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Posted: 11 years ago
this was freaking awesome...!!
w8ng for next..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Deepthi... i did not like todays update at all... konchem kooda.. assalu baledu...



kaanii...




kotta aavakaaya, neyyi . muddapappu kalipi annam tinte ela vuntundoo oohinchukoo...😃 antha BRAHMANANGA Vundii...😆😆


The first part.. of todays update was Fantabulous.. i was eagerly waiting for this conversation to take place.. At the beginning the Arnav's care towards Kushi was mind-blowing.. His Patience, control over emotions, the way he maintains his cool when comes to Kushi abbbaaa... i love this character so much...
The way you have created Arnav's Personality, I have never ever experienced such person in any fictions i have read so far... hats off..Ur flavor of ARSHI is unique and its so alive... the feelings you are generating in the character are so real wch takes place is every person's life at some time or other.

The way you have put forward todays argument between them i could visualize them... close to real .

Very touching lines of todays epi.. No woman, what you are doing is, proclaiming to a husband that his wife is an escort entertaining other men...(when Arnav says this, i could totally understand what he was going through ..Deeps very beautifully you have planted Arnavs emotions) i love this Arnav more than the Real story yaar... send him here ..😆

DONT YOU EVER DARE TOUCH ME THERE? Do you hear me, I forbid you today from touching my lips..EVER.( so strong warning😡.. but dekhenge for how long...😉😆)

Coming to Kushi.. i like her character from beginning and today she was our normal kushi riling Arnav😉 more with pregnancy mood swings..😆

Part 2 was also good bridging the gap between the siblings.. and aim always impressed with Amans character..

Deeps.. i wanna strangle Adis😡 neck.. give me that chance..

over all... great update... yeh dil manage more...






Edited by abhinavasen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovebarun...

By all chance my husband may take the next flight and come to you and beg you to stop writing because, i am driving him up the wall with TVK. He is literally sacred of me for the last 15 days as i am only discussing about this epic story in the house.. my kids.. o k they escape by going out to play, but my husband.. khaas, i wish people like arnav really exists because if you have a person with arnav's characters then you don't need anything else. this note is a salute to the man who has been your inspiration in writing and shaping this character..HATS OF TO HIM!!!!


😆 my hubby being doctor... said he will give me Anti-Arnav injection... but he cannot find that in any apothek😆😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhinavasen


😆 my hubby being doctor... said he will give me Anti-Arnav injection... but he cannot find that in any apothek😆😃


You guys need to spare your husbands by not dicussing the storyyy..I should tell my husband how lucky he is as I dont discuss the story with himmm because he will come up with crazy horror and science fiction plots...Most unromantic...HUhh...Sigh!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


You guys need to spare your husbands by not dicussing the storyyy..I should tell my husband how lucky he is as I dont discuss the story with himmm because he will come up with crazy horror and science fiction plots...Most unromantic...HUhh...Sigh!!!!!!

UFFF... Devuda... i am spared as i am not married😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

Should i start my clock😕


NO DONT..as I am not updating for next 48hours 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiya


NO DONT..as I am not updating for next 48hours 🤣

then i ll unres tomo and then start the clock... woh kya hai... my stomach is tiking for a long time😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

then i ll unres tomo and then start the clock... woh kya hai... my stomach is tiking for a long time😆




LOL PAAGAL
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Posted: 11 years ago
That i am.. after all its u have made me such 🤪
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Posted: 11 years ago
never in my life i felt this violent to a character... i wish i could kill that insect called Adarsh Singh Raizada... he is too disgusting even to be mentioned... how dare he plan something like this... after everything he has done, wasnt it enough... hasnt his that so-called-revenge yet completed... he video-taped it and now he decided to send it to Khushi... Oh God, 6 months from now she will be in her final stage of pregnancy... i just hope usse aur baby ko kuch ho naa jaye...

wonderful update once again di... with every update u just reach another new level in this emotional roller-coaster... every single emotion of every single person here is palpable... we can literally feel them di... you are brilliant...

every day while reading the update i wonder if i can respect & love Arnav more than this ever... but with the next update you make me fall a little more for him, respect him a little more...

today, throughout the confrontation, i was thinking what any other, ANY OTHER man would do if his wife whom she love more than his life declared herself 'an escort'... definitely not the way HE has reacted... never once he think of what she was saying let alone believing, coz he knows her this much... all we can see is his concern, his care, his love for her...

and Khushi, cant tell you how much i am pround of this woman... her every words show how strong she is as a person...

when she said she is there with him for their child, because she doesnt want another Arnav or Khushi... she is really a mature-strong-headed person... we usually stops thinking about future while grueling in past & present worries... but Khushi, she is trying to provide a better life to her unborn child, thinking about his/her future overlooking her ego & the mess in her life...

when she almost confessed that she belong to him... and his pleading to here those words from her mouth... so touching Di... and loved Arnav's thoughts... about 'heart being virgin'... WOW...

today Arnav doesnt have any answer to her questions... dont know if he can anwer then even if/when he would have... but his promise today, to her & may be to himself too making us believe he will set everything right once again, all perfect like before...


Arnav-Anjali-Aman meeting was brilliantly written Di... and the result of it is fruitful enough... Arnav-Anjali relationship cant possibly be like dotting siblings in one meeting... they will be alright with time... it will take time to fill the gap of these many years... and eventually i will...

and now Arnav knows the prime suspect and he is in right track... and hopefully he will find out every single truth soon enough... the end of that jerk is coming... once again lemme remind you Di, I want that Adi to die the worst death...

waiting for next part already... thanks for the pm...

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