SanDhir FF : ~~ Along Came 'She' ~~ *Discontinued. Contd. on wattpad*

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asmamahsud

@asmamahsud

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

wao u r brillliant love it

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Kirti

@kirtiarora111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

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That was one fabulous chapter di. I'm lucky enough to get an opportunity of reading YOUR works di.

Sanyukta's petrified behavior, her panicky, fearfulness was portrayed in such depth.

The way you showed her stammering like a horror-stricken girl was just incredulous.

Randhir's pain and agony on seeing the immortal state of once her girlfriend and one of his closest persons just reached out to my soul. He was deeply hurt to see her lying on the death bed.

At the same time, he was no less concerned for the girl he's falling in love with and could understand well what she had been going through, her mental state after watching a girl getting shot in front of herself. She was the WITNESS of this unfortunate incident and he didn't want her to get into trouble either for him or for any other reason.

He hugged her relieving her from her agonies, her sufferings, her fears for a bit assuring her of his presence by her side, assuring her that she's not ALONE.

I just fell in love with the way you write di...👏👏

So much respect and LOVE for you di..🤗🤗

It's because of the writers like you that I got strength to start my first ever fiction on this forum. Thank you di..!!😛😛

I feel so lucky to have read this great piece of fiction..👏👏

Keep going di..

Love ya...🤗

Edited by kirtiarora111 - 11 years ago

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Irij55

@Irij55

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Posted: 11 years ago

#583

mind blowing loved it update soon

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#584

Anu!!

Gosh girl...can u be nymore prefect wid description den u always were...u never fuking fail to suprise me...!!

Every damn time I stalk this thread... Wondering wad can I comment to make u feel the way your stories make me feel...awestruck...magnificent words tend to surpass my mind when I read and re-read the FF... U noe this is the only Sandhir FF I follow..I donno why...however busy I get...wadeva I do...I can't last widout dropping in the moment i see that u hv PMed me the update!!!

Your such a deserving writer...u hv the capability to become a writer...!! And trust me ul be a damn good one... Coming to this chapter...wad can I say...u have left me speechless once again...see the way u describe the crime scene...

The worried randhir girl I'm ur fan... U killed Ishita...ohmygod..never would I have imagined...why did her death look lyk a sacrifice...I wanted her to suffer...call me ruthless...but u write so well anu...my favorite write ur slowly becoming...!!

And I suggest u try writing in wattpad...books get published yaar der...its so awesome...!!! :P

Regards

Safrena Doss

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remindmeiforgot

@remindmeiforgot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Hey its awsm plz unfold the mystery I cant take it plz

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Have typed from phone...so sry for the shortness!!🤣🤣

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319125

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Posted: 11 years ago

#587

anu i lv d way u manage those slow n important emotions nt leaving a single tear ignored
i still feel bad as ishi left so many unanswerd mysteries
nd parth...kabab mein haddi ab he's gonna act james bond
jeez !
Wondr what happenz next
thnk u fr updating
lv
seerat

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namsmk

@namsmk

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Posted: 11 years ago

#588

What to say..? Brilliant stuff...👏 Love u Anu di... ❤️

U portray emotions so well that I was almost in tears... 😭I sat staring at my laptop screen doing nothing for 5-6 minutes after reading the new chapter... Feeling as if my heart has grown a bit heavier n brain has stopped working.. Fear, love, anger,...all emotions penned down beautifully... Awww... I just loved it di...

U r just awesome... 🤗

I hope Vidushi doesn't see Sanyu in that state...

Ab kya hoga? Will Randhir stay away from Sanyu to protect her? What will Parth do when he finds about Randhir-Sanyukta..? DS is villain?? That book? OMG too much questions in my mind😕...

Please update asap... Please... 😃 N thanks for the pm... 😊

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unisha

@unishaz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#589

interesting.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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Pihu1596

@Pihu1596

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Posted: 11 years ago

#590

OMG!!!!!
That was jst mindblowing!!!!
I mean like seriously it blew me away.
Its 1.36am n I m crying in my bed.
I mean u write sooo beautifully*cries*.
Plzzz update soon,Ik FIFA FEVER is hard to resist bt try*winks*

P.S Ty 4 PM

-Pihu