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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 2B

I came into my room to find Arpita on her bed.She looked like she was going some where.
"sanyukta,where were you?You know Randhir right.Last night he thrashed 4 seniors for ragging a girl though he didn't reveal the girl's identity",she said excited with the new gossip."oh is it.Now what? Randhir will be punished by the authorities.How did u know this anyway?" I pestered.
"punished?for what?for beating up d morons who tried to rag a girl.The authorities don't know about this.This is a college baby,word travels around fast." she giggled.Arpita looks beautiful I noticed.Suddenly I had this weird urge of inquiring about her relation with Randhir but I suppressed it and asked her about Kaustuki."I am here Sanyu" Kaustuki peeped from the wash room."oops I forgot to tell you.Get dressed we are going shopping today." Arpita said excited as if she hasn't shopped all her life.
"Shopping?all of a sudden?why?" I asked earning a "are you crazy" look from Arpita."offo sanyukta,I should get some cosmetics and nail polish.I don't have the exact colour of my dress I would be wearing tomorrow.Now move your ass" she stood up and nudged me.Nail polish huh.Her words sent me back to my childhood.
"mom,why do you keep trimming my nails.I don't wanna trim them.I want long nails so that I could paint them" I shouted at my mom.She just looked at me calmly as if i have gone mad and spoke with a smile,"Sona,you are just 12.I don't want you trying these cosmetics stuff.So listen to me."With that all my anger eluded me just like a Jeanie out of the bottle.She always does that.Wait till I complete my blabbering then telling me what I should do as if I never spoke a word about my problem."okay,who wants to go shopping with me" she winked.I blushed hard and ran into my room to get dressed...
"Sanyukta..." Kaustuki came running to me like a lost child."where have you been.Get dressed quickly we should leave" she said pulling some clothes out of my suitcase."umn guys.I m not really interested.I ll just stay in d room today" I blurted out which made them turn towards me at once."Doing what?day dreaming?" Arpita joked to which I rolled my eyes."Sanyu,don't be silly.Once the college starts there wouldn't be a minute for us to step outside.So we better use this quality time" Kaustuki pleaded with her large watery eyes.I couldn't say "no" now.So I quickly dressed up and we headed towards the main entrance of the university.I looked sideways where a lot of students were laughing,playing,talking.How could they be so normal...
."Hello girls.." a voice called out.I turned my head and found him with another guy with a big goofy smile on his face.Ew I thought."Karan,Randhir" Arpita turned Randhir to Karan with a questioning look."where are you going?" Karan asked."no where you are interested in" Arpita retorted."Randhir,When is Parth coming?I am sure she won't be such a mean bitch if she sees him" Karan winked.Randhir laughed while Arpita hit him jovially."Alright we are going shopping." she declared."well,if this beautiful friend of yours also needs to get a dress.I am ready to help select one" he said taking Kaustuki's hand.Kaustuki giggled."Stop being a flirt,Karan.If you wanna come,you can." she offered."Really?I don't wanna miss this" said Randhir eyeing me.I just turned away not wanting to make an eye contact with him.What is he upto?...

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Kaustuki was trying on some clothes while Arpita was taking snaps of her so that they could figure out d best in the end."The black looks great on you,Kaustuki" suggested Karan.Kaustuki laughed out loud.Karan looked at her confused."I hate black." Kaustuki managed to say while laughing.Karan's face fell and he turned around to not interfere.Just then his phone beeped and he took it out.He stared at d screen for 2 mins and then laughed.Arpita looked at him like a zombie.Karan looked up at us,"what?do i have no right to laugh?I shouldn't have come", he said glaring at Randhir.So thats why he is here.Randhir asked him to."Anyways listen,freshers party is being held on saturday and the dress code for girls is blue,for boys is white", he announced looking into his phone."what?blue? but i picked a green dress for myself", Kaustuki said disappointed."what? you picked the dress already", Randhir joked."what about you Sanyukta and Arpita?" she asked."Well I have a blue dress,u sanyukta?" Arpita turned to me.I felt Randhir's eyes on me,of course he has been staring at me for the past one hour."I don't have a dress.I am not interested to get any." I said much to every one's shock."Its okay.As you wish Sanyu.I think I should buy one now", Kaustuki was worried."Don't worry,we will get u d best" Arpita cheered her."which means we are not done yet?" Karan cried out.Arpita covered his mouth and warned him.I wanted to go some where else calm and quiet.So I told them I will check out the other stores in the mall and came out.I walked into a jewellery store where a woman started prying me about what I want.To stop her I told her I want a chain which goes with my blue outfit.Thank god,she stopped talking and starting searching some boxes.Some one tapped my shoulder and I turned around to find Randhir."You are quite different Sanyukta" he grinned."I did tell you to stay away from me,didn't I." I said more like a statement than a question."don't u think you are being hard on me", he made a puppy dog face.I couldn't help but giggle at the way he curved his lips."Yeah,that suits you better" he winked.I stopped giggling and turned away."come on Sanyukta,a part of you is happy that I kicked their ass", he said as if it was obvious."no" I argued."fine you are not" he smiled and turned to the lady who appeared again with two platinum chains.Oops she is back.I need to get out of here."choose one dear,both of them look great on you" she said expectantly.I looked at the two chains.One chain had a star shaped diamond and the other has a ruby covered with diamonds.I chose the latter while Randhir laughed at my choice.I turned to him shooting daggers."you don't like it Sanyukta" he said surprising me."It doesn't matter anyway", I asked the lady to pack it."It does,I mean you should like it right" he fumbled as if he was unable to find the right word to explain it to me."It doesn't matter anyways.Who cares if this stupid piece of metal looks good on me or if I look good in a nice outfit huh?" I flipped and walked away paying the woman before he could say anything.

Thank you for reading.Plz leave ur reviews which helps me improve.😳
Love,
Harita❤️
Edited by Harita1309 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
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Harita!!!
This was sooo GOOD!
Why is Sanyu behaving rudely with Randhir???😕
He is so GOOD
He beat those seniors Loved it😳😳😳
Sanyu kyu shopping nahi kar rahi
She bought a platinum chain and not a dress😲
WHY???
Harita I am thodu confused on this!
Are Arpita,Randhir and Karan childhood friends????
But in all a very good update

UPDATE SOON

-In Hope Of Loads Of Updates😉
and Love
-Prachi😊

Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
res!

-Edited-

Dediction for me? I wub yuh! *wipes tear*

This was so good.. so the family is killed leaving Sanyu sad and depressed?

Why is she being so hard on him? I would have hugged a guy like him, lol!

I love this FF, specially Randhir's character!

Update soon!!

Loads of LoVe ❤️
Edited by BeLi3Ve - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Res
Unressed..

Harita di...🤗
This update was really awesome..👏
Randhir's character is too good... He cares 4 sanyu😃
Sanyu behaviour towars Randhir...😲 Hope it will change soon...😃
Very very well written di...👏
The beginning quote was very nice... loved it very much..😊
Update soon... 😉
Thanks 4 d pm!!😊 Nd keep writing..😃
Waiting 4 d nxt update!!!😊

With love ❤️
Karthika
Edited by DEVU46 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Offo!
What a maze!
It took me 10 minutes to reach my comment 😛😆

Comming to the story !
🤗
U nailed it !
👏

I really like this soft hearted randhir,, for a change!
And this arrogant sanyukta!😡

But randhir ne seniors KO Mara !😲😆
Yeeyeye!

But this sanyu!😕
Again ,,.. Sudhar ja!!

But the plot is intriguing and capable of hooking you to it,...

Update very soon and dare you forget to pm me !
😆

Love,
Preeti!😳
Edited by Preetika-Sinha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
The character of Sanyukta is pretty confusing to me. One side she seems a scary girl but then she had guts to fight four senior guys, who were troubling her in the name of ragging. Similarly she was happy that Randhir helped her and beat those guys but then she was rude to him.. there is something which is bothering her inside.. but whats that.. I would like to explore and for that you have to write more plss do write more asap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
hey harita...
it was jst awsome...
i loved it...
keep writing more...
update nxt part asap...
thnx for pm...
do cont soonish...
wid love
dhruvi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Mind blowing loved it interesting story and upload next soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
first part really amazing
sanyukta is in a truma
wht happen with her
randhir talk nice with her
tht unbelivable😉
loved it
cont soon
thnx fr p
sorry fr late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
part2
awsom
sanyukta beat the senoirs
she lost her family in accident
randhir also beat them
love thier shopping moments
cont soon
thnx fr pm

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