ASYA(KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 6

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful is all i can say Swapno.

I was in love with this story and will be missing it so much. The epilogue was amazing.

The last para was the best where you made it so clear that they live in a real world and the song took me back to the golden days of QH which cannot be replaced with anything else EVER..

Thanks for such a beautiful ending. 🤗

Thank you so much 😊

Really happy to know that you loved it this much

awww...that is the best complement I ever get dear...

I loved the song...

and golden days of QH , SIGH...still I miss that...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--
Wow this was super duper cute !
Loved the way you ended it (:
it looked soo real and beautiful !
it was a great story will remember it :D

Thank you so much 😊

really glad that you loved it 😃

Aww...then please Remember me...😳

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ...adin...
Beautiful ending
i love it
that twin surprise ws very cute
specially last few lines reminds me DMG

Does that mean they live happily ever after? No, they live a real world life not an imaginary story life.
They fought, they got hurt, they cried but with these they respected, healed and loved each other. They protected each other, when almighty given them to live a real life they accepted that. They did not denied anything love or sorrow in there way of living.

Ridhima also said something like this

write some thing new too
n pm me

Thank you so much 😊

Glad that you loved it

I am happy to surprise you

I did not watch DMG

So can't tell about it...

I will try to write something soon...and PM you...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
Both comments updated on pg 1

Seen...😉

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ap3h7u
Amazing epilogue...loved it to bits😳...do write more😃

Thank you so much 😊

Will try to write...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: p_s05
AsYa's babies, this was soo beautiful!

Great work! 👏 👏 👏

Thank you so much 😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Mvinfff
Awesome story🥳

Thank you so much 😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: AMMY12
awsm update.
Super cute one.
Plz plz plz do write more.
Plz.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Waiting 4 ur nxt story.
T.c.

Thank you so much 😳

I will try to write...😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
beautiful epilogue... loved it

Thank you so much 😳

Glad that you loved it 😊

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: BeYourself
Congrats for the new thread...🥳

i am going to miss this story and everything else related to it

the morning scene was superb!!!! i enjoyed it a lot!!!

i loved it how asad surprised zoya even before she could surprise him 😳

such a beautiful love filled journey it was 😳

hope to see you back with a new story soon 😉

and congrats dear!!! for the thing that you had mentioned in my thread!! i am so so so happy for you 😃🤗