The Whisper ~ KriYaansh OS

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Wow such a romantic one shot.
absolutely loved it.
really awesome.

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

dear mai yea show nehi dekhti

but ur story is lovely n beautiful

maine to just story samajke padli

u r a brilliant writer

I like ur ARIYA story

send me pm plz

waiting 4 ur update

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

yoo finally me commenting
abhiii. muwaaahhh I love u cho much
thank u cho much
jaisa meko chahiye waise he likha
hayee this is os is cho hott
u described their emotions cho well
and unke WO ahm ahm
me tho blushing ye padkee
and finally they expressed their feelings
and Abhi unki shaddi hue ya nahii ya fir live in relationship hmm
and the last part was cute
I loved this whole osss
ab ready ho jaaa me teko tang karte rahunge os likhne ke liyew he he he
all in all this is one of my fav os

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shakz_KR

@shakz_KR

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Luvd it so sweet like u sweet cute hot updaye like u

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Super awesome OS
Loved it

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madreader

@madreader

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

hey

really nyc😊

loved it👏

love making in a hut

not bad

really gud 1

loved it⭐️⭐️

thanxx for pm

plzzz write more😃

Edited by madreader - 11 years ago

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Aww It was so hawt...
And i guess this is the first tym i am reading something lyk dis from u..
It was nyc

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

That was super cute n fantastic!!!!!!!

Sorry for reading it late!!!!!!

I am happy by this way Rey realized his mistake n they unite!!!!!!

Do write more OS!!!!!