owes her an explanation and some time..

Alright, came to edit.

Read all the four parts. Amazing. The moment I realized the story was about jungles I had Robert Frost's poem running in my head. And then the second chapter had its title named. The Casablanca dialogue in the first, while watching the original show there were a couple of times I felt Arnav could say it, no I almost anticipated he would say it, he says it anyway in this SS and in quite a riveting fashion. So glad. The last update was hot. The make out, a much needed confrontation and a set on target hunter ASR. Hot indeed. Waiting for more to come. 😃

Sandhya,

Sorry! Sorry! Sorry! late comment again.

Coming to the update, it was brilliant. I am loving how well your guys are maintaining the theme, tempo and continuity of the story line. The best part is the chemistry between Arnav and Khushi, each one of you is enhancing it.

We don't need to spend all life to know somebody or fall in love with somebody. Sometimes few days and moments spent with a loved one, keep us going for lifetime. This is how I feel about Arnav and Khushi. In the few days them spent together, they learned a lot and understood each other well as a person. They spent their time talking about their dreams and future. This totally explains why their bond and emotions haven't faded away even after the bitter breakup and years of distance.

More than spending the day with Khushi, Arnav knew how much she would appreciate a trip deep down the wilderness and see one of the rare live sightings of a tiger with its prey. (I would be as excited as Khushi with the offer and trust me I spend hours watching these kind of videos on youtube). Like you said there is nothing gory about its "survival of the fittest in true essence".

The tour of the jungle, animal sightings and the wild cat with its prey was very well written. You are so good with giving words to imagination and making it all come alive for readers.

The more Arnav sees Khushi the more he realizes how he loves her and wants her in his life. He is at a point of desperation. He wasn't good with handling things in the past and he isn't good even now. He loves her, he is attracted to her, he is nervous and he is afraid that he might lose her again. Hence he poured everything in that kiss.

Khushi never fell out of love with Arnav. Seeing him here, after so many years has only reignited those emotions. But she is a girl with her head firmly on her shoulders and won't give in easily. It's little bit about her ego and pride but more about her fear about repeat of history. She doesn't Arnav to have control over her heart and break it again.

I am glad that Arnav is determined to convince Khushi and win her over but dude it's a tough fight and I want Khushi to make things hard for him.

As always brilliant, Sandhya.