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amita

@star_fan1

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Brilliant and superb update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know that Khushi will not do anything immoral she is doing great job but even suffering too much

She had taken such a bold decision to protract other women who had no other option to get in this job

After happening to much between them Khushi went to hospital to see him after getting accident news

And Arnav after knowing that Khushi visited him that night after all this he give her space and again think about his decision

He is having all news of her where about and her safety

After two month of separation they still love each other too much that they cant able to hate other

Khushi remember him when she got news of her pregnancy and want him to her strength

And Arnav's care for her seeing her violent marks was so sweet

Loved Arnav and Khuhsi's conformation

Everything was superb Arnav's restlessness' his care for Khushi, Khuhsi's anger, her wish to tell him he going to father every emotion was really mind blowing

I think prologue part will be eye opener for them

As some talk of Khushi in this update and some talk of prologue will make Arnav think about all thing from beginning

And also Khushi will think Arnav never lied to her then why he will denied child to be his

May be this situation give both of them new ray of hope to get the truth out

When Khushi come to know the truth that Arnav is not the father of her child she will be shattered like Arnav

Hope first Arnav know the truth so that he can help Khushi to out of this shock and not let her shattered

Thanks for giving us such a beautiful and wonderful update

Eagerly waiting for next update as it will be prologue 1

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Amazing updt deepti realy lov this strong khushi your evry updt is always unpredictable cant wait for promo 1 thanx for pm

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#113

deepthiya what to say,while reading at thereading and the last chapter i was fearing that khushi will choose prostitution..but it seems so she is blackmailing those rich n sick people

i want khushi to take vengence coz for her she is innocent n my god she is but if she had chosen prostition then i would have lost respect for tht character.

i am all against a woman selling her body for money,tht my point of view

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Meghipk

@Meghipk

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#114

It is one of the most amazing and a different story I have read in this forum ... I started reading it late night and dint sleep at all and finished reading 28 chapters now

Prologe1 - what a prologue it was .. just amazing , the proluge got me hooked

Prologue 2 - shows what an amazing writer you are .. I read that more than 2 times

The characterization of Arnav and Khushi is amazing . khushi is one hell of a strong character ...i love how u portray both Arnav and khushi ...

Arnav is all heartbroken but still he loves her ...What khushi is doing she deserve applause ... I hope both comes to know the truth soon ...waiting for the next update ...

Edited by Meghipk - 11 years ago

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meinfrau14

@meinfrau14

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#115

another emotional update ...awesome !

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#116

just another wonderful update

lost their life's under cruelty of an unwanted man which nothing to him but in real also someone has to pay for someones cruelty

thanks for pm

waiting for next update

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Lavanya

@lav.0301

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#117

please yar...this is so heart wrenching...atleast make any1 realise d truth if not both...i m jst crying while reading...so hearttouching...

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#118

another fantastic update and i loved the way things are shaping up. its not a pretty scene but still they have both tried to move on in their way. i think the most emotional part for me is the part where the apartment was burnt down. it felt likealong with the house, even their dreams for a happy future was being reduced to ashes, this was their home, the place which has witnessed their love blooming, the place where they had connected on an emotional level and now to know that their love nest is no more, is so saddening.

loved ur note at the start deepti, u always know wat to say and i like ur open views. for me if a woman decides to become a prostitute then it may be for a certain reason and they should not be judged because of wat they are doing, because i know many of them are doing this so that they can feed their children back home or help their parents! being a prostitute doesnt make them any less human and they should be respected as any human being on this earth

2 months is not enough for them to mask their feelings and seeing each other face to face must have been like drop of water to a thirsty man. they may be both angry at each other but they cant help their heart from beating erratically when they saw the person who has become the essence of the lives (something neither will be acknowledging in the near future). if only khushi replied back to arnav, maybe he would have known that she was drugged in thinking that it was him on that fateful night. n it made me cry to think of arnav on that hospital bed looking lifeless and khushi just outside the ward but still not being able to go in and comfort him.

looks like my intuition was right, there is a baby on the way. now i dunno how to feel, i mean its a big thing for a woman to be pregnant but in these situations its complicated, the baby is innocent and deserve to come in this world but is it worth living this life knowing at every step that he is the result of his father being a beast. n i think it might be too late for an abortion.

wondering wat will happen to those two angels who are still waiting for their bhaiya and didi to come and visit them and to have another memorable day as they had months ago. if only they knew that this may never happen again, their didi and bhaiya may never come to see them together. feel so bad for them.

one good thing that arnav is back in the house where he deserved to be among the ladies who really care for him even if the younger one has still a long way to make her place in his heart. i would love to know how things are between arnav and anjali. n im super excited to know wat khushi is doing with all this money. mind blowing update deepti and its kind of nice not to cry after reading this update.

deepti left u a comment for the previous chapter on thread 4, hope u still checking the previous thread. take care

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payal

@ps_rocks

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#119

again an awesome update👏 but i m feeling more bad 4 arnav,don't know why???😭 i wanted that baby to be arhi's first child after reading ur prolouge,but what can i say abt destiny😔