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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Khushi is being completely human when she wishes that Lavanya turns out to be a selfish b---h who doesn't deserve Arnav's love. Be honest now, haven't we ourselves sometimes wished that about a girl who holds the attention of the man we ourselves want?😉

I love that Khushi is now trying to put Astha at ease over the whole situation. Not only is she being the perfect guest, not revealing her own distress to her host, but she is also helping a lonely, elderly lady forget her own troubles, at least for a little while.

And now she finds that not only is Arnav married, but he also has a child. That complicates the whole issue further, doesn't it?

Yet, from Lavanya's reaction at the end of the chapter it seems as if that child, Arav, is not with them anymore. Is that the reason for Arnav's melancholy?

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Nice update
Feeling so sorry for khushi though she is so confused n now she's thinking of herself as a rebound girl ... No way poor lassie is suffering so much now because of all of this
She has nothing to feel guilty about Arnav had planned this separation long b4 he met her
Take it Arnav son died????? Did Lav have some sort of breakdown???
If so though what happened between them to make Arnav hate her so n for her to want to see him suffer although can tell she still wants to be with him
Anyways looking forward to next update
Hope Arnav puts khushi guilt at rest n makes her rethink the whole rebound girl
Thanks for pm n plz keep em comin my way

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aayt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

khushi was struggling to come in terms that Arnav is married now another shock she got he has a kid with his wife she imagined lavanya the way anyone'd being in love evil b**** and what not

but found her quite opposite in her pics the pain confusion lot of emotions going through her mind

from the last update I guessed the kid is no more n la tricked him in this marriage one sided love kind of I think

lavayna is going through therapy their is something wrong with her

teaser was awesome

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aashi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

Originally posted by: amv63
Khushi is being completely human when she wishes that Lavanya turns out to be a selfish b---h who doesn't deserve Arnav's love. Be honest now, haven't we ourselves sometimes wished that about a girl who holds the attention of the man we ourselves want?😉
I love that Khushi is now trying to put Astha at ease over the whole situation. Not only is she being the perfect guest, not revealing her own distress to her host, but she is also helping a lonely, elderly lady forget her own troubles, at least for a little while.

And now she finds that not only is Arnav married, but he also has a child. That complicates the whole issue further, doesn't it?
Yet, from Lavanya's reaction at the end of the chapter it seems as if that child, Arav, is not with them anymore. Is that the reason for Arnav's melancholy?

@ bold can't agree more , even i think thats reason behind divorce n his sorrow , i guess it will be revealed soon as he will be back

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Veena..

@Veena..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Hey jenny read ur chapter 10 & 11 this weekend, they are just awesome and mind blowing 👏👏👏

Love arshi and u r the superb and no 1 writer for this couple 👍🏼

Lovely updates of a perfect writer 😉

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ayushma

@aycma98

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Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Hmm.. it was not what I was expecting, to be honest. Completely different than what I had pictured Arnav and Lavanya's life to be. I was under the belief that Lavanya and Arnav were married only for a little while. But to see that they had a child, shows a different picture. Maybe the differences started somewhere along with the child's fate? I don't see Aarav in the picture, so maybe he died too early? Was Lavanya to be blamed, so that's why Arnav left her?

Lavanya still loves Arnav, doesn't she? SHe is still crying for Arnav, and is acting stubborn to give divorce. She is fighting a battle within herself.

I don't have the clear picture of Arnav's past, so I can't comment on it. However, from what I see, he is blaming Lavanya for the broken relationship, is there a truth to it? I really hope he is not in the rebound phase with Khushi. And I think Khushi deserves enough respect, that if he wants to pursue a relationship with her, he needs to be divorced and completely free.

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

Jenny,

I am loving this story. I like it because it's a very sensitive plot and the emotions are intense and convoluted. The best thing is the way you are balancing all the characters, I don't want to judge anyone of them, including Lavanya. I can see everybody's point of view.

Regarding the update, the first thing that comes to my mind is, how is Arav doing and where is he? I don't care if he is Arnav's son or not but all that matters is that Arnav and Lavanya are his parents and when parents get separated it's the child(ren) that get affected the most. Or is he is the reason they were married and separating too?

You wrote Khushi's conflicting and muddled thoughts very well. The highlight was when she thinks of Lavanya being a horrible person and then immediately feeling guilty to have thought like that. It shows how clean hearted, honest and selfless she is. A maelstrom of emotions has hit Khushi. She is in love with Arnav, she is guilty to have fallen in love with him, her heart yearns for Arnav, and she wants to move on yet, thinks of their dream. The more she finds out about Arnav the more she gets hurt. And to make things more complicated she is not only thinking about her own heartbreak but Arnav's pain too. She is over thinking and alas, has nowhere to go.

I like Astha. She may not understand Arnav or support him and might have overstepped on them but she was doing her best to make things don't get ugly for any of them. I am glad she isn't giving Khushi the cold shoulder. She isn't resenting Khushi and doing her best to make Khushi comfortable. That's very mature of her.

About Lavanya, her life is definitely a mess and she is a loner. She doesn't want to let Arnav go and he is probably her only hope to resurrect her life. And I don't blame her.