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Shahnaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was cute little one shot..

I enjoyed it..

That was a well penned write-up.. I liked it..

And I never have issues with length.. I always look for reading something short :P

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Khyati

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Posted: 11 years ago

First of all,congratulations on becoming a Goldie!! 🥳

The OS was just too fabulous! 😎

The intensity was ah-mazing! 😳

The sudden need to claim what is rightfully yours in front of the world is just undeniable!
You potrayed that extremely well! 👏

And the end was *faints on imagining such a scene* 😆

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trishika rajput

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Posted: 11 years ago

Congrats for being a goldie 👏👏

awesome os😃

and love kriyaansh...😳

firstly it was their secret relationship then they couldn't resist and disclose it in front of whole class by kissing...😳

THANKS FOR PM

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sun_flower60

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Posted: 11 years ago

congrats...

and loved the OS... :D 🤗🤗

short but really good...😃

Edited by sun_flower60 - 11 years ago

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pia

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Posted: 11 years ago

cngraaatss fr being a goldie,aur maine bhi chotu sa time nikal kar tumhara os padh hi liyaa😃 it was superbb!!!!!! bechara rey apne gf ko bhi dkh nehi paata acchi tarah se!!!!!! when he held her and said frgt it and the reply he gt wass unexpected and gr88!!!!!!! hayyee kitna romntic couple hai!!!!!😉

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nature-beauty

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Posted: 11 years ago

congo manny for becoming goldie

tera OS oops bohot short tha but bohot acha tha yaar

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madreader

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Posted: 11 years ago

vow

really cute

d kiss

dey r extremely adorable

thanxx for pm

loved it

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glmorous_diva

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Posted: 11 years ago

amazing updaye
kriyansh ne puri class ke samne kiss kiya
finally rey wish puri ho gyi..luvd d ending..

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Mehvash Naazneen

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice and Cute OS

loved it totally ❤️

rey and kriya r just adorable

loved them 😳

N the OS is penned very well👍🏼...

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sun_flower60

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Posted: 11 years ago

superb one...

I loved it ...😃

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