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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Poor Asad... Feeling so bad for him... :(

I hope Zoya and Dilshaad help him out...

Update soon... And please pm me.. :)

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

very well written update..Asad's past was really sad...I hope now Zoya and Dilshad stand by Asad and Rashid, Shireen face their doom...good going...please do update soon...👍🏼

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Awesome + emotional update...👏😔

Just love it...😊

Poor asad and zoya both of them has sufferd alot in their lifes...😔

Waiting egarly to see how asad accept zoya...😊

So update nxt part soon...😃

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Gr8 and too emotional by knowing asad part
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Aww all this was soo sad ,,

I feel bad for Asad more now LoL

lets see how Zoya is gonna help him !

Update sooon (:

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Simply beautiful and heart wrenchingly touching!

Amazing chapter! I absolutely love the bonding between these three ladies!

And I love how you've described Zoya's turmoil.

So real. I was caught up myself!

And I'm so very happy to know that I'm right in saying that Asad is not crazy.

He's just brokenly traumatised!

And it us up to Zoya to help him!

And when you say treat this like a first timer writing...I was like please please. If first time writers write the way you do...I wonder how you'll be when you're all experienced!

Epic writer!

You nailed the emotions part amazingly well!

You're talented girl!

Update soon!

Mwahh

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Awesome update
Asad mother killed in front of his eyes
He had given electric shocks for getting his property
Zoya parents traded her. Asad is not mad but a disorder patient
Zoya is ready to help him after hearing full story
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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khadupam

@khadupam

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Sorry for being late
I didn't thought that u will update so early
It's okay update early only
Finally the asad flashback is out I wanted to know that
Anyways long way to go for asad n zoya
It was awesome n wonderful story update everything
Just keep showering with all ur update stories
It's fun to read
Continue soon

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

superb update starry...
beautifully penned down...
loved it...
asad has such a painful past...
zoyas parents r so cheap...
humaira is a sweet friend...
dilshaad asked for zoyas help to ake asad out of that hell... n she agreed...
curious to kno how the story unfolds...
continue soon...
i want a lioness zoya jo rashid n shireen k hosh uda de...