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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow that was an awesome update a fabulous one i say but i do gotto admit i was a tat bit of sad but i was also satisfied arnav vented all his anger and frustration on khushi which surely was needed and a long time due...how could she say something like that ''try to admit the truth'' that almost triggered rather transpired him to do such a thing no brother who loves his sister like arnav does here can hear such things abt his sister so then unleashed the asr in him i must say the transistion the phases the behaviour was pretty accurate according to the scenario the way he said i loved you proves that he doubt whether he loves her now or not she actually believed adi after all dis has transpired between her and arnav ...the great thing he admitted to himself that he was holding onto tnings which was never his and can never be realisation has hit him hard but its better late than never he learned this the hard way i guess he would now be stronger than ever for his sister and for himself as well he has also learned to letting to learn your love go whether it be one sided or two sided ...after all that transpired between him and adi khushi tried to stop him thinking that she can still control him but arnav proved her otherwise she is so one his only family being anjali...the awesome thing was that he still didn't show anything what transpired between them to la he actually said the truth to her but it wasn't that obvious to understand anf he didn't care for her whether she ate or not bcoz he would letting her come on to his life easily if he cared for her bcoz of her child that wouldn't be very easy for her great he didn't showed his care and asked la to do so...when will khushi's truth of her child would be out bcoz i think her father has a fair idea whose child it is as she herself that he forced on her which he knew can never happen bcoz his sister was raped too that would be intresting when the truth comes out in the open ...he signed those divorce papers i guess khushi should do that too bcoz she herself admitted she can't keep him happy so for his sake and his peace she should sign those papers ...i must say this was a brillint chapter all the characters u have portrayed was awesome and the changes in them was awesome too arnqv a patient loveable passionate man khushi a selfish brat all did glimses was shown but it is proved and the charcters changes were awesome it was not all of a sudden but it was slowly building and then it was transpired into this big ...great job commendable job awesome fabulous running out of adjectives now...arnav is a passionate man he does things wid a passion he loved her like a maniac now waiting for new avatar towards khushi...great update do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: rockingchamp

wow that was an awesome update a fabulous one i say but i do gotto admit i was a tat bit of sad but i was also satisfied arnav vented all his anger and frustration on khushi which surely was needed and a long time due...how could she say something like that ''try to admit the truth'' that almost triggered rather transpired him to do such a thing no brother who loves his sister like arnav does here can hear such things abt his sister so then unleashed the asr in him i must say the transistion the phases the behaviour was pretty accurate according to the scenario the way he said i loved you proves that he doubt whether he loves her now or not she actually believed adi after all dis has transpired between her and arnav ...the great thing he admitted to himself that he was holding onto tnings which was never his and can never be realisation has hit him hard but its better late than never he learned this the hard way i guess he would now be stronger than ever for his sister and for himself as well he has also learned to letting to learn your love go whether it be one sided or two sided ...after all that transpired between him and adi khushi tried to stop him thinking that she can still control him but arnav proved her otherwise she is so one his only family being anjali...the awesome thing was that he still didn't show anything what transpired between them to la he actually said the truth to her but it wasn't that obvious to understand anf he didn't care for her whether she ate or not bcoz he would letting her come on to his life easily if he cared for her bcoz of her child that wouldn't be very easy for her great he didn't showed his care and asked la to do so...when will khushi's truth of her child would be out bcoz i think her father has a fair idea whose child it is as she herself that he forced on her which he knew can never happen bcoz his sister was raped too that would be intresting when the truth comes out in the open ...he signed those divorce papers i guess khushi should do that too bcoz she herself admitted she can't keep him happy so for his sake and his peace she should sign those papers ...i must say this was a brillint chapter all the characters u have portrayed was awesome and the changes in them was awesome too arnqv a patient loveable passionate man khushi a selfish brat all did glimses was shown but it is proved and the charcters changes were awesome it was not all of a sudden but it was slowly building and then it was transpired into this big ...great job commendable job awesome fabulous running out of adjectives now...arnav is a passionate man he does things wid a passion he loved her like a maniac now waiting for new avatar towards khushi...great update do continue soon...





I am out of words, I don't know what to say! I am so very glad you loved this chapter!!! And thank you for this wonderful comment!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: InLuvWithASR





I am out of words, I don't know what to say! I am so very glad you loved this chapter!!! And thank you for this wonderful comment!!!
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It was beyond the way i loved the chapter...i think everybody including me that why sudden changes in khushi's behaviour was it out guilt or she felt something but u have portrayed it perfectly well that she herself didn't want to leave it hurt her but she couldn't realise it but when she is realisng i guess so that she is late and now it cannot ne mended bcoz arnav's is beyong broken...arnav's character was also in question that he didn't have respect esteem for himself and many other things but he has realised that his sister has suffered alone all this he cnt give her pain he have to face all this alone she wasn't his love he was in denial he thot he had recd the greatest pain and if khushi is not by his side he would die but he understood quite late that what sacrifice his sister has made may be she was wrong on her part but he realised it now and he is stronger than ever emotionally a man out for justice and he shall have it...u have slowly bought out the character shases of their life that was phenomenon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
well she wanted revenge she got it

hope she is happy now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
oh god poor arnav he never think khushi will belive that dog too bad 😡he will never forgive her for that ..oh so sad he s going to give her divorse 😭when khushi will knw that dog true colour😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Congrats on new thread!
Finally, Arnav used his brains!
What a stupidity to carry HER burden!
So, now, he's giving divorce!
Hope Khushi suffers & Arnav moves on in his life!!

Continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
nice update
hope khushi realises her mistake and expresses her love for arnav soon before its too late
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Awesome chapter...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
When are you going to update?
I can't see ArShi like this 😭 💔
Heart breaking update 😭 🥺
Hope things get better for them *fingers crossed*
Please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
amazing
cont soon
and plz do pm me
ive sent u a buddy request

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