The Whisper ~ KriYaansh OS

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The Whisper


I walk out of Swayam's house. I was angry, but on whom..?? I don't know was I angry on him..?? or on myself as once again somewhere unintentionally I hurt him. But he should have also understood me. It was decided earlier that when we will get affiliation I have to leave back to New York. And all knew this, he too knew it..?? But why is he behaving such oddly with me. He even didn't hug me for the last time, he even didn't bid me bye. What my mistake.


"Universe jee, why it's always me...?" She cried looking up at the empty dark blue sky.


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She went on walking on an isolated road no one was there, it was her last night or more precisely last few hours in Mumbai. As soon as she walked out of Swayam's house. I too walked out behind her. I was guilty for my behavior. Yes after that fight with Kriya in Swayam's room. I had got call from dad who knocks down some pretty sense into my dumb brain. And I had decided to let out my feeling in front of her. But when she was bidding bye to all, I couldn't, I was not able to say a word as if someone had tied a knot to my tongue. She looked at me and left, and behind her I too left.


I saw her she was walking on wrong direction and that's when I decided I was going to follow her. I know she was hurt because me. And it was my time for apology. I can sane from distance also that she was walking absent mindly.


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I was walking on the road tears which I was trying to not come out of my eyes, finally got their way out of my eyes to the path of my cheeks. I was hurt, I was angry, I was sad. I was hurt because of Rey. I was angry on myself, I was sad as once again I have to leave my friends, my love.


I feel so helpless. Suddenly I left someone's presence behind me. I got little alert and look behind, There was no one behind only an empty road in the dark, that's when I realized I took the wrong way after leaving. I was hell scared, I look at my each side there was nothing only a plain hard tar road there not even a single street light working. Fearing started making place inside me. I shivered in fear.


For know I just wanted to run way into my loves arms. But alas I was so confused I don't remember only how I end up over here. I just closed my eyes to calm down myself.


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Suddenly she looked back, I guess she have guess some presence. I quickly hide myself behind the tree and looked at her face. She was crying. Seeing her like this it broke my heart. Some where I know the reason of those precious tears is me.


She looked her and there, I again looked at her face her face was fear stricken. I saw her closing eyes to calm down herself. This was the time I slowly walked up to her and stood in front of her. some tears were flowing down her eyes I quickly rubbed it off from her face.


As soon as I touched her she stiffen but when she recognized the touch she calm down and opened her eyes and looked at me. Her eyes were full of fear.


"Rey..?" she whispered and hugged me tightly. I hugged her back and rubbed her back to calm her down. After what left ages we both broke the hug and looked at each other. We were just staring at each other's blank face. Yes there were no emotions on my face and neither on her.
Soon we started walking back. But I was too confused with the road and being no lights on road it was making it more difficult. I looked at her she was still afraid. Soon we heard I loud sound of the thunder and Kriya hugged me tightly due to fear.


Soon it started raining. Kriya was not ready to leave me. She was damn scared.


"Shh!! Kriya its just thunder noise nothing else" I said softly and pull back from the hug and cupped her face.


I gulped seeing the serenity of her face. Her angelic face which had drops of rain on it and hair drenched in rain complemented her whole look. Her blue black dress was sticking her like a second skin highlighting her curves. Her bare long legs were now more exposing. I could help but stare her shamelessly.


The proximity we were sharing was not helping us in any way. She moved back two steps maintaining the distance, but I took hold of her waist. She stiffen at my touch and shivered a little, don't know was it because the cold rain or my touch. I tighten my grip on her waist and pulled her back with forced, she banged into my chest.


My one hand was holding her waist securely and my other hand cupped her face. I leaned and kiss her temples, both cheeks, her cute nose, I was going to claim her lips but she turned around. Now her back was touching my chest. Unknowingly my hand reached up to her hair and shifted it on one side, showing her bare neck. I leaned down started giving her mouth kisses on her neck. I heard her gasp when my lips came into contact with her neck.


"M sorry" I softly whispered in her ears and kissed her ear lobe. She turned her face to me and looked at me.


I dig my face into her neck and started giving wet kisses all over. She holds my shirt tightly to stand. I pulled back and looked at her face. I kissed her forehead, I leaned in more and claim her trebling rosy lips in mine we kissed each other passionately I nibbled her lower lips and slightly bite it. She moaned and I got the entrance to her mouth we both explored each nook and corner of each other's mouth. We broke the kiss due to lake of oxygen. And looked at each other's face.
It was still raining heavily. I picked up Kriya in my arms without breaking our eye contact; I saw a small hut and walked up till there staring intensely in her eyes. I lay her down on the dry grass which was in the hut. I bend down and kissed the edge of her lips.


"Kriya, look at me" I said huskily. She looked at me our eyes met once again I kissed her eyes softly and again claimed her lips this time softly. We broke the kissed. I moved down to her neck I nibbled over there a little while and kissed her collar bone. I gave her some love bites she moaned in pain I kissed softly over the love bites.


I moved her selves little down and kissed over there. I was going to move more down but I looked at her for her approval. I looked at her eyes she blinked twice as if saying yes I quickly pecks her lips. Soon she was out of the dress only in her fabrics and my shirt was thrown away somewhere.


I again started giving her wet kiss all over her body. I kissed her nape, kissed near the curves in the long valley on the curves. I kissed her like a hungry lion. She in returned only moaned at my action driving me more crazy.


Soon I removed the last piece of cloth which was broking my view. I stared at her naked form in front of her. She looked at me staring at her and she blushed lightly. I came upon her and kissed her lips, slowly moving down the path of the curves. I kissed her curves, nibbling it. She took hold of my hair and pulled it harder while moaning, this drive me crazier. I pinched her nibble her curves. She moaned out my name loudly Reyaansh. My name never sounds so sweet when it sounds at this time. I kissed her curves.


The night was full of whispered moans all over. We both made love to each other for whole night. Soon we drifted into sweet slumber in each other's arms and a sweet smile was playing on our lips.


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I woke up only to find my and Rey's naked bodies stick to each other. Rey was sleeping sweetly holding me possessively in his arms. I got up and kissed Rey fore head soft and blushed remembering our last night. I saw Rey opening his eyes and my blush went more crimson.


"Esi hi blush karti rahogi toh me wapis shuro hojaonga" Rey said and winked at me and I blushed a little more.


We got up and dressed our self I turned around to see Rey but I banged into him. He was standing right behind me.


"Kriya do u love me..?" Rey asked looking directly into my eyes.


"May be" I said only to tease him and smiled naughtily and looked at Rey.


He saw my twinkling into naughtiness he took hold of my waist and pulled me closer to him.


"Please don't leave me, you are very special for me" Rey said with moist eyes.


"Rey, m not leaving" I said and hugged him. He too hugged me with same passion.


"I love you Kriya" I heard Rey whispered, "I love you too" I whispered back in the hug.


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After 1 year,


"Rey look at my new nail polish" Kriya saying and coming into our room with a nail paint bottle in her hand.


"Kriya m doing work" Rey said and got up from bed.


Kriya sat down on bed and absent mindly put her hand near the cutter which was on the bed. She moved her hand little and suddenly Rey heard a loud noise.


"Ahhh" Kriya shouted the cutter had cut her finger badly.


Rey turned around and looked at a hyper Kriya looking at her finger which was bleeding badly. He took first aid box and run towards Kriya


"Kriya idhar dikhao" Rey said and took Kriya's hand in his and started to clean her wound


"Rey!!" Kriya shouted making Rey jumped a little he looked up at Kriya and saw her looking down Rey followed her gaze and found her staring at the broken bottle of nail paint.


"Rey, mere brand new baby pink nail paint ki bottle toot gyi" Kriya said sadly "and meri ungli dekho mera nail bhi kharab hogya aur aap bandage kar rahe ho" Kriya said in sad voice Rey shook his head in disbelieve.


"Done" Rey said after some time.


"huh kya..??" Kriya asked not getting


"Bandage karke hogya" Rey said and before Kriya could open her open again Rey kissed her softly. Kriya too smiled in kiss and give in. they broke the kiss


"Rey, its paining" Kriya said with cute pout. Rey took Kriya's hand and kiss the wound "Ab nhi hoga" Rey said cutely.


Kriya hugged Rey and Rey to hugged Kriya and kissed her forehead.


"I love you" was again whispered in the hug.


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so finally after whole one month i wrote something. so this OS is specially for my ramya di, as i promised u to give a hawt OS. i seriously dont knw if its hawt or anything near to what u had asked but this is what i could give it to u.

plzz do review my back and do tell me how was it..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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pata nahi kab unres karungi...
finally me unresing!!! :*
haayeee I chooo chooo chooo loved it!!!
this is suuupppeeerrr muaaahhh!!!!
rey and uski ego...😆
hehehehehee but koi nahi humara rey itna bhi bhuddhu nahi hai... Accha Hua usne kri se baat karne ka decide Kia!!!
kriaaa haayeee meli baby itni lost... Agar koi aajata toh?
par rey haina!!! I loved it!!! He was following her taaki she be's save and kria taking in the feelings... Awww
finally kuch toh Hua!!! Both met and hug Hua!!!
yipppeee and then haayee rey ko baarish NE out of control kar dia heheheheee...
unka night!!! Romantic!!!! And hut saved it all...
saved it all matlab time... Warna rey ko kria ko ghar le jaana padhta and time waste ho jaata... Heheheheee
so the hut NE bacha lia
the leap haayeee its awesome!!!
Kri worrying about the nail paint... Hehehheee felt like pulling her cheeks!!!
and then the whisper!!! Haayeee loved it!!!
bahut accha update kamo!!!
me hates you!!! Muaaah
Edited by arsha_simran - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweetypie loved os very much!
First of all, his ego stopped him from talking to her for the last time but he couldn't stop himself to protect her.
Then that hot scenes gave me goosebumps!
Love the way he whispered in her ears ILU and after teasing him,she also said those megical words.
Rey is so caring! He bandaged her finger and again said ILU in whisper
all i want to say is that this was amazing
Edited by Neha_KR - 11 years ago
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finalllyyy commentinggg n d 1st pg of ur updateee🥳

it was fabbb abhiii❤️

anddd hawwttt tooo☺️☺️

jus loveddd itt😊

amazingly written😉
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Mujhe ek doubt hai...

Shaadi hui ya nahi? 😉 😃

Vaise... Hawt to tha... And I'm very bad at commenting... To itne se kaam chalale...

Write more man! You write nicely!
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Nice os
I really liked it
Keep on writting like this
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hayeee.. kya os hai..
wah wah kya baat hai...

superb abhi
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superb.. Thanks for pm dear..
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arey wah abhi tune itni jaldi OS likhdi😆

unres
kya hot OS tha abhi
awesome
tumne toh ek saal baad ki bhi story likhi
nice one abhi
i loved it absolutely
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AMaZing.. want to read something like dis.. from many days.. n finally i got one... thanks for writing dis.. beautifully written..
Ramya keep demanding 😊

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