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Posted: 11 years ago
Chilli Jet 😆
Liked how you described Khushi's demeanor changing with the airline employee each time she said something to please her or otherwise!
Arnav's thoughts that he had penned were so poignant. I understand he has only himself to blame but even so.
Garima's thoughts about her daughter and her family's hapiness perfectly summed up the essence of a mother. That's all she wants. And her knowing her husband was looking out for her, just left me with a warm feeling. Khushi has had such a lovely example set for her growing up.
An out to charm Arnav - Shashi and Garima didn't stand a chance!
And now for the car ride...

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Posted: 11 years ago
This was a beautifully written tension free chapter. The meeting with khushi's parents and Arnav was lovely. Wow Arnav and khushi on a road trip. He wants khushi back in his life. Its not easy Arnav, he will have to be patience to win her back in his life. It was a fantastic update. Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was a fabulous update.arnav realised his mistake,wanting to correct it nd trying again to woo khushi.lovely.khushi scared that she would give in to her feelings for arnav,therefore trying to maintain distance.but seems destiny have other plans.loved how arnav interacted wid khushi's parents.it was touching.continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update. would love to know NK reaction when Khushi revealed her past to him
thanks for pm x
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Posted: 11 years ago
just awesome loved the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Rocking update!!!

So Arnav met the parents he so desperately wanted to meet.

Hmmm...Khushi's heart picked up unconsciously on feeling Arnav around wow... The sudden sweat beads on the upper lips and nervousness.., definitely not the stress Khushi, now you know.

On seeing each other they both were transported to Diwali night and there awkward encounter on terrace...results...

A) Khushi was angry on the look in Arnav's eyes and thought "how dare he felt that way, when he is responsible for her being in another man's arms", and then she became restless when blankness took over and a sudden urge to come clear about the past to NK. So now NK knows that Arnav is not just the brother of Khushi's best friend.

My curiosity, does Khushi feel guilty of hiding having a past from her fianc and that to so close or the fact the she was just moments ago comparing the kiss of her fianc with her ex, and she just cannot stop think about her ex with or without his presence???

B) The second result is one I waited for so long... The Realization of His Loss ...so I'm quoting from the update...

"Why then does it feel as if the earth just shattered and cracked open right under my feet and the massive hollow opening is sucking me into nothingness? Why then do I want to rip the man apart? Take him down physically, so that he can never walk the face of this earth.

Because the will to live has risen far above the fear of loss.
I need her in my life to feel alive. And I feel alive for the very first time in half a decade. I feel better than ever since she walked through my door.
I want to live. With her.
For her. For me. For us.
But ...
Do I still have the right?


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Khushi still have feeling and a lot of what if and if only's in her heart but that same heart was crushed so badly along with her trust in Arnav that Arnav needs to work rally hard to redeem himselfand woo Khushi back. He is working his charms on her parents which already have worked but long way to go with Khushi...

Quotes of Khushi's feeling and restraining of herself to fall for Arnav's charms again...

"Khushi's heart leapt and crashed. She didn't want to acknowledge his compliment. It would mean stepping into the zone she didn't intend to tread.

When Arnav touched Garima's feet for blessings, Khushi felt an inexplicable hollowness in her heart. It grew into one of enormous proportions when her mother blessed and then hugged him before letting him go."

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Arnav already knows and acknowledged that he needs Khushi in his life if he wanna live like is next breath and the way you put it's was beautiful that the "future seems beautiful as the set destination it's the path which is challenging to reach there and that path comprise of licking Khushi's wounded heart ad wooing her again."

"His step was light as he pushed the luggage cart towards the car park. The future ahead seemed bright with all possibilities, although the journey towards it appeared more challenging than ever. He didn't see any shame in revelling over his victory.
However, he wasn't foolish enough to believe he had bridged any gaps. Arnav was perfectly aware that he had miles to go before he could even dream about embracing the pure joy that he had always craved."

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Garima as Arnav read is a strong, confident and beautiful lady. Her observation of Arnav from what she heard and saw so far made her say her daughter the below quotes...

*"This will be the best thing for you. You won't regret it. I think you better leave, Beta." *

Not to forget she believes in "everything happens for a reason".

There were so many things in this update but for me the best part for Arnav's realization and his determination to get his life back so subtly written in this update.

Thanks sandy you made my day.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'll be back to complete my comment !!!
Updated on Pg 80.
Edited by bkamber - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arnav is very naughty! Great manipulator! Lovely update. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really really nice n anazing update..
But y Arnav is now doing all this...when Khushi as almost moved on??? Was it fair to dump her for no mistake of hers aftee thoroughly using her?😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just came across your story , and just read it in one go ! It's a very beautiful story . Just love the way you write ,and have described every emotion !!! It's just amazing , will really love to read more ! Hope Arnav will fight for his love , eagerly waiting to know how the story will progress

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