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Mina-18

@Mina-18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Hey,
The best of the forum are coming together to weave a beautiful story...what more can we ask for..its a surprise and a very beautiful one...eagerly waiting to go on this new journey. .

Thanks for the pm.
Happy writing!

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TrueLoveIs4ever

@TrueLoveIs4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Waiting for more as this first chapter was a great intro!! So excited for this collaboration!

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roshaan

@roshaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

sounds really interesting n so many wonderful writer r contibuting their piece in it makes it unresistable n hungry for updates already lol

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

What an exciting concept guys! 👏

Thank you for the Pm Ana, the first chapter has me all intrigued already!

We got a little bit of an insight into what Khushi and Arnav do for a living, how they know eachother since college ( I am yet to figure whether they were friends, frenemies or something more?) but I am sure as the story unravels we will get the missing pieces as well. For now I loved their one on one conversation, Arnav's surprise at discovering Khushi in his vicinity was quite something. He clearly admires Khushi's sense of independence and self sufficiency, though Khushi doesn't seem to see it that way. As I imagined her in a bob cut, I could totally appreciate Arnav's estimation of her age! 😆 There is a connection between the two already and you have established it wonderfully here Ana, keeping it mysterious and kind of cute at the same time.

Shyam has already scored himself my utter dislike for carrying the image of the flirty and sleazy married man which I absolutely despise. It seems like even Arnav is aware of Shyam's ways for the way he asked Khushi if it was Shyam who let her in. The way he refuted the sexism comment was intense, he is genuinely concerned for Khushi's safety and I cannot wait to discover what is instore for Arshi in this rather adventurous and possibly dangerous yet exciting journey of "The last place on earth".

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Temme sumone I am dreaming...

All my favourite writers in one project.. I cant contain my happiness and excitement today !!

Bring it on gurlz...

The opening was quite bombastic.. Having a fetish for uniforms, I simply drooled imagining a uniformed Arnav... I am still sporting goosebumps..😉

An environmentalist,feminist Khushi and for a change with short mop of hair.. She looks very cute in my imagination...

Clearly they have a history together... Oh the chemistry between them is sparkling bright rigfht from the first update...

I've been to Corbett and just love that terrain... It will be an enthralling experiance for me to read about it with Arshi in it !!

Jungle main daaku,hasina aur hero... Bada maza aayega !!!! Gabbar khush hua...

Thanks for the PM... Will wait eagerly for the next update.

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Abyan

@Abyan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Wonderful start Ana ..such a different and unique story and it is mysterious with nature..loved it... khushi being an environmentalist, arnav the DCF at Corbett, and they had a past , arnav disowned by his rich father ...wonder what was the reason?.. a sleazy smuggler shyamu at Corbett, poachers and continuous rain, and on top of it all arnav and khushi staying close by in the same building... the hightlight of entire update was "Of all the jungles, in all of the countries, in all of the world, she walks into mine..." awesome start and so well written ... and am looking forward to a journey full of adventure, mystery and full of romance.. thx for the pm in advance...

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

cool.. so college flashback... interesting..

hope shyam is not a bad guy...

now tht their cottages r so near hope to see more interactions n glimpses of past...

waiting for next updates

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shr1234

@shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Well Begun!!

I loved the forest backdrop. Joy Banerjee seems to have ability to read the people through and through. I like him. Shyam looks sleazy and Arnav and Khushi have a history, together and personal too. Super-eager to read more :) :)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

superb update...

ArShi met...

they know each other from colleges...

it seems they have quite hidden feelings for each other...

shyam jha here also a snake...😆

arnav worried being khushi's safety...

arnav is here not to worry for khushi,...

update soon...

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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

nice story ana di .. finally u are back !!!!

by the way my father works in forest department , which makes this story more intersting for me , heheh
:) :D

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