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Posted: 11 years ago
Why are you not updating , pls update fast
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chowanisha

thnk u every1...

hope u al r liking it...
i am just a bit busy nw so chota updates ...
and mrever i cant thnk much mre so i cudnt make it interesting so i wud take time to update next part wid lots of fun and sandhir moments...
thnk a lot guys...😊😆


Can't wait to see what happens next
Please update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just read ur story I really loved it plz do pm me wen u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its been a long tym ya ...wen r u updatin.. eagerly waitin pls pm me wen u update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey I am sorry cudnt update ...

Part 8:~

Recap:in car rd ws teasing sanyu and sanyu ws gtng irritated...arohi and vids were giggling on sanyu's words...

Jiggy:arrey sanyu itna gussa kyu hote ho???

Sanyu turned towards jiggy and murmers

Sanyu:gussa na hu to kya is randhir ki bache ko puja karu????

Jiggy:randhir ki bache???ye kab hua???

Sanyu slaps her forehead...kausto elbows him and he understands dat he ws a little loud...

Jiggy murmers sorry and sanyu turns frnt ...

Rd:mere bache???ms p.a !!!!

Sanyu:yes SIR...

Arjun:chor na rd ...acha yeh batao sanyu tum kaha khilana chahte ho???

Kausto:iske hat ka bana hua khana

Arohi:ha aur bahar bhi khayenge

Vids:lo phirse tum dono shuru ho gaye

Sanyu:ummm thik hai dono hi kar lenge...khush...

Arohi:o sanyu...u r the bestest and she flungs her hands to reach sanyu and in btwn embraces vids too...

Sanyu also tries to hug arohi ...in short vids being in the middle ws literally squeezd ...

Vids:choro tum dono...hato ...

Arjun:lagta hai do pagal ek jagah mil rahe hai...and evry1 laughs...

Dey reach the site...

It ws an open land...and the place ws also seemed less used...the whole place ws surrounded by fields,open lands and few houses whose basement ws only complete...and few complete houses...

On their plot dey cud see some boys playing football and 2 grls standing at the corner...

Jiggy:in bacho ne to khelne ki jagah bana dali

Sahil:ummm mei inhe hata ta hu...

Rd ws going to stop him bt bfre him sanyu spoke up...

Sanyu:rehne de sahil...jab yaha sab buildings ban jayega tab ye bache khelenge kaha????

Aur abhi yeh sab chote hai...khelne de...kya pata bad me khelne ka time hi na paye...

Rd just smiles...

arjun:sanyu is right...hum apna kam karte hai...wo in logo ko bina hataye bhi ho sakta hai...

arohi:ok...

parth gives the blue print to rd and he spreads it on the bonnet...

dey again discuss over it...and then moves to the plot ...jiggy and arohi does some measure mnt while kaustoki checks the soil ...

After 1 hour dey were over with it...

Jiggy:phew...ho gaya...I thnk hum kal se hi shuru kar sakte hai...hum aj hi arrangemnts bhi kar denge...

Arohi:yeah...

Rd:ok den...to phir chalet hai...

Arohi:o my god sanyu????(she screamed)luking at the plot

Al turned following her gaze and dere dey sw sanyu playing wid those kids on the field ...even the 2 grls joined...

Parth:jhalli...

Arjun:guys..i have a plan

Rd:umm lets play...

All:wat??

Rd;kya???football nhi khel sakte kya????o commn...its such a easy game...

Sahil:yeah fine...d boys opened their shoes and socks...rd opened his coat and rolled the shirt over his elbow...

Arohi:chal kausto,vids...(while opening his heels)

Kausto:per mujhe khelna nhi ata

Vids:koi bat nhi tu bas kick kar dena...ab chal bhi...

Dey al stepped in the plot...and rd ws walking ahead ...while playing sanyu stud in the way rd ws coming and ws mving back to gve a head push to the ball which ws in air...

And bang...

Sanyu banged wid rd's chest and in a reflex rd held her shoulder...

Sanyu turned her face rght and her eyes popped out...

Rd ws smirking seeing her expressions...

Sanyu immediately turned to face him...and ws going to say something wen rd jumped a little and gave the head push to the ball...

Rd:dekha...tumse yeh nhi hota...

Sanyu:wat????ap ko kisne kaha ki mei yeh nhi kar pati...

Rd:its logic ms p.a...u have a pea sized brain in a big head ...so basically its hollow and if u had hit the ball actualy if the bal had hit u ,u wud hav fallen down...

Sanyu:o realy...den lets have a challenge

Parth to arjun:lo ab iska challenge shuru...

Arjun:ha to???mera bhai bhi challenges pasand karta hai

Parth;aha...sanyu challenge to karegi...aur jeetegi bhi...per jo jitney ka inam manegi wo to

Arjun:rd bhi acha football khelta hai

Parth:sanyu bhi...

Wen vids interrupts...

Vids:to dekh lete hai nay eh boss aur p.a mei kaun jeet ta hai...simple...

Rd:hey guys...ms. p.a ne mujhe football me challenge kiya hai...

Sanyu:aur harne wale ko jeetne wale ka har bat manni padegi 1 week tak...

Rd:wo to tum karti hi ho...

Sanyu:per ab wo nhi hoga...and she stuck her tongue out...

Jiggy:per kaun kiski team mei hai????

Rd:lets play boys vs girls...

Vids:per bacho me to ladke zyada hai

One of the boys:koi bat nhi didi...hum kuch bhaiya ko support karenge aur kuch ap logo ko...oye zee tu di k waha ja,mir tu bhaiya ki waha...blah blah blah...

Arohi:hmmm ab barabar ka members hai...chalo shuru karte hai...

Rd:wait a min referee kaun hoga????

Wen another boy speaks up:koi bat nhi bhaiya mei ban jata hu...waise bhi ladke hi jitenge...

Wen a grl speaks up:oye mayor...hum jitenge...

Mir:nhi hum

Vids:arrey arrey khel te hai phir dekh lena...thik hai??????

Mayor:ha ha chalo...wo ball ko bich mei rakhta hai...rd aur sanyu dono ate hai...and mayor zor se siti marta hai...

And rd soon tuk control over the ball...

Sanyu:arohi guard kar

Arohi ws tring to take it an dws successful too ...she and sanyu ws running towards boys side and passing ...dey were almost near the goal and arohi ws wid the ball and boys rung bhnd dem...and goal...

Jiggy cudnt save it...

Sanyu and arohi did hi5...

Mir;thik hai didi...ek hi goal hua hai...kyu bhaiya...and he luks at rd ...and bth winks at each odr...

Sanyu:whatever...

Again the game strted and dis time parth and arjun ws ws playing wid the ball...

Vids tuk the ball frm parth and moved towards the boys side wen sahil guarded her and vids passed the ball to sanyu inbtwn his legs...

Sanyu ws running wid the ball wen a boy tuk the charge over it...

It ws shifting frm boys to grls and back to boys...after 2mins...rd cud do a goal as he gave a tough luk to kausto and she feard him and she stud straight and the ball made its way to the goal...

Arohi;kya yar kausto...itna mat dar...

Kausto:wo wo

And the boys strted laughing...

Sanyu:kausto agar iske bad dar gayi na to tujhe khana nhi milega...samjhi...

Kausto;ok ok...

Mayor:cHalo chalo...

Again the match strted...and nw arjun and arohi were fighting over the ball...arjun ws rung and he moved towards the mud area...wher he slipped and fell down bt he also tuk arohi wid him and dat to she fall on top...*eyelock*...

Sanyu and rd went dere and bth luked at dem den at each odr and den at the ball which ws lying at a dist on mud...

And bth ran twrds the ball and sanyu ws going to kick the ball wen rd slightly pushed her by his shoulder and sanyu fell on the mud...her white Patiala ws nw brown...her cheeks were luking as if dipped in chocolate ...

She gt up and luked at rd angrily who ws stnding at a dist wid his one leg resting on the ball...

Seeing sanyu evry1 strted laughing...

Mayor:hahahhahahaha didi ko dekho...

Zee:didi kya lag rahi ho tum...mei bhi gira tha per ap to...hahahahhahahahaha

Evry1 ws laughing...

Sanyu acted as if she is puling up her sleeves ...

Sanyu:bohot hasi aa rahi hai haina?????

Arjun:bohot...

Sanyu:ok fine...ab meri bari...and wid dat she ran and caught mayor and dropped him on mud...

Den she caught vids and pulled her dere...

Mayor strted thrwing mud balls...evryone ws nw drenched in mud...except rd...he ws the only one who gt saved frm every1's mud balls...

Parth tried to pull him bt he cunningly gt himself out of his hold...

Evry1 ws laughing at each odr...

Zee:arrey wo bhaiya to bach gaye...

Rd:huh...koi kuch nhi kar paoge...mei ekdum saaf sutra hu ...

Arohi:o realy...to phir piche mur...

Rd turned and sw smiling sanyu

Rd:tum???agar mujhpe mitti pheke to I wl fire u...

Sanyu:ok...per agar mitti appe khud ba khud lag jaye to???

Rd:matlab??

Sanyu:matlab ki yeh...and wid dat she jumped on him and rd cudnt keep the balance and bth fell down...

Sanyu still on that position:sir ab to ap mujhe fire nhi kar sakte na????

Rd:I wil surely do...tumhare wajase mere white shirt pe pura dag lag gaya

Sanyu:ha to???dho lena...and she ws getting up bt a string frm her kurti near her bosom gt stuck in his shirt and she again rested on him...

Rd:utho...mujhse ab bhi chipki kyu ho???hato...and he ws pushing her bt she shoved his hands...

Sanyu:rukiye...meri kurti ki ek dhaga apke button me phas chuka hai...

Rd:o god...to use khicho ,kato kuch bhi karo...lekin gt up rght nw...

Sanyu:arrey dhire se nikalungi...agar yeh kat gaya to design kharab ho jayega...and she tries to untwst the string...

Dere evry1 ws laughing seeing dem...and approached dem...

Arohi:kya sanyu aj rd ki baho me hi rehna hai kya????

Bth gave angry glares to her...

Sanyu:ha ha itne bare insan hai chance mar rhi hu...khush...

Rd:wat do u mean ???ki mei bada insan nhi hu????and by the way ladkiya marti hai mujhpe to phir tum bhi try mar rhi ho????

Sanyu just gave a smile and gt up...

Arjun:waise ek bat bolu

Rd:rehne de...mujhe pata hai kya bolega...per agar bola to teri kher nhi...

Arjun:ok...bad mei bol dunga...

Wen suddenly black clouds covers the sky...

Parth:o shit barish hogi lagta hai

Sahil:acha hi hai sab dhul jayenge

Mayor:to phir hum to chale...mummy datengi...bye bye...

Odrs:ha ha hum bhi chalte hai...bye bhaiya didi...

Vids:sanyu tu kahi shed k niche khara ho ja...

Jiggy:kyu

Parth:use zukam ho jata hai barish se...

Sanyu:arrey tab bachi thi...ab nhi hoga chil...

Parth:ha ha taki phirse tujhe aunty se dat khani pare...arey wo pareshan ho jayegi jab unhe pata chalega ki tujhe barish k wajase bhukar ho gayi hai chal...

Sanyu doesn't say a word and rain strts...

parth:lo chal jaldi...

sanyu:nhi mujhe bhigna hai...pls...ab mujhe ma bhi nhi datengi...sachi...

parth:acha???

sanyu:hmmm...sach...

arohi:offo mei agar bhukhar aa bhi gaya hum dhyan rakh lenge...chal na...

parth:per

vids:offo...chalo...

and den dey al strts jumping on the water fields...spashing the water on each another...

sanyu ws just stnding and luking up...

arjun:isse kya hua

rd:tera dost hai...pagal hai to karname bhi waise hi hogi...

jiggy pulled sanyu twrds dem and dey al jumped together on water spashing it on sanyu...

sanyu:stop it guys...and she also jumps ...

after sometime...

arjun:i think aj k liye bohot zyada ho gaya hai...chalo chalo ghar jake change kar lete hai...

arohi:yeah r8...

sanyu and vids:yeah r8(imitating arohi)

arohi gave them what-ws dat-for look...and bth of laughed...

kausto:ha ha chalo chalo phir sanyu ka trt bhi to hai

sanyu slaps her forehead and then pushes kaustoki slightly by touching forehead...

sanyu:bhukkad...chal...


precap:trt...and lots mre fun...

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Posted: 11 years ago
am back wid my stalking ...😎😆
awesome update yar..
loved it...
u penned it beautifully...
the masti..the play..everything is awessom...
i just loved it to d core..
y i feel sanyu parents ya mom is dead...
looking forward...
update soon...
thanks for d pm!!
love,harika..
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
harika tu first kaise aati hai??😆

loved the update anisha!!!

it was awesome

you showed their masti very nicely

i was feeling as if i was playing football😆

sandhir fights were as usual cute

continue soon
Edited by Asapom - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress

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So cute the match was lovely

Rd and sanyu ek dusre pr ohhh

Kash vids show mein bhi aisi hi hoti

I loved their masty pr yeh toh pata hi nhi chala ki match jeeta kaun girls ya boys

Aur deal bhi toh thi sanyu baat manegi ya rd

So condfusion next update jaldi krna

Love,
Sheron
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow just awesome update dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome wala update! :-)
thoda late tha but chalta hai re
ure a very good writer
and iss baar thoda jaldi pls😆

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