Moments : KriYaansh One Shot Series OS- 5 pg-25

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OS 1 - Page 1
OS 2 - Page 11
OS 3 - Page 16
OS 4 - Page 20
OS 5 - Page 25




Now many are ready to kill me !! but sorrryyy!!
And yeah this will be EXTRA SHORT . Don't blame me for that !!😆


" Universe Ji , hum ab kya kare?? wo toh meri taraf dekhta bhi nahi " she stood near the curtain dividing the Huge Hall and the Dinning area, fidgeting with the curtain .

He hummed some random song walking and his eyes twinkled seeing the servant taking a plate full of Laddoos somewhere. May be to serve the guests. And while crossing he silently grabbed a laddoo and immediately filled his mouth with that medium sized sweet. But before he could actually chew and enjoy it's taste he saw that girl. Paagal is what he calls her.

" Curtain ko leg piece samajh rakhi hai kya??? aise kha rahi hai usse?? God she is insane " he resumed his work and walked away laughing at the sight he saw.

Kriya Ghai. He never saw her doing anything NORMAL. If at one time he sees her planting grass instead of the small plant lying aside, the other time he saw her taking some salt in her coffee, and shockingly she drank it without any problem too. He saw her running, shouting, shrieking and what not all , everything about her is so WEIRD .

" Khana khale jaake itna hi bhook lagi toh, parde kyun kha rahi hai ?? " her chaachi bet her on her head while crossing her. The moment she realized that she is literally eating the curtain she flinched back and struggled a bit before standing up erect. And that's when she saw him, no no not him, but his back .

Reyaansh Singhania. The one person she hates the MOST. He is some distant relative of her, so distant that none took the pain of describing her the relation. And the worst part is since 2-3 years her parents and relatives are discussion the topic "How about getting Kriya married to Reyaansh ?? " She never met this Reyaansh before 3 years. It was that unfortunate year , when her sister got married and she had the first glimpse of the Big Fat Ego-ed guy, Reyaansh. The first look he gave her still makes her feel disgusted of herself and her appearance.

"Yeh kamina Ishq bhi "

She cursed and walked away , she hates the things he makes her do. Yeah HE makes her do , as she does all stupid things when lost in histhoughts.

Marching up the stairs she saw him cornering a girl and flirting with that 3 inched dress and the make up stuffed doll carrying that dress over her . Fuming she marched into her room, oops their room. His sister Sharon and Her room. She walked into the room all fed up with his oh so charming things he do . She stood in front of the mirror throwing a glance at herself.

" Oily hair, 3/4th sleeved salwar-suit, and that dupatta covering the only exposed area of her body, her neck. Why would a guy like Reyaansh who loves mini dresses will even glance a look at her. She wears no make up. f**k that make up she doesn't even apply the talcum powder properly. The only make up she does is applying kaajal to those big round eyes. And who on earth loves those big round eyes?? Sighing she looked down.

" Why on earth will he like me ? " she said out loud dissapointed bringing a smirk on that face whose forehead is touching the window bar and his eyes scanning her. He laughed silently seeing her face when she grabbed Sharon's one of the dresses . Kriya is highly educated but thanks to her parents she is highly traditional too. And this shy girl doesn't even agree to wear the least of jeans even if her parents let her to . He waited with anxiety on seeing her walk into the washroom and the important part being carrying Sharon's dress along. After a tyring wait of 20 minutes he saw her walk out pulling the edges of dress down, and next he forgot what . She looked so beautiful. She has a body to die for. And he could feel the adrenaline rush already. How would it be to take her in arms and make love to her. That single thought charged him up and without waiting a second he walked in. Atleast he will let her know what he wants.

She adjusted her dress once again .

"Itne chote kapde kaise pehante hai bhagwaan " she lookd up all tensed.

" Agar pasand nahi toh uthaar bhi sakti ho !! I have no problem " she jumped listening his voice from her back. She was about to run for her life to grab a bedsheet and cover herself from the head to toe but the two arms trapping her between him and the mirror didn't let her to . She shivered with fear , she is just uncomfortable to stand in this dress before anyone. And him being that anyone makes it even more difficult. She is lost in her thoughts ignoring the fact that he is dangerously close to her and her back almost grinding into his front. the moment his breathe fell on her cheeks she came back to earth. Her eyes going wide, her body shivering, her hands working on increasing the length of dress. God how he wants her badly now. Sighing he leaned more kissing her lips in the mirror. He smirked moving slightly back and looked at her through the mirror. That horror stricken face. How he loves that. He gave thatDie-for smile and turned to her and leaned in focusing her lips making her go all crazy with nervousness. He frowned seeing her trying to say something but all she did was move those pink strawberry little lips oh so seductively.

" M..M...MAAA " she shrieked and ran out grabbing the towel lying on the bed , to her mom's room. He sighed long and shook his head.

" Paagal!! Ab toh haan kardo " he walked away remembering what happened just now.

It's been a year he gave his approval but had strictly asked to not reveal it until she say's a YES. Because She is that girl whom he wants for life, and that too with her whole heart. No adjustments in that.


Shit!! Bull shit!! Crap!! Yuck!! I am supplying some words for you people if you are confused on what to use 😛 Feel free to scold!!😆

But reviews please? And Reviews means.. what you felt reading the OS.

I will try my best to give oneshots without head and tail. Tried for this one but failed miserably.

Love ya people. Please I expect a good support. Ghar pe hoke update karna is not that easy for me. Please comments mei conjusi na karna please!!

And yeah sorry for typos. I am not reading it again!!

-Deetha😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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YAYYY! I'm first 😆 Chalega extra short, likha toh sahi xD

First an foremost, I love the concept baba. <3 It's so sweet with Kria wanting to impress Rey and Singhania is already impressed. 😆 Shaks in hot kapde and Rey kissing her Maasi, kya karte ho aap. 😳 But the fight uske pehle was also very cute <3 I can imagine her adorable expression and confused wale be. Cho cute. <3 Loved it bhaiii/maasi/mausa 🤣
My favorite line was "Yeh Kamina Ishq Bhi' 😆
Edited by ARandKJFan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Are you effin' crazy girl?!

You call this... This... bullshit? God forbid you.

This was flawless, in simple words. I just loved the way you described everything!

Please, write more like these. I love it.

PS: I'm reading this again and again. I think even you should read it once more, you'll fall in love with it.
Edited by FrozenTeardrops - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was amazingly written..
Dont u dare to say it a crap.. otherwise i ll use some chappal n dande for sure..

Perfect Simple Lovey dovey story..!!
Shy kriya.. with oily hairs n salvar suit.. i can imagine dat... 😊
N dose stupid act.. gawwdd.. i too feel embarrassed for her... rey ke samne dimag karna band kar deta h 😛
N ohhh my rey... 😳
I loved d scene when he kissed dat mirror... 😳
He's waiting for a yesss.. awaiii... ❤️
perfect end..
Loved it deee... waiting for some more work...
Edited by jyoti_arsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so cute, innocent, and total KR type. <3
But it was short. Jaaan!! :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok ye kya tha...???

plz care to explain... ye tha kya... :/

but...hahaha...ji bhi tha..bht he simple sa..cute sa tha.. 😉

ekdum old Kriyaansh jaisa feel aaya isse padhke...

Kriya likes him...but not ready to accept...and Rey trying his level best to make her confess..

all this was sooo..aawww types... 😳

loved it buddhu... 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Cute And Innicent One.

Amazingly written.

Loved the way you potrayed everything, especially that Salt waali Coffee 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hayyyeee !
This reminded me of scene before shivam party sp !
Chhhooo cute !
I no u will say no but can I have a second part to this PLEEEAAASSSEEE _/\_
Loveddd it ! :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That as so cute...
and awesome..

nothing big or anything...
awesome.. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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god this was so cute dii..

aww that cute shy Kriya she must be looking so cute i really imagined it..

she tring to impress Rey nd idhar Rey already impressed hai..

haye i so loved the concept dii

this is freaking cute and beautiful OS

just loved it to all its bits..

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