Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 14

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Posted: 20 years ago

its really awsome plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz cont fast

when we will get ur next part to read?????????

waiting eagerly for it

lots of love

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Posted: 20 years ago
pls continue. This is getting even better
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Posted: 20 years ago
please can you write more fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
ok so u guys want Angad to find out that Adi is Kripa's baby. I wanted to delay that a bit so Angad and Kripa could have their little fights and arguements. He'll prolly find out about Adi in the next 2 parts.
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plz post the next part i can hold my self plz don't test our patient plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😭

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wow...so cute.....i cna't wait fo rnext part.....post fast....

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PART-18

Mr. Sharma says bye to them and leaves. Angad gets a call and starts talking to somebody. Kripa gets into her car and puts the keys in, it doesn't start. She tries over and over again but it doesn't work. Angad is really enjoying himself now, looking at Kripa getting all worried.

Kripa gets really mad when she sees Angad looking at her.

K: "what r u looking at, and getting so happy about."

Angad just ignores her. She tries to call somebody but doesn't get any service.

Angad sees this and says, "cheap people and even cheaper phones."

Kripa yells at him, "what r u waiting 4, Go home or else ur mom's gonna start worrying, isn't it ur bed time yet"

A: "What do you think, I was waiting 4 u, and why do u have to always bring my mom into everything."

Kripa goes up to him and says, "ur dear mom is the reson 4 ur barbadi, don't u have eyes, can't u c, she always uses u to get money and power."

Angad gets mad and says, "shut the hell up before I make u, You r the one who uses others for fame and money."

K: "U know wat, I'm not even gonna try to make u understand anymore. U'r such a damn looser, and leave. I don't wanna c u infront of me anymore."

A: "It's not like I wanna c ur ugly face anyway."

He jumps into his car, and drives off.

Kripa is left alone, stranded infront of an empty company, and emptier parking lot. She goes in her car and tries to start it again. It doesn't work. She gets relly scared now, coz its dark outside and she's alone. She thinks I should start walking, maybe I can get a lift from somebody. So she starts walking on the road.

Angad is driving and realizes that he left Kripa all alone at night. First he thinks, I don't give a damn about her. But he thinks wat if she is in some kind of a trouble, so he turns his car around and drives back hella fast. He goes there and sees that Kripa isn't there. He gets even more worried. He look around, and yells "KRIPAAAAAAAAAA" He runs around looking for her, when he finally sees her, she's walking back towards the car.

K: "why r u yelling, I'm still alive u know."

A: "oh, I just.., where did u go"

K: "I thought of walking, but after a while my feet started hurting coz of these stupid heels, so I just came back. Anyway wat r u doing here."

A: "oh nothing, Don't think that I came back 4 u, I just left my ummm key chain in the office so I thought I should go check maybe the office is still open. "

K: "oh, well its closed, u can leave now"

He's says, "I know, I'm leaving."

He drives off again, Leaving Kripa, who's really frustrated now, she thinks, Kripa ur so stupid why couldn't u have just asked him for a ride, now stay here, starve to death." Then she sees angad's car coming back again. She thinks that he came for her, but he comes and says, "Hey do u know a good restaurant around here, coz I'm starving and it's gonna be a two hour drive back home, and I really don't wanna starve." He smiles wickedly.

Kripa just says, "no" very sharply. He drives off again. Comes back again, opens the door and says, "Get ur ass in here, before I changes my mind" Kripa's heart jumps wid joy, but her ego comes in the way, "I don't need ur help."

A: "Mujhe koi shonk nahi hai, U know that I hate u. But I wouldn't even leave a dog lying on the street and ur still human."

K: "shut the hell up."

He grabs her by the arm, and forces in the car.

A: "now sit ur ass down, and don't say a single word."

They drive off. The song woh lamhe from the movie Zeher is playing.

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

Na main jaanoun,

Na tu jaane,

(aaah)

Kaisa hai ye mausam,

Koi na jaane,

Kahi se hai fizaa aayi,

Ghamon ki dhoop sang laayi,

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

(hoooo...)

Saagar ki,

Gehraayi se,

Gehra hai,

Apna pyaar,

Sehraoun ki,

In hawaon me,

Kaise aayeee-gi bahaar,

Kahan se ye hawa aayi,

Ghataayen kaali kyoun chhaayi,

Khafaa hogaye hum,

Judaa hogaye hum,

Wo Lamhe, wo baatein,

Koi na jaane,

Thi kaisi raatein,

Hooo, barsaatein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein,

Wo bheegi bheegi yaadein...

They're both remembring their old days. Kripa tries really hard to control her tears.

They drive for about 15 min. and then Kripa's cell rings, she says, "Oh now its gona work."

She answers it and its Adi, Angad is listening to the conversation but since he can only hear Kripa he doesn't know who it is.

K: "Hello"

"oh, hi baby."

"I'm missing u too jaan."

Angad feels really jealous.

"Yeah I'm coming na, I'll reach there in about an hour and half."

She smiles "oh really"

"bye, baby I love u 2"

Angad is driving really fast now, and says, "Who was that ur new shikaar, wat is he, an actor, or a singer. Who r u planning to destroy now, Who's emotions r u playing with now." (he's taking all his hatred out on her)

K: "shut up Angad."

A: "ofcourse, truth always hurts."

K: "U really wanna knoe the truth, then listen, I was talking to my son, The son whome u refused to accept, and what is this nonsense that ur always going on about, ha I'm not the one who plays with people's emotions. It's u."

A: "shut up, he's not my son. And I hate that b****, whom u call ur son."

Kripa syells at him and says, "Stop the car, I said stop the damn car."

She gets out, while Angad is right behind her.

A: "I hate that kid who destroyed my life. I hope he dies."

Kripa turns around slaps Angad hard across his face, she has tears running doen her eyes.

K: "Say whatever u wanna say to me, but don't u dare say anything about my son, and u know what actually he's not ur son. I'm the one who gave my life and soul trying to raise him, wat did u do nothing"

She grabs him by the collar and says, "Don't ever say anything about my son, I swear I will kill u." She is shaking Angad, and Angad is shocked to see Kripa loosing control like this.------------------------------------------------------- -------------------------------------------------------- Tadam Tadam Tadam

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Have a nice day. Lots of Love from Raman.😊

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Posted: 20 years ago
amazing yaar 👏raman. I am loving it. I love you so much for continuing the story.
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Posted: 20 years ago
kya yaar.....why do u always leave it at the most interesting point.....pls continue......if possible pls continue TODAY.....pls......i'll go crazy trying to imagine angad's reaction......pls....pls continue.......gr8 work.....absolutely terrific
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Posted: 20 years ago
this story is getting better and better, please continue👏

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