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thiyamappy

@thiyamappy

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#921

one of the best DND update so far.. congo to you.
Its just beautifully written and I was really expecting this update and u pulled it in a best way.
This is the kind of update I was looking fwd to have the best convo b/w Arnav n Khushi clearing his deed why he had to let her go and boy I must sayu nailed it.
felt every words Arnav said to Khushi from asking her not to get married, he loving her till how he was suffering for letting her go.
Hope Goa will bring them joy with the cupids around them in the form of Payal and Ana

Thanks for the pm n for this awesome update 😊

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#922

I m amazed...

Sandy..

It must have been the most difficult moment for u to pen down such a critical situation..

To convey the real intention of Arnav...

Behind all that he did to distance Khushi from himself...

Khushi has a golden heart..

It's too obvious that she'll forgive him...

But pls tell me...

Now what r u expecting from the readers..

Should they rejoice that Khushi will be back in Arnav's life...

Let's say ..

After a couple of scenes...or during the rituals of Anu's wedding...

Khushi taken for granted should not be one of

the options available ever..

Love u..

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#923

That was mind blowing ... I feel so bad for both

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TrueLoveIs4ever

@TrueLoveIs4ever

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#924

This part threw all the pieces of heart like a tornado:"Arnav revved the engine. Then stopped. Took his foot off the accelerator. "Khushi!" He called out to the love of his life."
Oh my god. Wow. As if this wasn't heartbreakingly beautiful in its entirety, this was just wow. A great chapter but I wasn't expecting it at all!

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Moumita

@_Oorja_

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#925

I had a mixed reaction while reading this chapter.

I thought now Arnav will try to win Khushi back, well he did try, if we can call that encounter so, but the out result was something I guessed it, but couldn't accept it.

I know you must have some plan regarding them and I will wait for it come in open.

Don't think I didn't like it because the way you have written it had me glued until I reached the last word.

In a very mature and understanding way you have written it and I really loved it.

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fairycake

@fairycake

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#926

Wow Sandhya that was amazingly written. Arnav 's revelations finally come and blow Khushi away. At least now she understands his reasons for the break up. Of course it's too much for kushi to assimilate - probably too drained & exhausted. Can't wait for the next chap to see where they go from here.

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#927

wow...superb update...

so well written... Arnav revealed all... where they will go from here???

Can't wait for the next update...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: sheena29

It had all.. maa, mandir, pyaar, dosti, gussa... 😆

Never in my wildest dreams did I think I will write a 70's angry young man saga 🤣 But I seriously have 😆

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#929

Di loved the update!! both could get everything out today!! plz continue sooN!

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Mirabell

@Mirabell

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#930

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Hi Sandhya

First - apologies for this late a response. It is almost time for your next update isnt it? I was traveling with sporadic online-access. Anyway - here is what your update meant to me:

This one broke and mended my heart at the same time. An emotional wringer of sorts - more like a crescendo of emotional wringer. I knew that this confrontation was imminent and I wondered how you were going to play it our for us. Well, it was marvelously done with all the bells and whistles. Now she knows, and he knows that she knows.. no more hiding and no more waiting. His heart is out in the open for her - either to hold it in herself or trample over it. I have faith in this love.. :) so I will wait for you to unfold this for us readers.

I have always maintained [much like a broken record] that your prose is poetry in itself.. Here is a line that stayed with me..

Khushi was torn between the need to hold him and to run away from it. The farther she wanted to move the closer she found herself to Arnav.

That tension between staying and feeling the need to run away is again so well portrayed.. and the irony of love - that the more she wanted to move away from him, the closer she found herself to him. :) Your ability to provide your reader with the insight of how their love works magic, while, at the same time, leave your characters in the dark about it makes it all the more engaging.. :)

Khushi recoiled as if she were being attacked. "Don't do that dammit. I'm not going to hurt you." It wouldn't have hurt as badly if she had knifed him.

This one felt gut-wrenching..both her reaction and his response.. two people in tremendous pain. I have often wondered if authors feel the emotion that they write in their characters.. if that is true, then this must have been a very difficult one indeed - perhaps harder than the one when they broke up, in my opinion.. :)

Well, what can I say, Sandhya, you weave one heck of a magical tale with every single update of yours. And with every update, you make me fall in love with your Arnav a little bit more. :) I am on his side and I believe in second chances.. :)

Edited by Mirabell - 11 years ago

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