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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

Originally posted by: Aishwa09
Loved it a lot

Awesome Update

Continue soon !!

thanks 😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian
omg surprise update
i knew it ,zoya will do something to punish them
thanks for the pm

thanks 😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
such a bittersweet story! can't wait for the next part. update soon

thanks for reading 😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
such a bittersweet story! can't wait for the next part. update soon

thanks for reading...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: Love-AsYa-4ever
such a bittersweet story! can't wait for the next part. update soon

thanks for reading 😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: aseelashah
I love these 2 updates yaar
Its amazing dear
Zoya in sherni mode is a treat
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm
Its mind blowing update👏👏

thanks asi Di...
u will get lots of lioness zoya...

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: nilusoni
update soon

writing... 😳

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: anopama
loved the last 2 updates
u r forgiven for taking so long
so zoya is asad angel isnt that amazing
right away he had trust in her and want her with him always
oh humi is a fire dragon loved her and asad scowling each other...evil monster
so dilshad has to make sure the charges stick for rashid and shireen
zoya had started the ball rolling not she have to let them know it was
murder and more
cant wait to see asya in their new home with asad and his angel
continue with these beautiful update

thanks dear...
oh u forgave me...thanks again!!
asya story has started now...wait for some good moments...
😃

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Basanti 🦄

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Posted: 11 years ago

#759

hello shello rabbit
plz plz plz dnt kill me, i knw i m so so so so so late
i read the updates bt whenever i comment , the luck isnt wid me
so fr u here is a long comment i guess!
okay so the begining
wow!
flawaless!
had h !
ye taklu aur uski chuhiya aur uski billi
pura jungle milke bechari chidiya, mera matlab h zoya ko pareshan kar rahe h
i hate this jangli family
poor girl
craved fr love since childhood
cant believe that they were her real parents
chee disgusting
u taklu, chudail n billi, go to jungle , u bttr b there!
afrgh
bt still zoya is so nice
m hoti to , kya karti , parents h !
huh!
no no no i dnt want that jungli ones
i m happy wid mine
they r 2 nahi 3 nahi so good
hehe
okay she was surprised, m bhi hui]
ki jangli;'s insan kese ban gaye
inki akal ghutno m to kya bhagwan ne di hi nahi
so cruel
i was in doubt why asad behaved in such a way
i mean
upar tak nahi dekha n was confused to slide in which finger
i actually gt doubt
n ye shireen n rashid inpe to pehle hi mujhe shak tha
mene even daya se bola to keep nt an eye , bt both the eyes on them
pr problem kya h na he was nt well
toh rakh bhi nahi paya

owh humi n zoya's bond
so cute
adorably written
so well
u r indeed an awesome writer
i knw u knw it bt still bolne me konsa tax lag raha h
owh that letter!
who sent it
later revealed dilshad
\obviouly she tried bt un chidailo no , argh kitni gandi h
gavar , jahil!
i hope u dnt mind me giving abusive words to them
sorry , sho sholly!
ohkay thats wat happened
poor asad
such a poor history
so sad!
poor boy lost his mother n then n then suffered so much
rashid , shireen tumhe to me
ganja karke esa marungi sar p!
kitne gande h!
chee yuk!
dilshad!
angel in disguise
aiyo aiyo aiyo!
usne use mara!
poor zoya
so sad!
n finally truth in front of her
god isnt fair ith her
bt i hope he is ahaed
jangliyo , teri to!
ek kheech ke marungi thapad sari akal, nahi nahi akal toh h hi nahi na!
kher kuch to hoga!
owwie humi's care n love was so nice
i really love her fr this
she has always been a support her
\emeotions were superbly writen
finally they agreed!
oh yes oh yes!
vo bhag gaye!
owh hw sweet
his angel!
so adorable
oops last part read karna baki h
pr srsly story so far has been amazing
superb
fantastic
fabulous
awesome
amazing
wonderful
lovely
brilliant
beautifully written
loved it totally
i knw chota h pr mumma papa sone k liye bula rahe h!
me going nw!
bt i srsly loved it
totally new concept!
loved it
update sooonishesty!
btw i loved the title!
totally suits the story
its flawless
loved it so so so s os o so so so so so much
baki comment kal karungi! :)
n ha how was ur exams?
kal bat karte h
love ur story so much!

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Vaishali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#760

Tu ku pareshan h baby, hum apki jaan hai baby. Aaj hai mauka pakdle kaske ni toh tera nukasan hai baby🤣 jaise tujhe ni pta ki vo proofs zoya ke pas kaise aye vaise hi mjhe bhi nh pta ki yeh gana itne serious update mein kaise aya😆
Nyway coming back to the updates i just loved them
Wah zoya kya kamaal kr dia tune toh.
Nd kya one liner mara shrashtu tune bhagwan ki lathi mein awaan nh hoti.
I loved both the updates.
Nd surpise update oh My God, kitna bda dil h tra shrashtu😆
I just loved asad ki angel nd asad ki evil monster😆
Plz continue soonish nd bht soon. Nd page no. Bhi batio i want tto read ur rply😆
Bye take care love uh. Nd continue soon🤗.