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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: IPK007
The next phase of the story, which will based in Cleveland, will deal with all these issues.

At the same traffic stop and a bit of car tag pls ?

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Kishmish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

It was heartbreaking to read how Aarav lost his life ...

A marriage based on deceit and lies cannot last long ...

Lavanya in her desperation made a mess of her as well as Arnav's life and in the

bargain made a little soul suffer along with them ...

The worst thing for a child is to see his/her parents scraping all the time ... 😒

and that too in front of him/her ...

It was good to see that Astha and Arnav finally sorted out their differences if only for a

while ... Astha has to realise that Arnav is a mature grown up man and has a right to sort

out the mess in his life without his mother trying to interfere ... and specially without

knowing the whole truth behind their marriage ...

But every cloud has a silver lining and the silver lining for Arnav is Khushi ...

am so happy that he shared his grief with Khushi ...

he needs all the emotional support that he can get at this time ...

And the moonlit Saffron Fields seem like a dream ... have been many times to Srinagar

but unfortunately never had the privilege to see a fully blooming Saffron fields ...

Beautiful update ... though I see real turbulent times ahead with Lavanya being so negative

regarding the divorce ...

Thank you Jenny ...

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aashi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

woww jenny wonderful n emotional upd u penned down whole upd superbly 👏👏 so finally past revealed , i felt so bad for arnav destiny played cruel game with him but i loved how he showered his love to aarav , so finally soul connected n khushi expressed her feelings , do upd soon

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lala rukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

jenny ..the note is awesome...well i know time is a great healer ...we being human...we r made like this ..we keep moving on...we cant stay still with grief ...change is the only thing which is constant...so its a natural process as u mentioned different stages ...varies from person to person...and we do come out of grief thats natural healing procedure...no one can laugh for ever or cry forever...

lav is not only in grief but she is also under mayb sub concious guilt /anger and much much more ...seeing her past lies and current mental stage...she is going to suffer longer...

i am happy u showing arnav coming back from that stage...i know khushi is that anchor of support for him...and its true mayb he is going to have infinity numbers of baby in future...but aarav is going to remain as aarav in his life as every one is having there own worth no matter how many comes or go ...

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Ananya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Also, beautiful note.

And did I tell you that the quote by Rumi you chose for the chapter is my favourite? And how appropriate was it for the chapter! I love it when titles makes so much sense..

Obviously I commented in a hurry on chapter 13.. I wanted to say so much more :D

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ravalisharma06

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Posted: 11 years ago

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awesome update...

emtional one!!

feelin bad for arnav!!...:(

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Hi Jenny !!!

Today as I write this I feel I am short of words... I got the superb description of the beautiful saffron fields and the ambience after a long time in this story.. but it was worth it !!

This update was again very high on emotions... With a lot of facts coming to the forefront, the bits and pieces of Arnav's indifferent attitude in the begining, his hatred towards Lavanya, his deep hurt ful eyes,his stern dissaproval to try for his marriage,his misery,everything fell into place... Lavanya in this story is out an out a b*tch !!Though her mania to get Arnav by hook or by crook was fathomable...

Khushi and Arnav finally found the release that both of them were looking for... For a man like who hardly shares, taking a detour to his most abhorred nightmare and breaking down on her shoulders made me gulp hard... Its so truly said that some griefs can never be lessened by sharing coz they weigh you down till your last breathe and you keeping thinking "if only I could..."

I can well believe the comfort Arnav must have felt when Khushi professed her love for him... To him it was a lost battle but with her declaration the flicker of hope soared high !!! The sense of liberation from all the sorrows...

Aahhh Jen... Now I feel light too that atleast if nothing else, they can find solace in each other... Make peace with lives, past and agony... Its like getting support to look upto when you know your drowning in inevitable... relief !!!!

Hopefully the sheer romantic in Jenny will see its wake now !! 😃

Love you loads...

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spg1970

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful update...now everything is out in the open and Khushi has confessed her love as well to Arnav. Can wait to read on...you are a brilliant writer...the way you portrayed the emotional turmoil both Arnav and Khushi are going through was so beautiful. Beautiful story.