#asyastory- All that matters# chapter 13

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Hi friends,

You all will be wondering , why aren't me posting any updates here.
The reason is yesterday on guest arrival i accidently have choped my nail terribly. Its more than half and thus it hurts me a lot to type.
This story you all will find is written somewhere in past i have stored it in mc office and see finally it came in some use.

So please forgive me for th inconvenience i cause. And please enjoy reading them.i dont know what it is. Its like a story which i have gided in fear you can say. Please dont be too harsh on me after readjng it or i will go all heartbreak.šŸ˜”


Tiara.


The loud noise of footsteps forced the girl to sunk in on floor. The torn clothes , the sweat beads on her forehead and her ruffle hair qere evident on the bad things caused her a while ago. Her skin that oozes blood were yelling for justice and the water in her eyes were praying for mercy kill; just then the door opens and enters few mens and womens in unform. The harsh light on her face made her confirm of many individuals at her place.
"Oh damn. Stylle please come here. We need a doctor. Its emergency." He took a pause after each words giving thise unbelievable expression to the lady on floor.
A women in same black uniform gets down next to the girl on knees and tries to examine her wounds and her cuts.
She touches the girl's face, pushing the hair away from her face.
"Holly shit. James. Call a doctor. Be Quick!."
Thats it! It was the last word the girl had heard before dripping into unconsciousness.



Three hour later...
James: stell did you get any information about this girl.
Stell: no nothing!
She showed her hand in air gesturing nothing in sad form.

James: " then what we gonna do of her , when she wakes up. I am sure she would be in a shock after witnessing those terrible-"

Steyla: not terrible , its inhuman james. Who ever he was he had ripped her in two.

James: is she hurt?

Stella: " by her condition it looks like she is, but waiting for medical report before concluding anything. I just hope against hope , she should not be. She is too young james. How can someone got this heart to do this to her." Stella looks disgust on floor imagining the things the poor girl might have bear there.

James: "she might need emotional help we should call someone for help. Ms dilshad khan is right for this job. What you think?"

James waits for Stella reply. Stella is yoo shock to see wounds of the girl lying there in hospital bed. She blankly nods her head in yes to james as her mind wanders around the time when she had first seen in that factory alone wounded and tied up.

A few minutes later the door to the poor girl rooms opens and doctor comes out with a frown and anger.
James and stella quickly stand by his side inquiring about the girl they had admitted.
"How is she doctor? " stella inquires with concern.
"Its terrible to see how humanity lacks In some sick mind" doctor shakes his head in no as he is too shock to see the damage on her body.
" her body bears number of marks, some are deep like may be somebody had beaten her with pointed prick and some flesh are just torn like a something sharp but zigzag tool was pointed in her and then mercilessly pulled out tearing everything in their way." Doctor looked horrified while giving reason on her injury.

"Doc. Was she. She hurt?" James could no longer hold this question as it was badly disturbing him.
"Thankfully no. She still have her innocence safe." Doctor let out a sigh giving answer to james.

"James, then why would any one torture this girl so badly anf he didn't rape her either. So it means this is not a rape case but-"

"The answer is hidden only with her. We need to track her id first." James looks at stella and she replies with a nod.

"Doctor is there any birthmark on her body for making it easy for us to identify her identity." Stella asks doctor with scrunch brows.

"Yes she has. There is a burn mark all over her right arm." Doctor completes and james and stella both looks at each other in a form of question.

" doctor that might be occured during her torture" stella inquires and doctor nods in no.

"No stell, i have seen those marks and by the look of it one thing is sure this injury has appeared on her skin a long time ago. May be in childhood" doctor explain his investigation and james and Stella both nods in agreement.

"Doc." Stella calls the doctor and she turns with a nod.

"Will she make it? Any hope?" James asked doctor with a tense look.

" to be honest james, she was kept starving for days and have given Every possible torture you have immagined to her., she is a fighter we can say as any other girl in her place would have given up on her life long time back but she did not. Which means she want to live, and as a doctor i will help her to make it. But i dont know how will she be when she wakes up. " doctor nazma sighs sadly as recalling her condition in front of her eyes. She had felt sudden attachment and pain for this patients which was rare to feel for her in her profession, may be because of her condition and age she felt so.nazma silently escaped the place with her head hung on floor.

"James?" Stella calls with a blinking eye.
" yeah" james hums in response with short yes.
"We found her."stella pointed at the her screen on phone. Its a message from her team giving a breif description on her Id.

"Who is she ?" James asks pulling the key to his car out and walking with speedy foot towarda the exit with stella.
"She is an indian. Her name is zoya farooqui" stella says showing zoya pic on copy of xerox on her cell screen.
"Oh great and whats her address?" James asks punching the key of his car's door to open. He enters and leans open the other side door for stella to seat.
"Its 34 block A samchurch cross lane 4." She reads out the adreaa for him , sitting in his car.
"Ok, got it!" And the car drove away.


"James wait, there it is. See!" Stella points at radiator map in his car.
"Yeah right!" He pulls the car in the parking lot.
They both gets down carrying handcuffs if require, gun, and walkie with them. James additionally leans down to pick up his ciggerate pack from dashboard. Stella could not help but roll her eyes on his action.
"What?" He asks confuse.
"Uh..nothing forget it! "Stella replies tiredly, waving her hand in air.

They wait at entrance letting the door open for them to welcome. Normally its a sarcasm to call welcome for cops. People never welcomes them but wish for contrary.

The opens and appears two women to their sight both are having duppata over their head.
"Yes?" The aged women between two inquires.
"Hi, i am stella McGuire, he is Asad khan, FBI" stella shows her id card to the women while asad slaps the id on their face. Stella scofs on his behavior but no worries she had seen his worst cold attitude in public.
"Oh, please come in" the same smarty too shoes women welcomes them in.
"Thankyou" they say together softly.
As they enters they were asks to sit on couch which stella and james both refuses to sit.
" no thank you. " stella plasters a small smile while james/asad don't give a damn.

" madam we would like to talk to everyone in the family. Who all are here. Call them!" Asad said the polite words in the form of command rather request.

"Oh of course." The aged one again says quickly making her way with light feets upstairs.

"You dont speak much or are afraid of our presence" asad asks the other women left behind in living area with them.
She stammers in fear for a while before saying something with stella's motivation.
"I do speak. Thankyou" she blurted out in fear. Asad watched at her with amuse face and scoffs as soon as his eye lands upon stella , who is giving him a mean glare to shut up!

"Oh, please dont mind him. He is a jerk some times." Stella walks upto the girl and give a friendly smile.
"Who are you here?" She inquires with a soft voice trying to not scared her even more
"I am daughter in law of this house. My name is nikhat siddique" she completes setting her already perfectly attached dupoata over her head even more.

"Oh hi mrs siddique, can you help us with something" stela confortably pulls out the pitcher of zoya out with a smile and places it right infront of her.
"Do you know this women, madam?" Stella speaks while asad watches nikhats expressions.

Nikhats eye widen ups in horror and immediately her eyes tears up with a soft gasp.
"Yes i do, she is zoya. Our zoya; daughter of this house" nikhat pulls the pic closer and looks at stella with a scary and worried merge expression.
"Is she alright? What's wrong?" She asked both of them with same worry.

"Well are really sorry to say mrs siddique your sister in law is in hospital now. She is critical" nikhat really gasped in horror and fell on near by couch.
"Zoya, ya allah!"
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"Madam are you all right?" Stella aks nikhat and offers her water to drink which the servant had brought for them.
Nikhat suck air in her and with a distraught gesture requests stela to take her to zoya.
Stella nods in approval and waits while looking at asad with a raise brow.
"We will take you there mam but firt you have to answer us to few questions." Stella waits letting nikat to take in."madam are you ready to co operate?" She adda again and nikhat in dizziness noda her head in yes.

" when was the last time you have spoken with her?" Asad asks sharply taking the tape recorder out , pressing the recorder.

" 6...6 months back" she says silently hardly audible to ears.
"You gotto be louder madam .its official" asad yells making her shiver in fear which she already is scared and inorganized with the news.

"6 months" she speaks little louder than before and stella looks back at asad giving a look which yells 'happy'
Asad nods in yes for approval.

"Why so long , she donot stay with you all? Is that the case?" Stella inquires a little more.
"Yes, she stays with her aunt and cousin in souther part. She is a student of university there. Pursuing arts and painting".

"So that means she is an artistic person. Thats good tell me more about her, how was her realtion with everyone here? Were there any enemies of her here or anywhere, whom you can name for us" she asks again with a pen and paper in hand, jotting out the details and writing up questions she had asked.

"Yes, she love painting especialy natural pitchers, she use to love to potray painting of us. That one on end" nikhat points at the big frame contains pitcher of zoya nikhat gaffur farhaan and razia in it. " she had drawn and gifted us last year on her father's birthday" nikhat smile softly but soon tense of , thinking about zoya.

"She is a good daughtet and sister , infact she excells in every relation as far as i know. She valued relationships a lot; never had i seen her back answering or fighting with anyone after i married her brother and came here to stay" nikhat adds more wiping her tears and nose with end of her duppata.

" and for enemies. How can any one be angry on such a sweet girl like her. She is a ronak of our home. Everybody loved her, evem her freinds too" nikhat completed what she had to say and the recorder was shut waiting for other member to come.

Soon the questions were asked to gaffur, razia, farhaan and servants; finally they both left giving addresa and bed number of zoya's ward.

"No clue"stells sighs in frustration.
"No there is one!" Asad replies with a smirk and confidence.
"And what is it James" stella asks with a scrunching brow while putting up on seatbelt.

" we have to go to her aunt's place; to take out further journey of ms farooqui" he take a puff if the cigarette in his lungs and blew the smoke in air with a smirk.




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[B] well its done. I really dont know what i am gonna do with this story make a three shot or ss or ff. Well forget ff for this i have three already. šŸ˜†

For the rest , you people please tell me what to do with this. Please mention in your comments about your honest views

Thanks 😳



<font size="4">Index</font>


chapter 2



Chapter 3


chapter 4


chapter 5


Chapter 6


Chapter 7


Chapter 8


Chapter 9


chapter 10




chapter 11 part b


chapter 12

chapter 13
Edited by -TIARA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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R
unres

ohh my..
Tht was amzng yaar..
So intrstng nd awesome start..

Baby..
I must say u succeed to create the suspense nd intrst through ur words..

James is non other than asad ?
Tho James kyon :/

ohh my poor baby..
Who was tht bas**d..

Acha hua ki thy ddnt rapped her..
But kyon..

Aaahh asad k attitude ne tho maardali..

Nazma dctr hai..
Nc..
So dillu entry nxt prt mein..

Liked nikhat's part..

Jst updt nxt prt soon..

I LOVED IT..
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my my! Continue soonish!
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Tujhe tho main baad mein dekhloongi...
Abhi kaam hai..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing story tia...
wt happened to zoya...
kisne kiya ye sb...
asad= james... ooh la la...
i wanna kno soonish k hua kya hai...
continue jaldi jaldi tia...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Get well soon tiara !!!
and ya this is a great one
so continuee 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

oh my my! Continue soonish!

thabks ankita šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: treasure11

Get well soon tiara !!!

and ya this is a great one
so continuee😳

thanks aishwarya 😳
Yeah its hurting few days more no updates from my side sorry. This story is already saved ao can put it as and when you all demands 😳 šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Tujhe tho main baad mein dekhloongi...
Abhi kaam hai..


me too vd u for this war against keeping us unknown...

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