sandhir ff:always together-2 part 24pg 89thread1

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Posted: 11 years ago
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heya guys...i am overwhelmed wid the response i got wid my frst ff always together and so i have come up wid season 2...i am giving the prologue nw...after sometime i wud definitely update the frst part...i hope dis time too i wud b able to get a place in ur mind...
prologue...

london...
morning 6 a.m
tring...tring...
a lady knocks the door...:sir sir...u have a call waiting...sir pls get up...
a voice comes frm inside:merry pick up the call and see who it is...and pls give it to arjun...i am tired and i want to sleep...and pls dnt knock again...

merry:ok sir...
she goes down and ws about to receive the call wen d door bell rang and the ring stopped...merry went to the door and opened it wid a smile...:good morning sir...hope u had a nice jog...(a handsome well built masculine figure comes in in tracks and jacket )
yeah yeah i had...anyways is he sleeping yet...
merry:yes sir ...and sir there is a call on landline randhir sir told if important den u to attend it...
arjun:yeah sure merry and pls cud u get me a glass of juice...
merry:yes sir its ready...i am telling stewart to give it to u...she went away...and again the landline started ringing...
tring tring...arjun picks it up...
arjun:hello arjun shekhawat here...
caller:arjun ...hey
arjun:dad...hey hw r u...ap mere phn pe bhi to call kar sakte the
dad:acha phn tere pass hai kya...aur meine rd ko bhi call kiya tha per wo to utha hi nhi raha...
arjun:o sorry dad...wo kal hum rat tak kam kar rhe the to mera phn shayad rd k rum mei hi hai aur wo so raha hai aj chutti jo hai...
dad:acha...wo so raha hai...chutti hai to kya phir bhi office k kam karega...use aj office mat jane dena...
arjun:yes dad...wen he hears his dad coughing badly...hey dad kya hua ...ap ki tabiyat to thik hai
dad:ha ha bas ...acha arjun aisa kya ho nhi sakta ki tum dono mere pass ajao india mei
arjun:dad kya hua hai apko batayiye na
dad:nhi beta tumhare ma k chale jane k bad tum dono bhi chalegaye...ab bohot akela mehsus hota hai...
arjun:dad hum aa rahe hai ..ap tension mat kijiye...mei rd ko bhi mana lunga...ap dhyan rakhiye apna...
dad:yes beta...and dey talked about some deals and den hang up
arjun p.o.v
hume india jana hi hoga...rd ko samajhna hoga...dad ki bate sunkar kuch thik nhi lag raha ...he imediately calls his assistnat:mark can u pls book two tickets back to dehli...



so here ws the prologue...i wil nt give the character sketch bt dis time dere characters wud b revealed in the ff ...i hope u like dis...pls do comment...wid love...

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link to frst always together :~
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres...
awesome prologue...
i loved it...
it is intriguing...
u penned it beautifully...
thanks fror d pm!!
love,harika...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah bhai wah. Tussi toh mera dil khush kar diya. Itna jaldi jaldi update kar diya. I m impressed and the prologue is mysterious. Now post the first chapter soon. Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow new story

I m super excited yaar...

Prologue is just awesome one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!! Super excited!!
Continue! Great piece of writing yaar!!
Keep up!! Looking forward!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay nisha...
Was waiting ki kab tum start karogi...
Loved it ...
Part 1 jaldi jaldi update karro...

Love
Ayesha..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anyania

Wah bhai wah. Tussi toh mera dil khush kar diya. Itna jaldi jaldi update kar diya. I m impressed and the prologue is mysterious. Now post the first chapter soon. Waiting...

hehehhe thnk u...ya i wil update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Wow new story

I m super excited yaar...

Prologue is just awesome one...

thnk u so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziness123

Yay nisha...
Was waiting ki kab tum start karogi...
Loved it ...
Part 1 jaldi jaldi update karro...

Love
Ayesha..

thnks ayesha...i wil update soon

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