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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank u so much for this wonderful uppdate
I love it
How is ur hand now?
Is it ok?
Pls update soon
Asad & his story.😆Story mein goldy locks kaha se aa gayi?😆
And the prayer scene was mindblowing
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it Tia⭐️👍🏼
beautifully written👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow a wonderfull update...
wat a fairytale he pick to tell her about hw they meet...
asya are so cute...
beautifully written...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the story tia
great post plz continue soon
and asad's story was 😆😆😆
...waiting for next update😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update tia loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is awesome update
Wow
God the story was rofling
Little red riding hood
🤣
Wolf k badle theif
🤣
N phir usne use bachaya, n phir shadi hogai
🤣
Bt that was awesome
Acha kuch kuch kuch kuch to hto hotahi hoga..
Asad ko..
Subah subah ye stella kaha tapak padi??
Hmm asad is trying to study her..
Mujhe bhi kar h pr mero khudki studies se time nahi milta h..
Lol
Oww i just loved d la part
So innocent
So adorable
Lovely prayer
It was awesome
Its superb
Lovely
Very nice
Loved it
Flawless
Amazing
Beautiful
Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 6




Chapter



"James i cant believe this you told her story on little red ridding hood" stella ccontinued to laugh for another 10 minutes on the story he made zoya believe.
"Ha ha ha- very funny" he chided fuming on the fact that the situation he is in ,is all because of Stella and dilshad.
Stella had given zoya the hand bags which she got for her and now this two foe friends, are waiting out in living room for zoya to come down changing her clothes in to fresh pair that stella brought her.
The door clicks open and both looks up and zoya while she walks down with her hwad to her chin.
She is wearing a cute red top with satin near the end of neck line to tie and a black jeans.
She quietly walked down concious of herself as she felt asad eyes boring in to her skin. She felt embarrassed under his intense gawking.
"She looks so good inthis wear, right na james" stella looked at asad who dreamily nodded his head in yes.
"I am ready" zoya said softly looking at her feet and biting her lips to hide smile which appeared due to blushing.
"You are looking beautiful zoya" stella complemented zoya with a side hug.
"Thanks" she softly replied licking her lips in nervously.
Asad eyes with time flicker from her body to her lips and her lips to her body as she teased her petals innocently with biting or licking it.
"I ...i just get car ready" he said walking straight to the door.
"Come lets us too go" stella took zoya's hand and brought hwr out where asad car was already waiting for them.
"Where are we going?" Stella looked at zoya with a smile ; " we are going to meet dilshad khan,your freind" stella said with a smile and asad chuckled his head in no hiding his eyes behind the glasses he worn.
"Can-" zoya started but trailed off the rest; " what? You can say us, come on; complete it" stella encouraged zoya to speak making asad look at zoya through car mirror.
"Yes tell me wifey" asad helped stella to make zoya talk.
"I was thinking that, can we go to my parents house after meeting dilshad aunty" zoya kept forward her request while fidgeting with her fingers and crossing her legs with an unease.
"Oh we will see if we have any time left" asad made a wierd face looking at zoya through miror. Zoya nodded in yes after pursing her lips tight close.




"Hi james , hey stella, hi my child" dilshad wished asad stella and zoya respectively hugging them with each name calling.
"Salaam Aunty!" zoya wished dilshad with smile ,raising her hand in a cup to her forehead.
"Aunty! " dilshad repeated in shock keeping a hand on her cheat with eyes widen as if soon its goona get pop out.
"Ji!, kya hua? Mera apko aunty kehna acha nahi laga?" Zoya squeezed her eyebrow tight as dilshad expression started to scare her.
"Zoya? Aunty is too old for me dear, call me by my name if you want" dilshad offered zoya a choice with a stupid fake sugar coated voice.
"Ok" zoya whispered with her eyes lock on floor in embarrassment ; " per if not aunty than can i call you phuphi please!" She requested dilshad narrowing her eye to give her face an angelic effect , that no one can deny.
"Ok, if you wish so" dilshad laughed shrugging her shoulder , and nodding her head in yes with unsure look in eyes.
"Ok phuphi and wifey, if you haven't notice, my foot are aching because of standing on foor; show some mercy to me as well" asad interrupted in middle and zoya stell and dilshad looked at him with a glimpse of fun and then with a nod dilshad offered them to comein and occupy places on couch.
"Ok listen zoya, i and stella have to go somewhere, its urgent and cannot be postponed for later, so you" he said pointing an index finger and than rotated around the wall ; " stay here like my good wifey and comfort yourself with your phuphi" he stressed the word phuphi in tease, forcing dilshad to roll her eyes and chuckle on his taunt ; "i will take you home in the evening,till then do not go anywhere till i come. Is that clear?" He tone slowly picked the flavour of command more than instruction and hence with a little fear she had built against him forced her to nod her head in yes quietly without further question.
"Ok thats like my good wife" he made his fist in punch and in slow motion he hit her cheeks playfully,it ddidn't hurt of course.
Zoya watched stella and asad leaving as she stayed back with dilshad in her home.
"Want some snacks?" Dilshad offered and without waiting for reply she left in for kitchen.


"Gasoline?" What is gasoline doing in her clothes?" Asad asked with confuaion raising a hand in air for unbelievable exposure.
"I think asad look at this chart, she is daughter of gaffur siddique but she has name of zeenat farooqui which means obviously they ddidn't love her,"
"We already know that stell, add something fresh for stock please!" Asad chided interrupting stella in between.
"James if you say zoya is being molest and if you are sure than may be she was done in past. In her college may be"
"Stella possibilities are many but than this theory do not match with the wounds we had seen on her right arm. They are old, very old"asad added his two cents.
"What do you mean james? Was she-"
"She is being molest in her childhood."asad completed,looking at point black wirh straight face.
"Damn it ! James!" Stella said in angst and gusts; " you mean to say that the person who had molested her in past and who had tortured her now, are Same!" Stella looked at asad keenly for her answer.
"May be stell, but all i know that now we had to get this guy before we step to another level"
"So what are we in for, phedophile!"stella asked in confusion writing their next clue on the white board underlining it with sketch pen.
"Lets hunt that bas***d!" She concluded with such a rage that could bring earth upside down.
"Yes, let gets him" asad threw a dart and it correctly aimed at the word phedophile'.
Edited by -TIARA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update tia...
asad was lyk tujhe dekha to ye jaana sanam n zoya was so sharmili type...
dilshad bechari now she has to bear this phupi word...
arey yar zoya ka torture to bachpan se start hua hai... feel so bad fr her...
hope everything is sorted out soon...
ps. take cr of uaslf tia
Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhi1206

This is awesome update

Wow
God the story was rofling
Little red riding hood
🤣
Wolf k badle theif
🤣
N phir usne use bachaya, n phir shadi hogai
🤣
Bt that was awesome
Acha kuch kuch kuch kuch to hto hotahi hoga..
Asad ko..
Subah subah ye stella kaha tapak padi??
Hmm asad is trying to study her..
Mujhe bhi kar h pr mero khudki studies se time nahi milta h..
Lol
Oww i just loved d la part
So innocent
So adorable
Lovely prayer
It was awesome
Its superb
Lovely
Very nice
Loved it
Flawless
Amazing
Beautiful
Update soon..

thanks riddhi it make me really happy to know that my story is getting liked by you all 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -SHAIVI-

loved the story tia
great post plz continue soon
and asad's story was 😆😆😆
...waiting for next update😊




thanks shaivi 😳
I am happy you are liking my little book 😆

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