Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 16

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Omg I didn't realise u guys liked it soo much. Don't kill me ok. I'll post it up in an hour. Promise. I'll try to post up 2 parts today. Just wait a bit longer. sorry.😊

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PART-19

Angad is shocked seeing Kripa llos econtrol like that. She just keeps shaking him saying, "don't ever talk about my son, I can't live without him. What else do u want. You took everything of mines 4 years ago. Now don't say that my bacha will die, please don't. He's the only reason why I'm still living today or else I would've died a long time ago." She falls on her knees. Angad is too shocked at Kripa's reaction to say anything. He thinks Angad, u shouldn't have said that. What's the baby's fault in it, and wishing that somebody died. How low can u get.

A: "I'm sorry Kripa. I shouldn't have said that. Trust me, I didn't mean to say it. He then picks her up slowly by the arms and walks her to the car. She wipes her tears away, but is still shaking like crazy. The thought of losing Adi is scaring her to death. Angad feels really ashamed at himself. He starts the car but it doesn't work. They're on a stranded road in the middle of the night. He keeps trying. Kripa is a bit calm now, but still very angry at Angad. Angad gets out to see what the problem is, he comes back and tells Kripa that something is wrong with the engine.

K: "why won't u call somebody."

A: "I did the mechanic is gonna get here in like 2 hours, we're just gonna have to wait. They both sit in the car. Kripa is thinking, why does destiny always keeps bringing the two of us together. Angad on the other hand is feeling really hungry. He searches his car for some food but doesn't find anything. Kripa opens her purse and sees a chocolate bar in it. She gives it to Angad. Angad breaks it in half and gives one half to Kripa and eats the other himself.

A (trying to scare Kripa): "You know what this is the perfect time to take my revenge on you. I can do whatever I want to u, and nobody can do anything to me."

K (smiles sarcastically): "Only your gandha dimaag can think of something like that. And anywayz what can u do to me now. You've already gotten my body, and the other thing is u can kill me, which really doesn't bother me coz I died a long time ago. So whatever u wish. I really don't care."

Angad is surprised at how cold-hearted Kripa has become.

K: "Ha I would love to look at ur darling mother's face when she finds out that I spent yet another night with u." She smiles.

Angad: "Shut up, Kripa. I hate it when u talk about my ma like that. Just coz she brought the truth about u infront of everybody u hate her."

K: "Angad there is no use in trying to prove my self right to u anymore. Coz u know why I don't even give a damn about u. Tomm. Even if u want me back in ur life I wouldn't come back to a person like u, who left his wife and unborn child."

A: "oye what is this wife and child bull-shit u be going on and on about ha. I'm sick of hearing it. And I wouldn't want u back, even if u were the last woman on earth."

K: "whateva"

They both feel satisfied when fighting with eachother coz they feel like they're taking out 4 years of hatred on each other.

Kripa feels really calm now, and so is Angad.

Kripa is really tired and yawns. She's also worried that Adi and Khushi must b waiting for her. So she calls them. Khushi answers.

K: "Hey, wat r u guys doing."

K: 'ok, umm u guys go ahead and eat dinner. I'm gonna be a bit late ok. Bye."

She hangs up, and tries to go to sleep. She feels really cold. Angad notices and so on purpose he opens his window, she she can feel even colder. Kripa is freezing now, but doesn't say anything. Angad thinks, Damn this girl is soo damn stubborn. She'd rather freeze to death than just ask me once to put the window up. But me bhi Angad Khanna hu. Until she asks me, I'll not put the window up. He smiles wickedly. Kripa touches her bare arms, and hugs herself, turning towards the side. Angad gets mad and says, "why can't u just ask me to put the damn window up, why r u so damn ziddi."

Kripa (sleepily) : Coz baby I know u really well by now. I know u were waiting 4 me to ask, so I just didn't. You might not have figured me out by now. But I truly loved u and I'm aware of ur every single thought." Angad is really confused again and just puts the window up slowly. He thinks I don't care what u say Kripa, but I still hate u. I will never b able to forgive u for breaking my heart and trust. They both fall asleep, after a while they hear a horn blowing. Angad wakes up first, Kripa's chuni is blowing on his face. He takes it off and stretches his long arms, which touch Kripa's face, and she wakes up. She pushes his hands away from her face. Kripa thinks it feels like old days when I used to wake up and find Angad by my side. Holding me with love, and protecting me from the world. But today, there's a difference. That love has changed into hatred. Angad is also thinking the same thing. He gets out, and goes to the mechanic.

Sorry guys, I'll continue later. I'll post up a longer next part today. I'm really sick today, I have a really bad headache and feel like sleeping. I'm dying over here, my head is really blowing up. But I promise I'll continue today, after I wake up. Bye. Lots of love from Raman.

And yeah In the next part Angad is going to find out that Adi is the kid that he hates so much. I have a really good story planned but just wait ok. Let me just give u a few ideas. Adi is gonna get into an accident, with Angad's car. Kripa is gonna think that Angad did that on purpose coz u know how he said that I wish that kid died. Angad is gonna be really confused coz he loves Adi alot, but won't be able to accept that he is the kid whome he hated so much. But don't worry Adi's gonna be ok, Angad is still gonna love Adi. But still gonna hate Kripa and still thinks that Adi is not his son. Then the show with Mr. Sharma is gonna come. So just wait for more. Take care. Lots of Love from Raman.😊