Moments : KriYaansh One Shot Series OS- 5 pg-25 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice teaser...50+ likes...👍🏼
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey 50+ likes...

now plsss update...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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soo cute os
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Update it fast please...
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Itne awesome teaser ke baad update ke liye wait nahi ho raha...
Jaldi update karo plz...
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dii ye aapka res karne ka style hai??
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I swear deetha iska update nai mila na toh maar dalungi
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He shifted from one leg to other excited. And the sole reason for his excitement is standing beside him choosing ice-creams for both of them. How happy he is. He never thought he would face this day one day. But here he is , with him proudly saying her as his girl-friend and a life partner too. He faced many things in life, he came long way and it's the end !! He faced relationships and break ups too, and this time he was too keen before making a relation with Kriya. And he knows, neither of them had the courage to part away again. He saw at her biting her lips and torturing the poor supplier asking him to show this and that. Her these qualities will never change and he loved her more for that.
She handed him his ice-cream and was about to open the wrap of her ice -cream when he stopped her.

Buying two more he dragged her to the car.

"Kriya yaha nahi !! Chalo mere saath !! " and with that he drove to that place where they shared their new-year together for the first time.

"Rey hum yaha kyun aaye hai?? " she asked not liking the place. However bright the sun may be but it is a fact that it's a Jungle and she is scared of them.

" Kyunki yaha koi nahi aata " said pulling the car in the shade of a tree and came out and climbed upon the bonnet and signaled her to take the place beside him!!.

" iss dress mei kaise chadungi?? kahi atak gayi toh? " she made a face making him giggle. He in a blink of eye slid down and lifted her by waist placing her on the bonnet. He adjusted himself and her in his arms perfectly and started enjoying his ice-cream . It's awesome feeling enjoying life with your partner in your arms. He started speaking but Kriya was long lost in thoughts. Rey too engrossed in his lovey dovey talks failed to notice that and on seeing her ice-cream he quickly took a bite from when she had eaten.

"It's yummy !! " he teased and looked at her but frowned immediately. She is in deep thought that he had to shake twice to bring her back to senses.

"Kya soch rahi ho baatcutter? Itni chup?? " he asked , his grin failing to fade. From the time of confession he is grinning like a stupid.


" Kuch nahi!! " she shoved of her thoughts and smiled at him.

" Seriously now? Mai root jaunga batao !! " he pouted when she sighed.

" pata nahi Rey jab se aapke dad ne wo sab bola , bas yahi soch rahi hun ki agar kabhi humare beech mis understandings hui toh "

"jo ki nahi hoga " he interrupted.

" I am serious Rey " she shook her head thinking that he is not understanding what she is saying, making him a bit serious.

" Agar sach mei koi bada jhagda hua toh kya aap... " she trailed of looking at him with hopeful eyes .

" aisa agar hua toh promise me tum mujhe chod ke kabhi nahi jaogi !! " he grabbed her palm between his and looked into her eyes, which are confused now .

"I know , tum expect kar rahi ho ki mai promise karun, but Kriya tum jaanti hona , mai bohut impulsive hun and agar baat tumhari hai , to jo ek second sochta hun wo bhi nahi karta. So tum mujhe chodke nahi jaogi na ?? " he asked so cutely that she grinned wide hugging him tight.

" life shouldn't be perfect Rey , par ab hai " she said her fears out. Somewhere deep inside she still has the fear of loosing him. Her mom's loss made a deep impact that she wondered that even if she tried her best somewhere she will have that fear deep inside.

" Life shouldn't always be perfect. Kabhi kabhi ho sakti hai " he laughed and pulled her close as she giggled.

" Iss moment ki bohut saare dreams dekhe hai kriya maine , to have you in my arms , owning you " he stated , and words came right from his heart, that this time she took the initiative and slowly , nervously moved front and Rey grasping the situation pulled her into a smooth kiss , which he badly wanted to since the time she said her feelings . Placing her head carefully on the glass never breaking the kiss he leaned in caressing her cheeks deepening the kiss making her moan in pleasure. He felt himself hardening. His harmones are loosing their control and before he could do something more he pulled back suddenly and got down confusing her.


"Just because tumhari touch mujhe itna effect karti hai , tum mere saath kuch bhi nahi kar sakti okay? " he said acting innocent making her jaw fall to ground and cheeks burning like hell.

"Rey !! " She tried to get down but due the smooth material of her dress , she slipped as she placed her hand for balance on her dress and slipped directly into his arms which are quick enough to hold her safe from falling.

She is loving it, his touch is giving life to her each cell . She stared at him with all love when he again spoke.

"aise kya dekh rahi ho , mai bohut seedha saadha ladka hun , samjhi " he acted making her punch on his chest. leaving his grip on her legs he hugged her as she placed her foot over his and hugged him tight.

"I love you Rey " she said remembering how he wanted to hear those words last night.

" Aaahhh!! I love how it sounds " he hugged her tight closing his eyes. .

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A random oneshot. What I felt after today's episode.!!

Reviews please !!

-Deetha😊

Edited by -Blind.Dance- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HELLLO
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Kinne SS hai tere bhai shahab

But this one was cutre..

straight from the heart..

adorable..

i loved how you made them voice out their thoughts.. insecurities. and fears and everything..

amazing.. :D


Edited by -Vaish- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note :
Hey fellas, actually I just wanted to say that jo teaser maine page 5 mei diya wo koi one shot ka nahi but ek SS ka hai!! I will post soon but not right away!! Sorry !! 😊

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