The Way It Should Be || A TaaRey Fiction - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
loved the concept
new story
always really wanted that their should be really some one who will love taani unconditionally
i will wait for this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
omg awesome concept
sharon's possessive bro
and falls for taani and also rey's best friend
too interesting yr pls update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
awesome concept
but first of all
i really liked it's title
sharon's brother in love with taani at first sight
nd he's rey best friend too
eagerly waiting for 1st chapter
pls continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
hey thats interesting
Eager to see a love triangle
Rey ko akkal toh aayegi thodi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Love triangle!! Wow!!
Amazing :)
Continue soon :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
superb...concept..plz update chapter 1 soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Wow :)
Seriously great concept :)
I always wanted to read something like this :)
Banner is awesome Sunshine :)
Start soon :)
Cant wait :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
CHAPTER ONE

A guy entered inside the college premises, All the eyes were on him, Girls were shamelessly drooling over him, and boys were burning in jealousy.

"New student, he is so hot"

"I know"

two girls were whispering seeing new boy in college.

"We dont think anything is special in him" A boy said who was standing with girls, Girls give him are you serious look and left from there.

Ignoring all the looks new boy ask the direction of rehearsal hall and goes their, He is abhimanyu rai prakash (You can imagine varun from BFF)

In Rehearsal hall

D3 gang was practicing.

"Sharon" He exclaim from R.H gate, HSe turn, A big smile was there on her face, she immediately run toward him and flung her arms around him, hugging him tightly.

"Bhai i missed you so much, am so happy you came here" hearing her words the jealousy look on swayum's face turn into sweet smiley face.

"Bro welcome to St.loius" Rey said, abhi n sharon broke the hug and abhi pulled rey in brotherly hug

One by all introduce themselves.

"Bhai i still cant believe now you are going to stay with me" Sharon said, all smile at her

D3 gang and abhimanyu were chit chatting, Abhi get very comfortable with Gang as he knows most of them (Dazzlers).

"Bhai, bhai" taani came there runnigly, all look at her but one person was lost.

abhi look at her, her waist long hair flying in air, her innocent angelic face, He was mesmerized by the beauty in front of him.

"Ha taani, kya hua?" swayum asked her.

"Bhai aaj mere friend ki engagement hai, aap mere saath chaloge please" She made a cute puppy face to melt her brother, gang smiled at her cuteness but two person were lost in her. and they were Rey and abhi.

"She is such a cutiepie" abhi thought smilingly.

"Taani ke krishna ji, thank you so much for giving me such a innocent n pure heart girl" Rey thought, He was staring at her lovingly.

"Sorry taani i cant go, meri rehearsals hai" swayum said, her face immediately fell.

"Its okay" How much she wanted to go there but..

"Arre aap itna dukhi kyu ho rahi hai, aap akele bhi toh jaa sakti hai" abhi said as he didnt like the sad look on her face.

"I cant go there alone, venue bahut door hai *pause* wese aap kon hai?" taani was surprise to see a new person.

"hi, am abhimanyu, sharon's brother and st.loius new student" He introduce himself, he held out his hand for hand shake.

"Hi am taani" Both shook their hands, abhimanyu felt that he got his princess, He was feeling very different, her touch send shiver down in his body.

"abhmanyu, abhimanyu" Taani called out his name, he was lost in his thought and still holding her hand.

abhi : "H, ha kya hua"

taani : "mere haath"

She pointed toward their hands, he left her hand. Rey found it weired but shrug away his thought thinking that he is over thinking.

Taani : Rey hume VP sir ne bulaya hai.

rey nodded and they both left from there. Taani was sad from inside that nobody is there for her.

Taani " Rey aap chaloge mere saath, aapki toh reheasal bhi nahi hai"

Taani ask him hoping that he give a positive reply.

rey: " sorry taani mujhe dad se milne jaana hai"

He gave her a apologetic look. taani gives a nod in assurance. they both entered in VP's cabin.

VP : oh thank god you both come, i was waiting for you both.

Taani : Yes sir, aapko kisi event ke baare mein baat karni thi, kaunsa event.

VP sir smile at her.

VP : Our college is organizing a charity event like last year but this year it going to be more big. and i am giving you both all the responsibilities of the event.

Taani and Rey nodded, they took more info from VP and leaves from there. Both were walking in corridor when rey pulled taani inside the Fire escape with him.

Taani : rey aap kya kar rahe ho?

Rey : Taani please yeh saddy saddy face tum par bilkul suit nahi karta, i promise i will take you there tonight but please smile for me.

taani smile at his care and love.

Taani : its okay rey, aap apne dad se milne jaa rahe haithats final, aap apne dad se kitne dino baad mil rahe honge, mom dad comes first before anything else. mera kya hai mein toh apni friend se baad mein bhi mil lungi

Taani said, Rey felt proud of her, she is such a beautiful soul, perfect for him, sometimes he think that does he even deserve her. she always understand him, put other before herself.

Rey " taani can i kiss you?

He asked with most cutest face, she was blushing badly, her cheeks were as red as cherry, she smiled a little. Taking it as a approval, he leaned forward, their eyes were close, ready to share their first kiss, he filled the gap between them by placing his lips on her, he kissed her softly, taani was nervous and excited at the same time, Her first kiss that too with her prince charming. He ask her for entry by nibbling her lower lip, she parted her lips unconsciously, he slide his tongue inside her mouth, taani too responded, They kissed each other passionately but when they felt short of breath they broke the kiss.

Rey : Are you okay?

Rey ask her in concerned tone, taani nodded and hug him hiding her blushing face in his manly chest. Rey smiled at his cute Girl friend and hug her back.

Just then her mobile ring it was swayum's call. Swayum asked her to come in canteen with rey, they both left for canteen, Rey was cursing swayum under his breath, after so long he was spending time with taani and he disturb their moment.

PRECAP : Abhi and Taani friendship.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awesome updt
loved the chapter
liked abhimanya entry
nd his nd taani meet
liked taarey part
their fist kiss
swayum ruined their moment
liked the precap
eagerly waiting for nxt
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
lovelyyy start...
hai full taareylicious...mere taarey ko kisiki nazar na lage...
abhi's entry was superb...
he is full lattu on taani...
taani is so understanding...
love taarey's first kiss...☺️

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